I Became an Immortal, Yet I'll Never See Her from That Year Again

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Although it only has more than twenty chapters, it is very well written.

It's completed. Looking forward to the next plot very much

First give me a thumbs up, it's well written, five stars, and continue reading.

Listened for some time tonight and left a mark.

The structure of the article is compact, the story line is well advanced, the description of the fight is perfect, the language description is easy to understand, and the expression grammar is unique and creative. Fight, fight, fight monsters and monsters from above, ghosts and monsters from below; practice, practice, become emperor and become immortal, just around the corner. Fantasy among fantasy, masterpiece among novels, come and take a look.

The article has great literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. 🤭

The plot is attractive and the writing is smooth. It is a good book worth reading! 👍

[Chigua] I will give you a five-star review. It seems that your book is imitating the route of the great emperor of the human race in protecting the human race in Zhetianli. The pattern is opened up, but the description of the battle scenes does not feel very passionate. At the beginning, the emperor is mentioned many times, even immortal, which makes people feel that the emperor is worthless. Come on, brother.