Gu Dao*****

Doesn't it require a corresponding Immortal Gu to ascend to immortality among the ten unique bodies? How does the protagonist use mortal Gu to explode his orifice? Did I see it?

Fanfiction. We must pay attention to the setting of the original work and the tone of voice of the original characters. This is very important [Thinking] Come on

The writing is very good, and the writing style of Chui Mu is also okay, but the characters are a bit inconsistent with the original work, but the description of the old devil is still okay, and the description of the ghost is almost meaningless.

The author of this book is pretty good except for the main character having sex with Shang Xinci in the first volume of the book. I came here to see Fang Lao Mo. In the world of cultivation, the jungle of the jungle, the strong is respected, and the weak is the mole. Fang Yuan, for the sake of eternal life, can abandon family, friendship, and love, and can give up everything for the sake of the great road. The world of cultivation is full of intrigues and the jungle of the jungle. The only bad thing about this novel is that the protagonist Yun Xuan takes in a woman named Shang Xinci

One of the few people I love so much, please watch and cherish it

Author, please change the title of the book. This title is too easy to be blocked.

Good reading, more updates, a very rare model worker fanfic. There is a flaw in this article that I want to point out. How dare this little author insult me like Death Seven Douluo! Let's look at my tenth turn of Death Gu! Come to life! My sweetheart!

There are fewer flaws as you go to the end, and the plot becomes more exciting. There are flaws in the character portrayal in the early stages, but the part about ascending to immortality is really good.

Come on, this beginning is relatively new. The protagonist's version of Zhengdao has a new talent at the beginning.

The author seems to have not read the original work very much, which makes the original work party look uncomfortable.

There are only a few books about the world of Gu, please read and cherish them.

Come on, author, come on. Come on, I hope the author writes better and better

Overall, it's pretty good, but the protagonist's level rises a bit abruptly. I hope the author can control the plot in the future.

I still prefer the protagonist from the previous life

Very well written. Cheers, author [OK]

Although the logic is poor in some places, at least it is a true fan writing about Gu. I support it with five stars.

How should I put it? I feel that the logic is a little unclear in some places, the article feels a bit rushed, and there is no foreshadowing or plot in some places. But it is good for a new author to write like this. Overall, the writing is good. I wish the author will get better and better.

One of the best real-life fanfics, come on

I took in a heroine [smile]

This book is really good, good luck to the author

It's really a rare and beautiful Kodaori novel.

I want to know how Feng Jinhuang deals with it?

Very pretty, not bad

Come on, I look forward to the protagonist's eternal life

Come on! The author is great.

Go to Douyin to recommend books. Daai Xianzun has been very popular recently.

The hang-up was a bit big in the early stage, but overall it was okay.

It's good-looking and satisfies my needs for fan fiction.

Very well written. Cheers, author. I like it (^_^) Must have five stars and strong support

What is Fang Yuan's ending?