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Babies who have read the book can leave your comments and support if you like it. This book is not a eunuch, because the author also has a serious job and only takes time to update it after get off work. Although there are not many updates, he tries his best to ensure that it is updated continuously. This book is not written for profit, I just have a dream to be a writer and write some stories that I like~

Although it doesn't reach the climax of the story, it's the most beautiful transformation story I've seen on Tomato, and it suits my taste. Good looking. . . . . .

The writing is very good, I hope the protagonist can stay single forever

I think it's very good. Long Aotian is cool and cool, which is in line with what I like. The plot is also very good. I like it very much and hope to continue it to the end. I also want to maintain the quality and efficiency, but the author is not an old author who has written many novels. It's understandable if you can't, but I hope I can do it. I don't insist that I can do it. I hope that the author's book will be rich in content and efficient, so that many people can read this book. I also hope that the author can make this book a big success [laughing][laughing][laughing].

Perfect, update soon Come on then, you, the author [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Enjoy it carefully ]

It's well written. I hope the author won't stop updating. Every novel I encounter always stops updating. It's best for the author to keep the manuscript.

I have read a lot of transformation novels, and it is really rare to find this type of transformation novel. It is so in line with my taste. I have read many good-looking transformation novels in the past, but they were either discontinued or unfinished. There are also a large part of the transformation novels that sell sheep over others. The plot is as tasteless as boiled water, but it is a pity to abandon it. Thank you to the author for his great efforts! Keep up the good work! I will reward you, and I hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued.

First of all, I highly recommend this book. It is very delicate and the writing is very good. The writing style of describing the heroine is very engaging. It is really a thoughtful book. In addition, let's talk about some shortcomings: the content of the first story is very exciting, but it lacks the ending explanation. What happened to the Lin family in the end? Is the first male protagonist dead or alive? The specific reason for the betrayal of the second son of the Lin family? Instead of killing for the sake of formation, what can he get after killing? Another suggestion is to add more slaps in the face, so that the protagonist can take the initiative to turn the tide and let others know about it. Many of the previous scenes are silently handled that others don't know, and there can be more emotional interaction with the male protagonist. The kind where the male protagonist likes the female protagonist because of various misunderstandings, such as the time when the female protagonist helped Lin Xian slap the girl in the face who broke off the engagement. He playfully gave Lin Xian a bunch of meatballs. The scene was really beautiful and fit the setting of slap in the face. It looked like the sweetness of love and the refreshing feeling of green tea slap in the face.

It's quite good, and the writing is smooth. If you ask me, the author shouldn't worry too much. He can write whatever he wants, whether it's about combat or daily life. The readership community is like a radish, everyone has their own preferences, and it is impossible to satisfy everyone's preferences. Therefore, according to your own ideas and writing according to your heart, it will be smooth, natural and fascinating. At most, in some plots that may cause controversy, just use () to explain them. Oops, there are always people behind many plots who are obsessed with the defense between men and women and have a grudge against them. It's completely unnecessary. I think it's just a natural emotion and there's no need to worry about it.

Come on, it's the plot I like, or the sentence that says you can have suitors, you can't change your marriage, and you can't like a man like this, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch.

The author is great, to be honest, I kind of want to read the article about changing marriage, [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

I can accept this novel about transforming into an immortal. Of course, I can meet some male supporting characters by chance. This way the plot will be richer, but I hope I won't change my mind and get married. After all, even if you become a woman but your soul is still a man, there will always be some barriers in your heart. Another 5-star review is given👍👍

It feels like reading early fairy novels. It's very nice. The story frame is very good. It stands out in a place like Tomato where there are so many novels in the pipeline. The characters have too few charms and are not distinctive enough. They are not boring and boring characters like most tomato novels, but they are also unremarkable. The only thing that makes me interesting is the character of Lin Yang. I really don't understand the role of the protagonist. I hope it is not the most aloof type on Tomato, because it is too boring.

For me, if this book wasn't about marriage, I wouldn't read it.

I felt pretty good after watching it (ᕑᗢᓫ∗). It's quite good. I don't know why there are so many negative comments🙁

This is great. I finally found the book I want to read. As long as I want to continue writing like this, as long as it keeps updating, I will keep chasing it. No, I just found a book I like to read and stopped reading [crying]

It's very interesting. It saved my book drought. The writing is also good. I'm addicted to reading it. I'm looking forward to the follow-up articles. I really like it. If you like to read about male-to-female and cool articles, this book is really good. I read it at night from 11 o'clock to what time in the morning. I really can't get enough. I hope the author will update more.

Oops, not bad; the character of the protagonist suits my taste very well [Thinking]

Pay attention to the distance between the protagonist and the man. Are you single? Of course, ambiguity is acceptable.

It looks okay so far, I just hope there won't be those who deliberately act ugly, writing like that feels very toxic.

Author, please change the introduction, otherwise no one will [go crazy] What kind of writing is it?

Not bad, just very short

I hope you can change your laziness. I really like this novel. It would be best if you can change your marriage. Come on, baby.

The author should update quickly. Such a beautiful book cannot be updated\(//∇//)\

Wow, my family, who knows? I have been reading this book since I opened Tomato Novels. It's really good. I really like Liu Han. Wow, forgive me for my lack of language. I don't know how to describe my feelings. I can only say that the author is so awesome. He has written the novel that I want to read. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] It's a pity that there are too few. I look forward to a great follow-up [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's really good, the character creation is okay, and the content and plot are okay. It's much better than most transformation stories. I hope the author can continue to write like this in the future, follow his heart, and don't care about readers' bad comments. It's quite good.

Nice wish list, don't want hundreds of marriages

It feels pretty good, I'll give it a try. As long as you don't get married, anything can be said.

It looks good, I hope it keeps going

I like this novel very much [Adoration]