(No system, not invincible, single heroine) (PS: It's not a cool article! It's not a cool article! It's not a cool article! I'll say the important things three times. I just want to write the story I want, so the plot rhythm will be slower!)
After a fire, Huang Xiao traveled to the world of "Dragon Ball" and came to an ordinary planet. On this planet, Huang Xiao had the family love that he had dreamed of before. However, a disaster soon tore Huang Xiao's gentle hometown to pieces.
Forced to embark on the process of searching for the Dragon Balls, Huang Xiao gradually discovered that the entire world seemed to be starting to deviate from the original track: the black mist that could resurrect people from the dead, Frieza and his son who appeared on the earth together, and two twin brothers with super powers.
Reader comments
This is my first time writing a book, please be gentle if I don't write well [crying]
The author has a good mind
This is the only Dragon Ball fanfic you wrote that I can read closely.
The main character is too weak, right?
Looks good, come on [send heart]
Too rubbish [eating melon]
The plot is okay, the characters are good, but the emotional line is not that good. That's not to say it's not good, it's just that such an emotional line in Dragon Ball is a bit out of place. I'm referring to the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, not others. It depends on the situation in the future, and the timeline passes too fast, and there is no fun in training. This will only make people feel that the strength is a sudden surge. Five stars are for the single female lead.
It's well written, and it's considered top-notch among the second-generation works I've read in the past few years.
This is my first time writing a book, please be gentle if I don't write well [crying]
The author has a good mind
This is the only Dragon Ball fanfic you wrote that I can read closely.
The main character is too weak, right?
Looks good, come on [send heart]
Too rubbish [eating melon]
The plot is okay, the characters are good, but the emotional line is not that good. That's not to say it's not good, it's just that such an emotional line in Dragon Ball is a bit out of place. I'm referring to the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, not others. It depends on the situation in the future, and the timeline passes too fast, and there is no fun in training. This will only make people feel that the strength is a sudden surge. Five stars are for the single female lead.
It's well written, and it's considered top-notch among the second-generation works I've read in the past few years.
Making your own is more nerve-wracking