Introduction: On the surface, I am a handyman from the largest family in the Nineteen Prefectures. I am usually upright, diligent, alert and smart.
In fact, I am the most notorious swordsman in the Nineteen Prefectures. I have a childhood sweetheart who is the empress of the Daqian Dynasty. There is a sword spirit living in the sword who claims to be the system. My apprentice is mentally ill and I have told me from the bottom of my heart that she can't tell the difference. She really can't tell the difference. My master is the leader of the Immortality Sect and has practiced Taoism for a hundred thousand years and refuses to ascend. My good brother loves to practice Gu and claims to pursue immortality at all costs...
Now, the aristocratic family asked me to go to the Northern Territory as a representative to break off the engagement for the young lady.
The young man whose engagement was broken off was wearing a ring with no discernible grade on his hand. He looked up to the sky and screamed: Don't bully the young man into being poor!
Vulgar writing practice, original plot
Reader comments
My impression is still okay. The advantage is that the characters are interesting, and the author's imagination in reconstructing the structure is quite good. But I feel like the plot is moving forward a bit too fast, and it feels like I'm going berserk starting from Kunpeng. (Probably the reason for practicing pen writing mentioned in the introduction
See if you can try slowing down the pace and not rushing out the plot. It already has excellent characters, it would be nice to have more space to describe the characters.
The male protagonist's character is so similar to mine, and the sense of immersion is particularly strong. I just give you a five-star rating.
I hope the author doesn't write too much
It's an interesting novel... But the author has entered the palace?
No reason, it just looks good and that's it
It's awesome, he can mix the rebirth and time travel system together without losing logic.
I don't understand why I lost my memory at the end?
My impression is still okay. The advantage is that the characters are interesting, and the author's imagination in reconstructing the structure is quite good. But I feel like the plot is moving forward a bit too fast, and it feels like I'm going berserk starting from Kunpeng. (Probably the reason for practicing pen writing mentioned in the introduction See if you can try slowing down the pace and not rushing out the plot. It already has excellent characters, it would be nice to have more space to describe the characters.
The male protagonist's character is so similar to mine, and the sense of immersion is particularly strong. I just give you a five-star rating. I hope the author doesn't write too much
It's an interesting novel... But the author has entered the palace?
No reason, it just looks good and that's it
It's awesome, he can mix the rebirth and time travel system together without losing logic.
I don't understand why I lost my memory at the end?