Elf: Watch the World with Live Streaming

I hope someone will comment (good or bad, except embarrassing) By the way, let me add my own comments about this book. To be honest, from an objective perspective, I can only give myself a three-point rating for this book. When many people look at Yaofeng's character designs before and after, they can clearly see why this person is different from the socially fearful character he was promised? Why is he so cheerful during the live broadcast but becomes timid again when he is away from the camera? If you have this idea, then I admit that my problem is that I originally wanted to write that Fengzi gradually became more cheerful because of the live broadcast, and at least he could open his heart to everyone in the live broadcast room. But at that time, because the writing style was immature and I focused too much on promoting the main plot, I underestimated the growth of important characters. This is a very serious problem, and this problem can be seen in the male and female protagonists. Finally, I hope everyone will comment more. Even if you give me one or two stars, I will accept your suggestions with an open mind and will not be arrogant and curse others.

This kind of subject matter is becoming less and less. I hope to describe more about elves, the relationship between humans and elves, and the integration and collision of elves and human society. Personally, I prefer the description of these aspects, and I don't like elf competitions and the like. Come on, author [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

Speaking of which, after reading so many popular science Pokémon, why are all the villains when they appear abroad? Can't you write about foreign countries from a neutral perspective? Don't think of domestic countries as too beautiful and don't think of foreign countries as too evil. They are all human beings and the public's ideas are similar. There is no difference [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]. The Chinese are the ones who deceive the Chinese the most in foreign countries.

Pokémon must be beautiful, it must be slower First of all, you can encounter a mythical beast, but you must not conquer it, which will lead to a collapse in combat power. If you have a mythical beast, then you can only fight with the mythical beast in the future, which completely loses the fun of Pokémon duel. If you encounter a mythical beast, you can use the mythical beast as a treasure, bless the Pokémon, and make the Pokémon stronger, such as blessing the second characteristic. Second, Pokémon articles must be more daily, more joyful, more relaxed, more childish, and more humorous. Such an article can only be reflected in its advantages if it has more than 3,000 chapters. The power of Pokémon lies in its beauty that cannot be found in reality. Only by building a perfect world, just like Peach Blossom Spring, can it attract people and make it impossible to ask for. Third, you need to write about Pokémon to make the world different. It is best to add some warmth, the salvation of people, and the salvation of Pokémon. At the same time, it should also reflect the transformation of the world by Pokémon. People in this world are slowly becoming better. People from all walks of life are becoming happy because of Pokémon. Those with high status and those with low status are becoming more and more equal. Fourth, you should practice more in writing landscapes and some more movements to write out their cuteness, liveliness and perfection. There are two suggested imitation books, "My Popular Science Elf Shocked the World", which started out well, but later added mythical beasts, especially those top elves that were conquered. The sudden arrival of the dragon was a failure, and the author also discovered it, so he ended it early. If it hadn't been conquered, the novel about the mythical beasts could have continued to be written, and it would not have caused the collapse of the subsequent combat power system. "Pokémon: I traveled through time after clearing the game" is a very daily novel. At first, the novel received very low ratings because of its slow pace. But when I read this novel, I didn't know that this novel would definitely get a high rating, because this is the real Pokémon. Only this kind of slow-paced Pokémon can write a real Pokémon. Pokémon, and those Pokémon in other aspects, are only popular for a while, because once the mythical beast is added, the combat power system collapses instantly. If you do not add the daily dark Pokémon, then this Pokémon text will only make people feel eerie. The reason why Pokémon has been popular for so long is because its world is very good and beautiful. Fifth, if the author wants to write Pokémon well, he must pay attention to the description of daily life and the details of the characters. He can write about some separation, and he can also write about some passion. There must be no lack of foreshadowing, especially the daily emotions, which only have the precipitate in the early stage, then the real explosion will occur when it explodes. What other suggestions should the author read? Those essays that are helpful for writing, such as the three-fold type, can prevent the author from hiding too deeply because he wants to suppress a certain explosive point, which will cause the reader's disgust. It will also prevent the author from not suppressing the explosion in the early stage enough to resonate with the readers. Therefore, there can be no less foreshadowing, but not too much. At the same time, the author wants to write a funny article, but the finale of the Pokémon article should be the battle, the kind of passionate mid-level battle. This is not easy to write. It is okay. It is recommended to learn from other books and differentiate between battle and daily life. How many chapters are one chapter for battles and how many chapters are one chapter for daily life. Sixth, the author can make suggestions to learn from the readers' opinions, but they do not completely obey the readers. They must have your writing outline, in which you can add some readers' ideas and make corrections. The author must hide some articles and do not publish them as soon as they are written, because they can be modified later and can be polished again when publishing. That's all the suggestions. My suggestions are for reference only. Congratulations to the author blockbuster

