Starting from Naruto

The first generation of "Senju Hashirama" was renamed "Senju Hashirama", and I feel that this book was written by the author for fun. To be honest, even when I listen to books, I still feel that the listening function needs sentence breaking. I can't keep up in one breath, there are some spaces, press Enter, use it. Knowing that Konoha is causing trouble, Uchiha Mirror must have been stunned a long time ago! So I deduct two stars because the sensory experience is not particularly good.

When I saw your introduction, I actually wanted to read it, but I turned on the night mode this late at night, and you wrote a novel without breaking it into paragraphs. My eyes were dizzy after reading it, and I really couldn't read it anymore. Let's talk about it in the daytime tomorrow.

All typos. Or there are a few words missing in a sentence. Or a few more words in a sentence. It's just a few words, I can't read a single sentence, and I don't even know what you wrote.

If you raise Douluo, you won't write again.

It seems so laborious, and it feels like the voice-to-text conversion is intermittent. There is no sense of experience in reading at all. The storyline is too bland and does not attract interest in reading.

There are a lot of typos, no paragraphs, and spaces almost replace punctuation marks. It's uncomfortable to read and hard to listen to.