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This book is generally OK. Although there are some minor flaws... But the author has started to write better and better, well, I look forward to the future... Occasionally a few chapters are a little bit toxic, which is normal. After all, everyone has their own opinions. Just ignore them. As long as they don't affect the main line, it's a small branch and it's not worth mentioning.

It's good, but I have a small question, how can the heroine be so skilled? Is this a foreshadowing? I thought it was quite sweet, but then I suddenly thought about why the heroine has such sophisticated techniques, and I think it's quite scary to think about it, so I wanted to ask if the heroine has other emotional lines [shy]

It's the first time I've seen a heroine who doesn't look amazing, I feel good

The love between the male and female protagonists is quite good. I hope the male protagonist will become more and more awesome. How can I say that he also uses a sword? It's too weak. It's not good. How long can it take to fight across levels? I really like single female protagonists. So Orphans Have Your Back, this book is very good.

It looks good, I suggest you send more sweets [blowing kisses]

Yes, it would be even better if it could be updated ten times a day [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts], and can the author write about his inner demons? I'm curious, don't wait until the end to tell me that all this is fake. In fact, the protagonist is still going through the golden elixir tribulation [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Not bad, not bad, I like it very much [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

A small five-star, no respect.

It's still good, come on

Okay, okay, good, good.

It's very well written, a breath of fresh air among system flow novels, come on, come on.

It looks great. Why is the tie so low?

Five-star praise! It's really, really beautiful! ! ! I hope the author will keep up the good work and never abandon the book! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's great, I loved reading it, and I spent the entire afternoon catching up from the beginning to the latest chapter. Big cheers to the author! ! !

Give you a five-star rating

Come on, come on, it's not bad so far

Um, how should I put it, henpecked people are quite real, I haven't seen much of them, uh, it's okay.

How should I put it? Other novels describe too much of the protagonist's inner activities and it looks like the protagonist's monologue. This one is too little, and you can't feel the protagonist's inner psychological changes.

Not bad, but sometimes the timeline jumps a little too fast

It ranks among the top ten books I have read.

I was just a silly and aggrieved little duck before, but I got a lot better after being free.

It's just right to take your time and not take your time

This book is quite to my liking

What happens next? . . . .

Come on, author, don't abandon the book

It's pretty good, but it starts to get stiff in the back.

The adopted daughter of this article is also top-notch.

Not bad, but there is still a problem with the emotional line

It's really well written, and it's to my liking [blowing kiss]

Why is it that every time before [laughing evilly], there is a Pei Yuan Dan with this meaning? What does the Pei Yuan Dan do?