When you say big tit is weak Boss Banmu: laugh Boss Banmu's big tit-for-tat: laugh [laughing evilly]

It feels good. At least I am so serious about writing books about Pokémon and humans. There are very few books about Pokémon and humans. The other books are basically about family and country feelings halfway through writing. Personally, I think Pokémon books should not include too many issues about countries and countries, so I will continue to follow this book.

A very good slow-paced article, I hope it won't break down (*´ω｀*) (Today's writing is either about systems, golden fingers, picking up mythical beasts, or fast pace, as well as all kinds of Honkai Impact and Poison. I'm tired of reading it. If you want to find a good writing that is both appetizing and good, you are really on the verge of extinction (_ゝ))

It's okay. Among the genres I've read, your start is pretty good. I hope it doesn't collapse later. I still hope to write more about the elves. You don't have to follow them and do multi-perspectives. The best supporting characters in elf novels are elves, or even the protagonists.

Unlike other similar styles, I personally prefer this style.

The book is very good, but not enough to read.

The author should add an Eluredo to the protagonist! Many fans only have Gardevoir but not Aluredo. Aluredo is also very handsome and not bad in strength. After super evolution, using teleportation, three sword dances and the holy sword, no one can withstand this sword.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. Demining completed, Science Elf + Time Travel, easy to move, plain mouth, nothing out of the circle, stable, not bad. (Currently there is no villain, no sadist) It's worth recommending and I hope the quality and quantity will be maintained in the future.

This book is very nice. But I want to know what the strength of the Motorized Lizard is, but it still feels like a dream? There is a bottomless feeling. That Bulbasaur is obviously the strong one in this clan, but the Motorized Lizard feels that he is not inferior to him. I wonder if he can beat Bankelas.

Suddenly I found that I haven't rated it after reading it for so long. It's a very good book, but the author is not very good. Every time I say three updates, I haven't seen it fulfilled once. How can I put it, it's contradictory to want to release other elves quickly but not too fast to affect the rhythm. It's good now, live slowly, take your time, I hope to write more about daily life

It's still very good, unlike other stories that are all about invincibility. In this chapter, the male protagonist truly introduces Pokémon to others.

The five-star review has been given. I'm working overtime, the author. I've seen too much fighting, killing and conspiracy, so I want to watch this. To be honest, I personally like Pokémon because it is a world full of hope and possibility, and full of majestic vitality.

Author, you don't want to be teased because you update too little [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Goodbye, friend. Although this book may not be the best, congratulations to you, the author. You have successfully written the protagonist into a real flesh-and-blood person. At least in my eyes, he is a flesh-and-blood person.

This novel is much better than other popular science elves (self-perception)

It's okay, but it feels like it's already Chapter 14 of Volume 2. Arceus didn't even give the protagonist a few Poké Balls, which was a bit much, and the protagonist's weak body... Please support the author with a five-star review!

So far, it looks pretty good. Although the plot is bland, it's also heartwarming.

It's good-looking and I hope it doesn't have a heroine.

Hmm ~ (Looking for a book to read when bored) Well? (Found this book) Ah! (I exclaimed because it looked so good) It should have been sent by now [sad]

This is much better than some popular science articles about Pokémon.

It's not bad, at least it's better than other general popular science elf books, but the character names are a bit average, some of the characters are a bit unlikable, and the characters are a bit rushed.

If Yu Sanjia, Water, Fire and Grass only gives you one, what do you want the three more [you taste carefully]

Can you write less about your feelings?

Come on author, it's very interesting.

Is the main character's mage hand a BiDiao? If not, I hope it's a big-mouthed kid The author is really good at making jokes

It's great. The Pokémon in it have their own ideas and are vivid. I hope the male protagonist can maintain his original intention after meeting more Pokémon. When will the author be able to update four chapters a day😡