Become the Wife of Hei Shimo

Judging from the writing style alone, it can be seen that it is average, the rhythm is stiff and overly incoherent, but the title is novel, the plot and character creation are original. (Note, this is: Let's talk about it) This is a book, but it is just an ordinary book. Although there are high people and low people, this is also the case for this book. The writing is very good, and there are many things to note. Those who know and work hard will succeed. (There is an inverted sentence above) If you know your shortcomings, you can change them. Don't ignore your shortcomings because of your temporary achievements. I advise you, everyone, and I also advise myself. Come on!

Okay, this book is generally to my liking. Although the heroine is a bit outrageous in the middle, the overall trend is good. Maybe because the author is not familiar with this flashback technique, the article is a bit unsmooth, but it is okay. Anyway, I like this and the setting is quite novel. How can I put it this way? I still can't accept the plot at the beginning, which is the 8th life of Iwakatsu. Really, it's so uncomfortable to watch. He killed the heroine so many times, and even in the life when he turned into a sword, he used the heroine to block the knife. Although he knew that this was the behavior of an emotionless ghost, it was still uncomfortable. I hope the male protagonist can pursue his wife in the crematorium in the future. Anyway, she has to torture her, otherwise the female protagonist will be so wronged.

It's really good. In the novels about demon slayers that I read, the characters of Heishimou are either broken or the plots are greasy and bland, and the heroine's character is not outstanding. This book portrays Hei Shimo's original character vividly. I love it so much.

It's really good to read. For the first time, I thought my best friend's article was very good. But the author, you can't post more than a dozen pictures at a time🌚🌚. I can't get enough of them. But I still want to see the life when the heroine was the wife of Yan Sheng. Let's just torture him to death, this damn scumbag! If the author doesn't want to, just think I'm farting🌚🌚, it's mainly because it's not enjoyable to read

It was a bit confusing when I first started reading it, but as I continued reading the rest of the story. The previous events are connected one by one, and I have to say that the author's imaginative emotional lines and plot are very good. People in the game may not know about the Qi Ling part, but as spectators, they are aware of it. This book is not a story narrative in the traditional sense. It is more like a reversal, or more appropriately, a fragmented final summary. When we really get involved in the plot, you will really feel the charm of this article. I thought the same thing at first. Did he really not have any mood swings? The characters' struggle against fate, both lovers hope that the other can live well in a world without themselves, and all the clues point to an ending. Talking about my own thoughts, I think the ending will remain the same without changing the general outline of the article. But whether it is good or bad is what people think, so there is no need to say anything more. It's just like writing a composition or a novel, we only know the ending, or I just rely on two words "imagine" how I want to write it. The hand has its own ideas about how it should be written, right? In the final analysis, it is just his own tacit understanding. It must be five stars⭐,

Come on, author, you write well! But it's a bit missing, it's a new book to understand [Blowing Kisses]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the heroine is so miserable [crying] The most heartbreaking book I have ever read [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Don't make me kneel down and beg you to update it! It's so beautiful!

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Nice! Really, after reading the eighth panel, I guessed that there must be a knife behind it, so I skipped reading, but the interaction between the heroine and Iwakatsu in the later panels was really delicious! After reading it, I highly recommend it! ! ! Although I skipped reading and the ending was he, it still had a lot of stamina and made my heart swell. But it is undeniable that the author's writing style and empathy are really great. If you write "sugar", I will die, and if you write "knife", I will cry to death. Overall, it's a sweet story... But it's pretty sharp at the end. . . Recommended

It's a lie to say it's not cruel [crying], it's also a lie to say it's not sweet [face covering], one love lasts for a hundred years [love], it's really touching, the love that goes in both directions, although it's a fanfic, but the writing is really good [like] I really recommend this book, the author uses The delicate writing style takes the story of Hayori and Tsugumi Iwakatsu as the main line, and the flashback technique allows people to understand the truth of the incident step by step, and the true feelings in each world are really good (//∇//). In short, the writing is really great! ! !

It's very interesting. In order to read the chapter about the Twelve Ghost Months, I finished reading it with tears in my eyes. I cried so much that why did I want to read this chapter? Because in the Twelve Ghost Months, there is a story about Zaori and Hei Shimo, and I happen to be the kind of person who doesn't know them. I must get to know them. Anyway, it's very interesting, very interesting, very interesting!

It's really good to read! This is the most heart-wrenching book I've ever read [shy] and it has no OOC, and it's just the right amount of sugar. Even someone like me who doesn't read it when I'm not interested at all can't help but be attracted to read it [laughing]. I really recommend reading it, it's very good-looking!

It's really good to watch, you may be a little confused in the middle, but the plot is really novel. It's obviously HE, but I still want to cry [cry][cry][cry] I hope they can grow old together in another world until they die.

