This Time Around, I Only Want to Torment the Protagonist

The topic was well thought out, but the writing was so poor that I couldn't bear to read it. Whether it is dialogue, narration or inner monologue, it gives people the feeling that the protagonist has not grown up and is at best a high school student. It is not at all like an absolutely strong man who ascended the throne in his previous life and lived for two lives. The actual performance is also very poor. Being hugged and coquettishly shaken by the heroine who has hurt her will make any self-respecting reader suffer from embarrassment just by watching, let alone being a substitute. I personally think that the title of the book is just a pretense to attract readers, and it will actually open a harem. By the way, I searched for the villain + no heroine tag, but the actual situation... Putting aside the above, the protagonist is helpless when fighting Su Yu. He is tricked by Su Yu using the mechanism of Lingshan, and he does not perform well in the ring. In his first rebirth, he opened 108 spiritual veins, and this is his performance? Not to mention the horrific typos, omissions, and omissions. Based on the encouragement to new authors, I will give it a passing score of three stars.

There is no other way to say it. It can only be one star. I was killed in my last life. In this life, I can no longer act coquettishly. What's the point of revenge?

A big licking dog

You have forgotten your original intention. Since you wanted to torture Ye Chen, why did you go into seclusion again and look for something to block the secret of heaven?

It's too messy, the logic is too messy, and the development of things is simply a 4. I doubt that the author has no outline. In addition, many descriptions are the same as narratives, not vivid at all, the flow of the plot is very low, and the brainless writing is better than this one. The most important thing is that the writing and plot are too poor, and there is a poor grasp of the development and fate of the characters.

Villain, villain, can't you just let him be an orphan? In other villain stories, even if she has a father, she will be particularly doted on her, but now that she has a granddaughter, she will ignore her son. What kind of villain is he?

Many plots are incoherent. Starting from the secret realm, it seems that many plots have been omitted. The protagonist helps his senior sister's princess sister to be treated, is resented by Su Yu for helping the princess, the maid is inexplicably attacked by the ancient emperor, and how is he rescued after being trapped in the secret realm, etc. Why are there no such plots? There are too many plots that have been omitted. I was confused when I read it. I thought I had missed it and had gone back to read it. Also, saints and disciples suddenly appeared one after another without any foreshadowing. Did you really omit some plots, or did you delete some plots?

It's hard to comment. The author must be a bit young, otherwise it's just childish. It's like something written by a junior high school student.

Seriously, you have become an Immortal Emperor, can you still be such a loser after rebirth? What will happen to the nine empresses in the future? Do you want to kill them? Don't accept the harem. If you accept them, I will run away first. After living in the world of immortality for 3000 years, can you still be no better than a modern person who has lived for 30 years?

Why don't you become a villain? If you are not the protagonist, you will be reborn several times and you will die. You are not worthy of the word villain at all. If you are a protagonist who can't walk when he sees a woman, what is the difference between you and the child of destiny? Today's authors are all considerate and none of them are innovative.