Thanks for the Invite! I’m Editing Videos in a Chat Group

It is suggested that the author should change it. The author should focus on the discussion between the characters rather than the description of the original work. The two should be intertwined with each other. After all, which of the book friends who clicked in has not read the original work? It is recommended that this novel be written specifically as a novel about the pirate Naruto or a book about using his abilities in another world. Otherwise it would be too messy

Except for a bit too much nonsense, everything else is okay. I just don't understand why there are so many settings?

Writing the plot of the main world is a failure, because the plot of the main world is too exaggerated and jumps away directly. The video editing is terrible. Naruto World does not cut the past first, then cuts the future and then cuts the voice. You think you are watching anime and add memories. In reality, if you edit the Naruto plot like this, it will be incoherent. You may think some people can't see it.

It's a bit long in some places, and the plot in the main world is not interesting (in my opinion)

It's okay. There's too much written about war, but it's not okay. For such a long story, I recommend that you just roughly write down the key points.

Sure enough, I shouldn't have watched "The video clip contains pig's feet". Minus the original book, and in the world of rewards, the original content of this book does not exceed 10 chapters 🤦

The writing is okay, keep up the good work.

Edited on top of war videos, wrote 21 chapters, 6

When I read Chapter 22, there was too much nonsense. At least three of Chapter 22 were unnecessary nonsense.

@ Love it, love it, update soon! Author, super funny, loved, want to keep watching, I hope the author can update quickly.