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The writing is okay, the plot is interesting, and the netizens are happy. But the reason why it only got four stars may be because there is one really embarrassing part, and it is not about the theme of patriotism. I don't think your approach is wrong. On the contrary, it is admirable to promote red culture. But I think there are some places that you have to deal with that are not particularly good. There is a feeling that it is embarrassing. Of course, including all the patriotic parts, the writing is overly good. For example, I personally feel quite embarrassed about the Christmas chapter. I don't know if others think this is just my personal opinion. If you don't want to comment, I can choose to delete this video. Thank you for your understanding. [Sending my heart] Finally, I can see this comment. When writing about patriotic themes, I can make more transitions. I think he is not so embarrassed because he can fully embody the red spirit. If this is too difficult, the author should treat me like a piece of shit and block me [blowing kiss]

It's so good. Almost all the other books about Conan that I followed have been discontinued (sad). Although the people in the police academy were not rescued, they survived in another way. In fact, other books saved the five members of the police academy, but the subsequent writing is very strange.

A witty and interesting Conan fan, the heroine has a very high level of force, has her own bottom line, and will not harm innocent passers-by. Compared to other books, the main character is Black, or the protagonist becomes better and better, which is already very good.

It's a funny fan fiction, but I can't accept the occasional Japanese homophones (I'm here to criticize "Nani Ghost" by name) I completely forgot about the one on the profile [Extra CP Zhu Fu Jingguang]. I was stunned when someone said Jingguang was the male protagonist. Because it's a fan fiction, OOC is inevitable. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. In addition, I haven't actually read the original comics or anime, so the characters in this book are still a little different from what I remember. Xinlan and Xinlan don't have a high sense of presence, after all, the plot hasn't started yet. July 27, 23 23:57 Check in

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I've read a lot of Conan fan fiction, and this is the first time I've seen anything about Celestial Master. When I first read the introduction, I actually felt that it was a bit weird to teach Kyogoku how to wield a sword. I was a little worried that the author would not blend fantasy and science very well. Of course, I haven't written that part yet... But now I have great confidence in the author! Come on, author! Because it was my first time to see this kind of book, I still chose to read this book... And the further I read, the more I liked this book! The author's writing is really beautiful! I like it very much! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Koizumi Yin is so cute sometimes! It's really funny sometimes (•͈ᴗ•͈)

The author, cheers, cheers, cheers Don't you want to update it? Is this book ready? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's really, really good-looking. In Tomato, it ranks among the top ten of all Conan articles.

It looks very good. I don't know how to evaluate it. I just feel that I really like the heroine. She is very cute. The characters are also good. I just hope to play in the main story. Conan appears. Hehe, please give me a lot of support from the author. Please update it.

The author is great. It's not enough. Please update a few more chapters. Everyone updates chapters three by three. If you update it to 500 chapters as soon as possible, it will become popular as soon as possible.

Update quickly! ! ! Learn more from him! ! ! @ Pepper Palace Baoji Ding

I would like to ask if Yan Er can still meet with them? Although he is in a spirit state now, I still want them to come in, but spirit bodies can also be used. I don't want Zero to look like this, I just want him to see them, so that he won't be alone.

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The plot is very exciting and very interesting [KISS]

Nice! ! Wonderful! ! ! Looking forward to the follow-up! ! ! I like the setting of the heroine Celestial Master Girl ~ The collision between the police academy team and Celestial Master ~ I like their daily interactions (getting along with the winery winemakers is also very interesting) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's good, but the content is novel. If you haven't seen it, I think it's very interesting.

The idea of ​​​​ghosts and supernatural beings is relatively new (because there are not many people writing about it in Ketong), the author's writing style is funny and not awkward, and the interaction between the protagonist and the system is also very interesting.

It looks good, the content is exciting and rich, thank you to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง! (Ask when it will be updated)

Author, it's been half a year. When will you come back to update? Please, this is my favorite book. I finally finished reading it, but I found that you haven't updated it. When will you come back?

Super pretty! ! Five-star praise! !

Super pretty! The characters have distinct personalities, the subject matter is novel, and the main line is not changed while adding my own things [Adoration] Big boost to the author! [Blowing kiss]

It's so good, why is it discontinued? [Crying][crying] I hope it can still be picked up, and I want to see its finale [please update]

Very nice, I like it 😍

Big cheers for the author! ! ! !

It's very beautiful, keep it up

This book is set in a way that I really love [admiration]

The plot is quite good. I hope Koizumi Oto can "overturn" the world's consciousness as soon as possible and realize the freedom of all people to cultivate immortality ヾ(≧∇≦)ノ

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Hahahaha, I really like this kind of light-hearted alternative relief article. Although the golden finger is very big, it is the world of Ming Ke after all. It is learned from Wei Ke. The author will do his best to update it! !