Book Transmigration: The Evil Captain of the Valkyrie

It looks good, but I feel that the combat power is a bit low. Now the protagonist is equipped with SSS equipment, and the fire element is his crew. He can be allocated 100% of the fire element, and then it will be crushed. I feel like there can be a pair of Valkyries like Lilia and Rosalia [smile][smile][smile], and a Valkyrie like Rita with full maid attributes.

Author, the protagonist can even drive a spaceship, but you can't even drive a car. Should you consider getting a driver's license?

The poisonous point is that in Death Canyon, the Western people were described as very hateful, but because it was a virtual world, killing them was equivalent to not killing them. But when the protagonist had almost killed all the Western people, a person came and invaded the virtual world. He didn't come sooner or later, but those people in the West were safe. Later, because after the intruder came, people in the virtual world who died were really dead. I don't understand why the author wrote this. Maybe it was because of the admiration for foreigners.

Familiar style 😏

The article is cool enough, five stars. The emotional line is confusing, the protagonist's aura is too heavy, the heroine is too frivolous, there are micro poisonous points, and 0.5 Stars are deducted. The protagonist keeps referring to the female team members as chicks. It's okay if you're not familiar with them at first. If you continue to call them that way after you become familiar with them, it will only make the protagonist appear to be a gangster. A cool article does not mean that the protagonist must be a gangster. A medium-sized poisonous point will deduct one star. In the middle, at the beginning, the person who wanted to take his wife's turn was spared. Whether he could kill him or not was considered irrelevant. Later, he only killed the person who wanted to die. He had a huge poison point and deducted 1 and 5 stars.

The male protagonist mentioned earlier is like a taker, and the plot is very long, and the plot is too weak. He wants to have a harem and is doing Tai Chi.

The harem doesn't even dare to act like a villain, is it just to see how you suppress men?

He's not a villain, he's just an anti-hero. He's good at writing cool stories. He has many girls in the harem. I'm currently recommending one.

The content of the book is good. I don't know whether the author has limited ability or is unable to write well or is too lazy to write, which led to the discontinuation of this book. The author still has time to update the new book. It is thought-provoking!

Changed the name to a bedtime story about a female character who met me once and gave me a free bedtime story. How about the author? It's more appropriate. It's much better than your erroneous story, isn't it?