Li Feng works as a bar singer.
On the way home from get off work, I got a slap in the face.
After waking up, I found that I had traveled to a parallel world.
In this parallel world;
His songs are heard all over the world,
His acting skills conquered the world.
Reader comments
What I wrote before is okay, but since the heroine came out, it has been a mess. I feel like she has been replaced. Is it necessary? Just to push you an ambiguous plot, the plot of the male protagonist and the female protagonist came into contact. The fight in a foreign country was originally an incident of a hero saving a beauty, but it ended up being brushed off in one stroke, and the rest was full of ambiguity. Back on track, holding a regional singing competition, but the result was ambiguous again without even writing a few strokes. Don't buy pig's feet. Oh my god, you are licking a dog! What is it about? This plot feels disgusting. What about the theme? What is the theme of your book? What are you doing now? Has it turned into a romance novel? Do you want to change to a female channel?
The heroine has just started her career, and she is not a career-oriented heroine. She has no idea what she is doing. She stares at the hero all day long and is jealous. The portrayal of the heroine is so bad, not good at all.
I'm a little tired, 100,000 words are gone in one go. Cut down on variety shows and concentrate on singing and acting.
That bitch is so annoying
The plot direction is still okay, but part of the plot is a bit taken for granted, and many details are not written satisfactorily.
If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. It's really embarrassing [laughs awkwardly][laughs awkwardly][laughs awkwardly]
It seems to be okay so far. Isn't it good to start a career in the early stage? It's best for the heroine not to appear too frequently, she's too clingy and annoying to watch.
What I wrote before is okay, but since the heroine came out, it has been a mess. I feel like she has been replaced. Is it necessary? Just to push you an ambiguous plot, the plot of the male protagonist and the female protagonist came into contact. The fight in a foreign country was originally an incident of a hero saving a beauty, but it ended up being brushed off in one stroke, and the rest was full of ambiguity. Back on track, holding a regional singing competition, but the result was ambiguous again without even writing a few strokes. Don't buy pig's feet. Oh my god, you are licking a dog! What is it about? This plot feels disgusting. What about the theme? What is the theme of your book? What are you doing now? Has it turned into a romance novel? Do you want to change to a female channel?
The heroine has just started her career, and she is not a career-oriented heroine. She has no idea what she is doing. She stares at the hero all day long and is jealous. The portrayal of the heroine is so bad, not good at all.
I'm a little tired, 100,000 words are gone in one go. Cut down on variety shows and concentrate on singing and acting.
That bitch is so annoying
The plot direction is still okay, but part of the plot is a bit taken for granted, and many details are not written satisfactorily.
If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. It's really embarrassing [laughs awkwardly][laughs awkwardly][laughs awkwardly]
It seems to be okay so far. Isn't it good to start a career in the early stage? It's best for the heroine not to appear too frequently, she's too clingy and annoying to watch.