The author is short and concise, so danceable. 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I have read some fanfics, and the writing is generally very good at first, but there are a lot of them that are just like random writing in the middle and late stages, and the battle power is increased and then let go. To be honest, this is the best story I have read from beginning to end. The writing is very good, but it is a pity that the ending... Is also very good, at least not for me as a reader, but I still hope in my heart that the heroine has worked hard for so long to see her live a better life. I really cried to death [almost cried] [crying]

It's a very good article, but the flashbacks are a bit uncomfortable... I abandoned the article in the middle, skipped chapters, and I even wanted to send the author a razor blade at some points, but fortunately I still read it. This is a very good article, and the plot and emotional description are so good that people can relate to it. I can't wait to stab the author when I feel the same! It's very well written, don't write it again next time (not in a derogatory sense)

It's really beautiful! This narrative method is also very novel. Why is the score so low? I didn't discover this treasure until recently. It's really, really beautiful! ! ! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

This fanfic of the Demon Slayer series is one of the few I'm reading that doesn't have a character-breaking plot and a smooth plot! Not a hit at all, not a Mary Sue at all, very consistent with the original character image. I hope the author will keep up the good work. [Praise]

The transition between memories and reality is blunt, but my evaluation is that it is interesting, and at least the characters are not childish. I can't say whether the personalities of other Demon Slayer fans have changed, but it smells awkward. I really wanted to read it, but I deleted it a dozen times, such as the My Little Wife. This book can be read at a glance, and it is certainly pertinent.

Ahhhhh, what a masterpiece! ! ! Although it's a little messy inside, once you sort it out you'll find it's very beautiful! Especially the ending is really good [crying] One of the few books that made me cry many times [crying]

It was really the first book I followed on Tomato. I started reading it a long time ago. At that time, the cover and title had not changed yet. ^ω^ The author updated it twice a day. I read it every day after school when I got home. The theme is super novel, because this book is very novel. I think Hei Sheimou is pretty good. I love Zaowei very much. I have followed all the author's books. I loved reading it before I even logged in to Tomato. This is my first book review on Tomato. Come on, author, I love you!

I have read more than half of it, and I am really impressed. The author has a great imagination, and the emotional description is very delicate. The most successful thing about this book is that it can convey emotions to readers. You can clearly feel Zaori's character, her situation, and her psychological changes in each life. It is also a book that really moved me after reading the best friend fanfic for so long. It is worth watching.

The ninth life is so sweet, and the further you go, the more sadistic it feels. The identity of the heroine is a bit miserable, and the villagers in a certain life are very hateful. Although it's a flashback, you can still see some echoes of the plot later on, but it's quite sadistic and a bit unbearable, so I'll just watch it until the beginning, and I'll continue watching it next time.

It is worth recommending. Although some of the timelines are confusing, you can understand them if you read them carefully. The only drawback is that they are too short, so these are the essence, and everything that is not there is just water. I like knives very much, but they are just pure knives. Of course, the candy is also delicious😋. Hey~ξ( ✿＞◡❛)

Now that I'm watching the main world, the heroine's experience makes me a little sad, but I don't know where to go. And Qi still has the relationship between her and Tsukuni Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. Seeing the system's calculations, everything is too blurry and makes people uncomfortable. It was well written, but the ending was a little rushed, and the extras were not what I wanted. The story was well sequenced and well written. The ending may have been perfect for some people, but for me, it was too unfair and too sad for the heroine.

It's very touching, and it enriches my understanding of Hei Shimo, and it doesn't conflict with my original understanding. It's very emotional, very emotional, and the imagination is quite rich. In terms of emotional shaping, I don't know if the author didn't use too many words to modify this aspect (I feel it). There is a sense of indifference, but this indifference can reflect the deeper sadness or other emotions of the character. In short, it is very good. Most of the time, it's just as elegant as the author said, this style [Thinking]

It's so good, I cried when I saw it, I feel sorry for Hayao, those people in Willow Village... It's disgusting, very chilling, I highly recommend it, it's good to watch

I feel like the topic is quite new. It's just a little weird, I don't know why. But it looks better at the back. Quite like it. Very recommended. You can go and have a look. Then there are probably a lot of foreshadowings. Then there is sweetness in the knife, sweetness in the knife. Anyway, it feels pretty good. You can take a look. And in terms of OOC characters, I think it's okay. Not too OOC

The author's writing style is very good and really touching.

It's very good~ But it's a pity that I didn't see their life in the real world~ Except for the previous timeline being a little confusing, it's really good~[Like][Love] The confusing timeline is a personal feeling (no malicious intent), it should be the reason why my brain is not working properly~