Who Is the Devil Who Will Take Adventures with the Brave?

First time writing a novel

I feel good after reading it so far. The storyline has changed from being green at the beginning to becoming more and more proficient in the follow-up. I can feel that the author's writing style is constantly improving. Among the characters, I like Lyle better. Although he is a very classic heroic character, I am a little nostalgic. This kind of traditional character design is very suitable for me. I hope the author can write more about the interaction between Chen Yang and Lyle in the future. At present, I feel that neither of them has a clear positioning of each other. Although Lyle regards Chen Yang as a comrade and benefactor, the description of "resent to Chen Yang" will suddenly appear whenever Sophia encounters danger. I feel that this is actually somewhat separated from the previous portrayal. Although it is to highlight the importance of Sophia, it does not fit with Lyle's character. Does Chen Yang regard Lyle as a comrade from another world, or does he regard her as a complete tool? Or maybe there is some quiet envy for Lyle's completely positive character and charisma as a son of the world? There are a lot of things to write about the relationship between the two. I think there was a friendship between Lyle and Chen Yang before, and if Chen Yang's identity is eventually exposed, there will be some terrible Shura field plots to come... (Watch it if you like it. Watch it more.

I look forward to Joey growing up and going through a lot of things to change his personality. The contrast is so good (I thought the pregnancy part was really hilarious. Don't worry, Chen Yang has a better chance than you [laughing and crying]. Who knows what kind of weird devil power will come in the future, or the body will undergo wonderful changes~ Chen Yang can get pregnant [laughing]) As for why I took Chen Yang's right bit, isn't it very simple? Chen Yang doesn't even have the tools to commit crimes [face covering], come on Joey! Don't let the latecomers take the lead (actually, I mainly wanted to see Joey's reaction after learning about Chen Yang's asexuality, but I feel like it happened later) I will always support you, author, but I'm really slow to save up to read it, so keep it up! [Love]

So this book has two male protagonists? Or no cp? Or no cp but can knock it? If there are two male protagonists, will it be Joey x Chen Yang, or Chen Yang x Joey? Or something else? In short, not to mention the emotional line, this book has a novel concept, and it is also a good afternoon snack during the book shortage.

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is very interesting, and the male protagonist is very cool.

Interesting, but a bit lacking

Very good, imaginative, very suitable for Xiao Heizi

Does Xiao Heizi eat fried cakes?

It looks good, and Chen Ying is really cute, hehe

Good looking, love watching, blowing up, getting married, thank you

It's quite beautiful, but there are a little few people.

It's quite nice, but there are too few people, and there aren't many comments. I'm a bit unaccustomed to OuO

A very good book, thank you to the author!

The plot is lively and interesting, and the characters are three-dimensional Dear author, can you draw fanart?

Very good, this book is worth pursuing

It's good-looking. It's a rare theme in Tomato. It's very novel, but there are a little bit less of it at the moment. I would like to ask the author when the vest will be dropped? How many chapters will it take for the protagonist to go to the demon clan?

Nice! ! ! The author has been here for 7 days, please update as soon as possible [Sending heartfelt wishes]

It's a very interesting setting, and the character of the main character really struck a chord with me.

Very interesting, good luck to the author

It's very beautiful, come on!

The author's writing is not bad, but it can be seen that he is still very unfamiliar. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It is very rare to find an author who insists on updating his book and never abandons it. Moreover, this book is not popular. I would like to give the author a good review and encourage him [blowing kiss]

The book is very good, but the author's update speed is a bit too slow [laughing]

Fortunately, I like watching it, but the updates are a bit slow. I'm always worried that I'll die when I wake up. Haha, I watched it several times. I was shocked when I saw that the network card in the elevator was disconnected (luckily it was a false alarm)

It's very good, and the subject matter is very novel. It's the first time for the author to write a book, so give him some encouragement. I hope he can write better books in the future

Yes, this book has great potential

It's to my liking, it's a fairy tale to me

The protagonist is no longer a human being. He is most likely a demon. He just has a human soul.

It's great, but why are there so few people? [Crying] [Crying] Come on, the author, the plot is great and the characters are well created. I look forward to the follow-up (*°∀°)=3