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It's a very nice book. It's the most comfortable anti-travel novel so far. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. Author, won't you update it more? [Almost crying] In fact, from the beginning of the author's book, the introduction of the book, the author's avatar, and the author's remarks some time ago, we can see that the author wanted to open a harem at the beginning, but he did not expect that Ayaka's part was very well written, so he directly turned against the guest [face covering] In a way, the author's grasp of the details is very good [like]

Judging from the current books, this one is simply a good book among good books [laughing] The author must not stop updating

A very good fanfic that suits my taste. Kudos to the author!

I think this is probably the best Genshin Impact double-traveling article written on Tomato. The others either have poor writing and plot, or they imitate the book from 3000 years ago. The key is that the imitation is not perfect and makes people uncomfortable to read. This one is very well written. The more toxic parts are the bus, kendo club and snowy mountains. The Teyvat chapter may be because of the foreshadowing in the plot. It feels quite ordinary and not as good as the reality chapter. Come on, author, and ignore some trolls [blowing kisses]

It's really beautiful. Although I don't like the slap in the face a bit, it's pretty good. I just want to ask a question! One or two updates a day is enough for anyone to watch! ! ! [Make a face][make a face][make a face]

How come no one has read this book [thinking], it's obviously well written, but after reading it, I started to wonder if I had even commented on it [awkward laugh] Let's give a brief review. These are the two most comfortable back-to-back books I've read so far (the other one is the one about Little Grass God). Of course, I can't rule out the possibility that it's because I am an Ayaka Party member. I have a good grasp of the characters (for a newcomer), but there are not enough highlights in the plot. To sum up, it's a good book [like], and it's worthy of being used as a replacement for the book shortage, so I give it five stars [OK]

After reading it for a long time, I feel that it is indeed a good-looking book, but there are relatively few plots in the game, but I personally prefer to read real-life plots [laughs] Come on, author, just stop being a pig.

Seeing now, I find that I like this novel more and more, and it satisfies my fantasies about love [laughs] Well, the sweeter the novel, the better [laughs] (I like it anyway) Big boost to the author! (Don't stop updating!!) @ Awn shoe bamboo stick

The author's writing is really unflattering. The relationship between the protagonist and Ayaka develops step by step and is described in detail. It is one of the few masterpieces that I can endure and read slowly. The writing style is also very good and there is no particularly awkward text like some novels. I have never played Genshin Impact before, so I don't know some of the plots and characters, but from Dada's words, I saw a flesh-and-blood Ayaka. I sincerely hope that Dada will continue writing, don't care about what some people think, and insist on being yourself. Come on, author Dada! Five stars presented.

How to say it? There is a paragraph before that is really cool, but it does not hinder the excellence of the whole book. Life in this world seems really sweet. Although there may be some minor flaws, it does not hinder my experience. You can try to invite a character to come regularly, but not too many. Just connect the present world and the original god together without overturning!

A very good book, written very warmly. I left Yixin because you were slow to update.

I feel that Ayaka's writing in this book is very real, and it satisfies my imagination of Ayaka's time traveling through reality. We rough people don't say too many nice things, but it's pretty good anyway (✪▽✪)[shy][shy]

The character setting and logic are fairly non-toxic, and it is one of the more carefully written books among second-generation fan fiction. But the author can think about the world view, setting, or main outline of the entire book early.

The writing of this book is really the same as some other three-sentence xp, but it is different from the bad works that make bad jokes. I think this book can be described as otherworldly. Ayaka's part is really wonderful, the descriptions are delicate and moving (in any case, I cried), and the plot is also lively and interesting. The language style is simple, but not "no flashy", giving people a natural and rural flavor (I am also from Chongqing, and I still know a little bit about the place where the author writes, it is really real) It's really good, just a little short, but I won't rush for more updates. I like the author's method of writing every chapter to perfection. Of course, if the author has the spare capacity, he should add more (don't lose quality), so more people will definitely read them. Come on!

