The Butterfly Follows Me

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The person and plot are a bit confusing in some places. It is recommended to correct typos. Add a prefix when the location changes so that readers can understand the location change. (However, I know that the finished work cannot be modified. I hope the author will pay attention to it next time. Thank you.) The characters are vividly portrayed, and the crazy criticism is very touching. Falling in love with the murderer of your parents is a little weird, but the reaction is quite real. The article is overall good, and the story unfolds smoothly. Book friends who like crazy criticism can read it. (The above is just my personal opinion, please feel free to comment, thank you!)