Immortality: Carry a Fairyland with You

Look at the white clouds and the gray dog, look at the bleakness of the world, and appreciate the various conditions of the world Why did I suddenly become wise at chapter 100?

Not bad, not bad. I like it. The plot isn't too messy and the handling is within my acceptable range. It's a rare good book. You must be sick, what age are you in, and you are still writing about resurrection! My sweetheart? Later on, the plot was written with different characters and the characters were written the same way. What nonsense was written?

The immortality cultivation novels are all slow-burning, barely developing, no logical flaws, no holy mother, the writing is smooth, and it's not boring to read. It's good.

This book is very good. There have been few good books in recent years. Those great writers always write fancy things that are not worth reading. Everyone writes about swords, and everyone uses swords, but no one writes swordsmanship well, and few protagonists use swords well. I am looking forward to the next plot of this book. Let me also comment on it. It is impossible for everyone to live in this world the same way, and it is impossible to live according to what others think. Just like what is said in the book, do something and don't do something, just feel happy in your heart. If some people don't think it looks good, you can go read what you think looks good. If you don't feel good, then write your own book.

It is well written, without any poisonous points. It has the spirit of a young man and the calmness of a middle-aged man. Five-star praise

A very good longevity novel. The author's writing is very good and the story is wonderful. It is suitable for old book lovers to read. The low score may be due to the hasty ending, but judging from the structure of the work, writing skills, character creation, story control ability, etc., A score of nine or above should be a true evaluation of the work.

He travels to the world of cultivating immortals and lives forever. He has been involved in the world for decades, farmed the land, and been a knight. In the end, he was exploited by others. Most people have long become ruthless and unrighteous, but the protagonist can still use all his money to save a girl who has nothing to do with him and maintain his youthful loyalty. Some people may say that he is a virgin. , But didn't we all have this youthful loyalty when we were young, wanting to save the world, protect the weak, and be a hero? When did we start to be dismissive of this? Come on, author, go change the world, even if it is just in a novel, let the truth, goodness and beauty be passed on again.

I feel like it's well written, but there's no traffic How should I put it, the author may not be good at writing emotional dramas, whether it is love or friendship. Kazuto casually became sworn friends without any emotional foreshadowing, and then helped others to stand out and mess with the Jindan family during the foundation period. Moreover, I had just drugged someone, and when it was over, they still paid me back, which made me stunned for a while. Maybe many readers like to read these, but those of me who read Gouwen probably don't like it.

A very interesting novel, the style feels close to the ancient genre (referring to five to ten years ago) and has a nostalgic feel. The protagonist is not a fixed character. The author wrote a thankless growth-oriented protagonist. From being high-spirited to returning home to farm, from cultivating immortality to being angry, from being lonely for a year to being carefree. Unfortunately, the writing was not strong enough at the turning point, which is a pity. This protagonist can hardly be called a pornographic protagonist, more like an ordinary person. Overall it's to my liking. I hope the author will make more progress in his next book! [Like][Like][Like]

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This book is considered a high-quality book by Tomato. Although it has flaws, it is really good. Tomato gives people the impression that one can write novels even before graduating from elementary school.

A sentimental fairy tale! The protagonist is very interesting! Portable Fairy World doesn't feel that useful! The ending was too rushed! I have just written about the Golden Elixir, Nascent Soul, Mahayana, and Immortal Realm. I feel like I can write a lot more! Come on, author!

The author's writing is very good. Pig's trotters have also changed a lot with the experience. I think this growth process is more consistent with a real person with brains and time travel. Pig's trotters have their own bottom line and goodwill, and they can also kill people and seize treasures. This is not a brainless and invincible article, the growth process of pig's feet is more real.

It's rare to find a book that I can read. I don't know why the rating is so low.

What you want in cultivating immortality is immortality, and what you want is a clear mind. If your thoughts remain unclear, it will be useless even if you live forever. One hundred thousand years and millions of years later, when I look back on my life, I will see that it was indeed a useless life. What's the point of living.

Very good. How can the road to eternal life be so smooth? Did someone change the writing later? The style is completely different.

I still have more to say, and I wish the author good luck in his love life.

It was pretty good, but it felt like it ended a little too quickly.

It is still a very rigorous book, at least it is good so far and there are no signs of collapse.

After seeing Chapter 168, I hope that the protagonist and Xiao Yi are together. It would be too much for them. They are two strong men! I really like Qiuqiu.

It's quite beautiful. At the beginning, the main character focused on immortality. In addition, the things and teammates encountered during the immortality period, etc., Those teammates had problems and immediately abandoned all avenues and longevity, stability, etc., And got carried away with revenge. The main reason for the inconsistency was that the plot was a little confusing and a little forced? But I have to say that it's still pretty good-looking, and there aren't any big bad points at the moment. They can all be rounded off. It's just about adding more scenes to the supporting characters.

I like this style very much. It is humorous but not obtrusive. It is not boring and makes you want to read more. The protagonist is also emotionally rich, not Madonna, and some of the poems fit the situation and are not obtrusive. It's my very favorite type.

Overall, it's okay, but you won't be able to finish it at this glance. I look forward to the follow-up!

It's okay, but I didn't write down the function of immortality.

Keep writing, you can still write hundreds of chapters...

It's a bit short. Even if it's not a big water monster, I can still write a lot more later.

Fortunately, there is a novel about cultivating immortals in Tomato. Calculated. [Learned]

It was okay, but the ending was a bit rushed, and there was much more that could be written but I didn't.

The water content is a bit low, not very plump, but overall it's still very good.

Awesome Just a little uncomfortable Woo woo woo