To be honest, this book is really good except for the female classmate plot. But I see that there are more than 100 pictures now, and there is only one poisonous point. The others are all very heart-warming daily articles, and they also include plots about the continent of Teyvat. Compared with other authors, this one is really well written. Netizens with high poison resistance can give it a try. Here is a warning. The blocking point is about 20 to 30 pictures, or you can choose to skip reading.

New writing methods, new ideas, good writing style, support, don't give up, stick to the author [salute]

After reading Chapter 124, it seems that it should be a single female protagonist. The interaction between Ling Hua and the protagonist is described in great detail, which is very interesting. The setting of wearing both Teyvat and the real world is also quite interesting, but there is a lot of socializing in the real world, meeting parents, relatives and friends, attending class reunions and showing off in various ways with Ling Hua in the real world. I am a little tired of watching the social fear, and it reminds me of all kinds of social interactions in reality... Overall, it looks good.

It is a very good novel, with a wonderful plot and clear logic. However, the game plot is too little, but it is very suitable for my taste. I think it is quite sweet. Of course, it would be better if the author updates it faster. Of course, I must clarify that I am not Ayaka Kamisato's dog, I am just impressed by her (of course I am referring to her character, please don't think wrongly)

The writing is good, the writing style has an everyday casual feel, and the character of the protagonist is also very good. Especially when he told Ayaka that he could go back to Teywat, he didn't lie. Although he was reluctant to give up, he still told the truth. It was much better than those protagonists who lied to each other every day and still had an upright and noble character.

It's very good to watch, but I don't know why the rating is so low. The plot is wonderful.

Kamisato Ayaka's character design is great!

I was poisoned by some of the plots. In fact, the author's writing is not bad and the writing is fairly smooth. However, some scenes are very stiff, as if the author has not personally experienced them. Try to avoid them, or think carefully before writing. Overall, it's quite comfortable to watch. Good luck to the author.

It's quite good. I've mostly read this type of book before, which made me uncomfortable. (It's not that they can't write well, I can only say that everyone has their own love.) But this book really attracted me, and the emotional scenes are also very well written. Keep up the good work, author!

In the past, I read novels in which female characters traveled through reality, but I always gave up after a while. However, this one was refreshing to me. The author really put a lot of effort into handling the development of the plot. The whole writing is smooth and reasonable. I love it very much [Like]

The writing is very good, the characters are the most realistic and realistic I have ever seen, and the inner drama and expression of time travel are also well written. It's so sweet, it's endless fun, and even if it's not a derivative of fan fiction, it can still serve as a benchmark for sweet fiction. Moreover, the daily rhythm is soothing and just right, relaxing both body and mind. In my humble opinion, I think the male protagonist adapted a little too quickly when traveling through Teyvat. As for threatening Er Fengxing later, it seemed very unnatural. The way he acted was somewhat mature beyond his years. There is no need to portray a strong and almost perfect character. It would be better to have some real details, which will make it more immersive. Okay, okay, let's name it Guicai [eating melon] Find a good time to end it, it will start to drag on later

It's good, sweet, and enjoyable to watch. The development of the relationship between the two is also very reasonable. This is better than many books. The low scores given below are purely mindless comments. The author just randomly wrote a plot and used super powers to run rampant and domineering. He doesn't go to school. He really thinks that the protagonist has no father and mother, and is ruthless and gratuitous. Anyway, in my opinion, it's a really good book, and it's very worthy of five stars, so go for it.

It's a very good book. The author's writing is okay. To be honest, the plot changes are acceptable in my opinion (I don't know if other people can accept it. I just know that after reading this, I will become a Linghua fan from a casual fan)

The writing is okay. I took a look at the ratings and found that some people like it and some don't. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables, and you can't force it on others. But a score of 9 or above shows that many people still like it. Come on, author, I hope there will be less poisonous points and the writing and plot will be better [laughs]

The events are concise and interesting, and the content is vivid. I don't think it took long to read, but I have already read about fifty chapters. According to the updated word count, it is about 100,000 words. I don't really want to continue reading, because I am afraid that I will lose it after reading it. [Laughing awkwardly]

It's very nice. It's written by a little warm person from everyday life. It's Thai Bang Spicy.