Fairy, Please Allow Me to Quibble

In the Immortal Harem novel, the story progresses quickly and the level increases quickly. Unlike some novels where it takes more than 10 chapters to defeat a boss, this book is generally light-hearted and funny, but there are some tragic plots mixed in, but it will definitely have a happy ending in the end. The male protagonist has the ability to challenge higher levels. The boss at the end of the fight has been challenged by higher levels. In fact, it feels like there is no villain who can push the protagonist to a desperate situation. But overall, this book still tells a complete story, and the most important thing is that this novel is not unfinished. However, some things are not written in detail. It might be better if I write a few extra stories to supplement some stories.

It's not bad. Looking at it now, I just feel that each heroine's relationship is progressing too fast. It came together in just a few chapters. It would have been nice if the emotional colors could be described more delicately, but that's not a shortcoming. After all, it's a harem novel. Good-looking, love to watch [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Much better than other new authors. Come on, author. It's really comfortable to read.

It's still good, but the plot advances too fast, and the strength and emotion are all, qcqs praised it

Okay, okay, it looks good, come on

Harem story, not bad, not bad [laughing evilly]

The purpose of reading novels is to have women like this who can't even think of running away to other places and can all grow up together in a small world! ! !

The first part is good, but I skipped chapters to read the middle and later parts. Forget the rest, too lazy to say more. Writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Multiple female protagonists yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's quite funny and harmonious for the time being. I feel bored just watching it🥱[awkward laugh]

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง I have fallen in love with this book and I am already your loyal reader. It's beautiful, but it's a pity it's not popular [crying]

It's to my liking. Come on, the author.

It can be seen that the author is very careful, but for me, I can't stand it, and I still support it with five stars.

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Nice, nice looking.

Okay, very nice

The three views are relatively correct and have certain connotations and truths.

Some Flaws and Throw Your Brains Away is a novel that is enjoyable from beginning to end

This book is so beautiful

When saving people, I need to explain it as if it is shameful to be compassionate, but it is shameful to be cold and ruthless, right?

I like to watch it, it's very beautiful too

It's really good

A rare good book by Tomato

It's a great book, why doesn't anyone comment?

This book can be called a difficult book to read. Good luck to the author.

Five-star good book, the overall pace is a bit fast, and there is no detailed description

It's very interesting. Can there be a few extra episodes?

There is not much nonsense in this book, it is a good and exciting short story.

Tomato is a rare novel that doesn't have a bad ending. At the end, the story line is still very clear.

It's pretty, and the writing is pretty good.

Nice harem novel