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Author, if you keep at it, it will definitely become popular later.

It's pretty good, but it just makes me feel uncomfortable and aggrieved [face covering] [face covering]

The language of this transformation novel is fluent, relatively relaxed and natural, and the tone of the article is also very relaxed and humorous. As a debut novel, it is still very successful. If you can persist, there will definitely be more readers. Come on!

A bit pretty. But I hope the author makes the protagonist a female

I hope the author can continue to update. As long as he keeps updating, I will always support him. After cultivating immortality and establishing the foundation, you shouldn't need to eat. If not, there are also Bigu Pills. Eating food will cause impurities in the body. Okay, this article about cultivating immortals is a bit special. The protagonist doesn't need to practice on his own.

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It is still very good, although it is said to be hastily finished, and there is a character hole that was not filled in at the beginning. The pace is relatively fast, and the level is also improved very quickly. It is slightly invincible, but I read the last one. It is also a fast-paced book with more than 100 chapters, which is normal. There is also a city interspersed in the middle of the book, and there are a lot of stickers (it may be a bit confusing, like the identity of some characters. It is not known because it is finished, but as a stream of stickers + rapid upgrades, it feels more comfortable than the short story I read last time). In summary, the early stage is good, but there may be a little unclear in the middle. After returning to the main line, it gets better, and then the ending

Come on, although the rating is a bit low, why is it so low? It is good-looking.

Very beautiful, very exciting [take a closer look]

So in the future the heroine will be the queen of thousands of females in the harem or something [laughing evilly]

Five stars are given to encourage you [laughing evilly] [like]

This is not much of the whole picture

Really recommend, very good

Just because of what happened to this boy Ye Chenyu, I have to give the author five stars [Thoughts]

Not bad, but some details were not handled well.

It's fascinating, I feel like it will be exciting later on

It's very interesting. Keep up the good work, the author, and give us more surprises [Like]

It's pretty, but too short! Why is it so written that the ancient magic dragon disappears. Should add more! When will the author's sequel be released? I really want to see it!

Come on, keep an eye on you

Looks good, I like it very much

Very beautiful and worth recommending.

I heard that this is the author's final work, so I'd like to give it five stars [crying]

[Shy] I just like to see these

Give it good reviews, the plot is good Haha, not bad, the plot won my heart ❤️

Why are there so few ratings?

It's really pretty

Very consistent with my XP. It's just that the author is too short

It's actually pretty good, but I didn't see Ye Chenyu confirming his relationship with the protagonist, which is a bit of a pity. I quite like such a character.

Personally I think it's okay, but some people may not be used to it.

Good looking, come on author