"I never thought things would turn out like this."
On the zenith of the plasma city, Kuiqisi said meaningfully. He unfolded his sleeves and the black and white heroes echoed each other and soared into the sky. Thunder, lightning and flames seemed to be about to wash the world again.
"It doesn't matter what you think."
Facing the legendary hero, Ivan stretched out his palm and said calmly: "Good people will not die in this world, and neither will bad people. Only stupid people like you will die."
The power of eternity governs all things. The messenger of the sun spreads his wings, and the bright fire powder scatters, illuminating the night sky above the plasma city. Under it, the messenger of the waveguide, the dancer of the goblin, the angry shadow of the dragon's wings, and the indestructible steel body fearlessly move towards God.
"Let me teach you, Quechis."
Ivan said calmly: "What is called the ultimate power!"
Reader comments
Excellent Pokémon fan fiction. The story is novel and unique, but the starting point is definitely familiar to the game party. It starts with the first badge of Hoenn (i. E. The game Emerald/Dark Phantom) in the rock gym. The general trend should be the fight between the fat-headed fish and the flightless fish. After reading the introduction of the novel, other regions should be added, like this in black and white
The article has very distinct advantages. It is detailed, extremely detailed. Whether it is getting along with the characters and Pokémon, or digging into the story background of the characters (which may be ordinary NPCs in the game), they are all impressive and flesh-and-blood.
Here are two small suggestions (hehe (⑉°з°)-♡)
1. It can be seen that the author has his own plan and detailed settings. However, if he focuses too much on one or two plot chapters or characters, and feels that the plot advances too slowly, it will lead to a sense of procrastination like the game party is stuck in a cave and cannot get out without the flash spell, resulting in intermittent happiness.
2. I'm optimistic about you, author! Take advantage of your detailed description, and you can include some descriptions of the humanities, ecological environment, and environment of the Pokémon world. The author has the ability to describe the real Pokémon world. I always fantasize about what it would be like to go to such a world: a few Slowpoke are sleeping soundly on the beach under the moonlight, and the waves kiss the beach from time to time, bringing not only the sound of the tide but also the rolling giant clams. I lay on my back on Chenglong's broad back, and in my ears I listened to the singing of the stars in the sky, Menas.
Personally, I like it very much. Please do more work and update the author. If there are more people, there will be more talents [Chigua]
Looks pretty good so far
Suddenly found that the introduction does not seem to have a water element? I feel it is necessary for Pokémon to fly in the sky and swim in the water.
It's really beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author [laughs]
Is the translation different? Why am I watching Team Fire and Team Rocket? [Eat melon]
Sorry, sorry. I didn't read the back part, thinking it was a translation problem [laughing and crying]
Come on, author [like]
The writing is very good, it can be regarded as fairy grass, but the chapter titles are a bit boring, and people who are impatient may not be able to read it.
Excellent Pokémon fan fiction. The story is novel and unique, but the starting point is definitely familiar to the game party. It starts with the first badge of Hoenn (i. E. The game Emerald/Dark Phantom) in the rock gym. The general trend should be the fight between the fat-headed fish and the flightless fish. After reading the introduction of the novel, other regions should be added, like this in black and white The article has very distinct advantages. It is detailed, extremely detailed. Whether it is getting along with the characters and Pokémon, or digging into the story background of the characters (which may be ordinary NPCs in the game), they are all impressive and flesh-and-blood. Here are two small suggestions (hehe (⑉°з°)-♡) 1. It can be seen that the author has his own plan and detailed settings. However, if he focuses too much on one or two plot chapters or characters, and feels that the plot advances too slowly, it will lead to a sense of procrastination like the game party is stuck in a cave and cannot get out without the flash spell, resulting in intermittent happiness. 2. I'm optimistic about you, author! Take advantage of your detailed description, and you can include some descriptions of the humanities, ecological environment, and environment of the Pokémon world. The author has the ability to describe the real Pokémon world. I always fantasize about what it would be like to go to such a world: a few Slowpoke are sleeping soundly on the beach under the moonlight, and the waves kiss the beach from time to time, bringing not only the sound of the tide but also the rolling giant clams. I lay on my back on Chenglong's broad back, and in my ears I listened to the singing of the stars in the sky, Menas.
Personally, I like it very much. Please do more work and update the author. If there are more people, there will be more talents [Chigua]
Looks pretty good so far Suddenly found that the introduction does not seem to have a water element? I feel it is necessary for Pokémon to fly in the sky and swim in the water.
It's really beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author [laughs]
Is the translation different? Why am I watching Team Fire and Team Rocket? [Eat melon] Sorry, sorry. I didn't read the back part, thinking it was a translation problem [laughing and crying] Come on, author [like]
The writing is very good, it can be regarded as fairy grass, but the chapter titles are a bit boring, and people who are impatient may not be able to read it.