Cultivation of Immortality: Start with Owning an Immortal Mansion

There is no heroine at the moment, and there is no Virgin to meddle in other people's business. I don't have the trouble of dragging oil bottles around, and I like a heroine who is not a virgin. Kill decisively. You can take a look. So far so good. Combat strength, etc. Are all relatively reasonable. Didn't collapse. It's okay to mention the unreasonable ones and the author will learn from them.

Yes, after the foundation is established, the plot becomes exciting. Don't write emotional dramas and focus on cultivating immortality. To cultivate immortality, you must destroy human desires and forget about emotions. Don't write emotional dramas, otherwise you will unfollow them.

Zifu's Zuowangjing and Xianfu, the mortal plot [face covering], four stars, if you have your own ideas, it is not impossible to give 5 stars, at least this book can still be read in Tomato

If you don't write about how the heroine can surpass Xian Ni and Han Lao Mo? Just lay out the emotional relationship in the early stage and don't overdo it in the later stage. Mortals are cultivators of the seven emotions and six desires, while cultivating immortals is about the original heart and self. Han Lao Mo (Wangyu) mastered the combination of mortals + cultivating harmonious immortals, so he became the originator of the mortal stream.

It can be the same as the paths of mortals. I like to see this kind of thing. There is no heroine. Can the author increase the protagonist's combat power a little? So that he can kill the mid-game at three levels in the early stage and run away at seven levels in the later stage. The protagonist is really a disaster star. Which force should I go to? Which force is not going well [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's not bad, keep up the good work, don't make it unfinished, pay attention to details, and make it reasonable. It's best to write thousands of chapters with a perfect ending.

The author's book is very beautiful. He strives to break the 20 million word mark. Don't always think about writing new books. One good book is enough. The map section of the spiritual world should be written in larger terms, for example, three thousand interfaces, three thousand realms, and three thousand continents. A continent can only be crossed by flying at full strength for ten thousand years and eliminating dangers. Problem-solving teleportation array, long-distance teleportation array, ancient teleportation array, secret continent teleportation array

Um! Well enough. At least the lines are clear and the foreshadowing is decent.

Brother, you fight a lot. It's so tiring to watch. I practice occasionally, sometimes practice elixirs, and sometimes practice secret techniques.

There are many interesting designs, but too many are cluttered. It's like practicing Qi and rebuilding after being poisoned. After writing it too many times, it gives people a very annoying feeling. After all, it is written for readers. Even if you don't repeat it so many times, it will feel good. It is as if you took a few days to rest after writing this and forgot to write it. Well written, keep it up!

I hope the writing is better than Zifu Xianyuan. I have read Zifu several times.

It looks okay, although there are some small flaws, but it doesn't affect

The protagonist's golden finger is very open. It looks very good. There are many battles and the writing is more detailed. Sometimes it is very slow and sometimes it develops very quickly. In the later period, the writing gets better and better. I really recommend it.

Very nice, I like it very much

Nice plot, don't stick with it

It's so beautiful, come on, author!

It's very well written, I hope the author can continue writing it

If you are short on books, you can come in and take a look. The author is still updating, and the content is still available.

Yes, there is finally a novel about cultivating immortality without inflation.

[Learned] This novel is good, and it is normal to have some minor flaws. No one is perfect. I have read almost 200 pictures and haven't found anything that offends an old bookworm like me. Five stars for me. Please read my usual comments.

The writing was quite good, why was it removed from the shelves?

The author gives you a five-star review and hopes that you won't finish it.

Let me dream back to the fairyland of Zifu, not bad, not bad

I think it's one of the few fine works among ordinary people's novels.

Come on, come on, come on

Let me count them, one, two, three, four, five,~~ gone? ?

[Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]I read the Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality again. This is it. . . . Wanglaomo is on his way to your house with a 41-meter long knife.

Very well written! And it's no exaggeration to say that the fight is over the top! Worth a look!

I have read a lot of novels written by mortals, and this one is very good now.

OK OK. Very good. Very nice