The System Failed at the Start, Don't Panic

The beginning of the novel is very good. From the beginning of the novel, the novel establishes a character of the heroine who is self-reliant, sober and rational, does not take advantage of others, likes fair transactions and fair dealings with others, and only has cultivation in her heart. She is very likeable. Of course, in the author's writing, the quick response and decisive bravery of the heroine Juan Wang when encountering danger further enrich the heroine's character. However, when meeting Lin Rushuang, the author tried his best to get the heroine to have a relationship with Lin Rushuang and make the two of them close friends. I felt that this was very abrupt and somewhat violated the heroine's character. A heroine who always likes to deal with people fairly, seemed to be put down when she met Lin Rushuang. She tried her best to give her good things to the other person for free, and constantly helped the other person improve her cultivation for free, cooked for the other person, and worked hard to promote the other person. For those who didn't know, they thought Lin was the heroine's biological daughter.

It's good-looking. I've read so many intrigue-filled articles every day. Suddenly I saw this article without too many intrigues. Well, it's pretty good-looking.

I like this novel so much. The heroine of this book is really strong, haha ​​[laugh][laugh][laugh]. Unlike the novels I read before where the heroine was framed in various ways, the author conveyed to me in this novel that as long as you work hard, you will definitely make progress, just like the heroine is pushing the neighbors and friends around her to do the same. Because they worked hard, they made their lives better. Originally, they couldn't see the direction of life, but it turns out that they can achieve it with just a little effort. During the course of their exams, they will not be disheartened by the great progress of others. Others are so great and are still working hard, so why should they fail? Come on, try your best to update! Don't stop updating [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Ah! Why! So many people give negative reviews, it's too much! It's not easy 🈶A novel that is so satisfying, but the negative reviews have given the author such a huge shock that he has to stop updating it. What should I do? I cried so much. There are so many books on the bookshelf that have been discontinued. It's too much [crying][crying][crying][crying]. Friends who like to read this book, please give it a 5-star review! [Like this post][Like this post][Like this post][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

I haven't finished watching it yet. The heroine's fighting ability, IQ, and skill points are all good, and I'm very satisfied with it. But when she helps people, I feel like she's being taken advantage of. That is to say, I obviously appreciate the heroine's reasonable kindness, but the main character is that the heroine is a bit taken advantage of. I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way [face covering]

This novel is still relatively new. I thought it was a system article, but the system immediately ran away, and then it became a fairy tale. As a result, when the article on cultivating immortals was about to progress, the system actually came back. After giving him some benefits, he left with a guilty conscience. However, according to the system, he was recalled by the leader. At the end of my cultivation of immortality, I was on a foreign battlefield, and ended up being bound by the same commander again. Ever since, it has changed from the article about cultivating immortals to the article about traveling quickly. [Cover face] In fact, it would be good if this was written according to the text about quick travel. After all, the heroine has already practiced to a very advanced level. She will not suffer any disadvantages in terms of quick travel wherever she goes. She can follow the instructions in this article. In the future, this novel can add some extra chapters, such as what Blue Star's final development will be like, and I can write more about it. After all, it is the eternal pursuit of our flower growers to enable them to develop better.

The writing is very, very good. I finished reading it before I knew it. I really like the character of the heroine and am looking forward to the author's new book [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

This is a novel that combines elements of cultivation and technology, which is quite special. I was reminded of it subtly by the lawn mower. Later, when I eliminated the extraterrestrial demons, I discovered that this foreshadowing had already been laid. The setting of this book even extends back to China, which may usher in a world of punk cultivation for all people. Cultivation is no longer the exclusive preserve of a few people, but has become popular among the people. It's also cool that Jian Ning and the master from time travel used chemical equations to make elixirs to ensure the success rate. Jian Ning not only used technology to solve many cultivation problems in the world of cultivation, letting us see the power of technology, but there were also many food stalls that made me hungry, haha. This book is very interesting. I look forward to the next book.

This novel is quite good. A Ning is down-to-earth step by step. Just like us Chinese people, we have not lost our land wherever we go. Practice is above all else. He has a sense of responsibility and attaches great importance to feelings and righteousness. He has saved many lives and realized the ideals of China. He also remembers the 24 words firmly and got the good rewards he deserves. It is not a conscious effort to save people and apply merit. The author can write an image like A Ning, which shows that he is deeply rooted in the concept of the country. This kind of positive image of An Ning is great in some novels.

The author's writing is very warm and patriotic. From Blue Star to cultivating immortals, and then traveling to ancient times in a secret realm to help people in a small world. After coming out of the secret realm, you can also help your own country. It is really very loving and great.

It's a very enjoyable story. The heroine is well versed in the truth of Gou and Juan, but the battle is still very powerful😄. Moreover, there are no intrigues among the sect friends of the heroine who cultivates immortality, so it feels like a very pure fairy tale. Only what you learn is your own. To make iron, you need to be hardworking.

Very nice [smile] I like the heroine's character

I like the heroine very much. She has a very upright outlook on life and the story has ups and downs. However, it ends too suddenly. The master and spiritual pet have not been recovered, and they have not returned to the battlefield once. What should Lin Luo do? What should Master do? Doesn't the earth plan to go back once?

It's pretty good. The heroine is constantly striving for self-improvement, and the sect she joins later is also very harmonious. There's no nonsense, no routines, no innate genes, and no CP (although I really want her to be with her master). It's pretty good and worth watching.

The content is clear, mostly funny and happy, but also contains unexpected dangers, the perseverance of the heroine, the friendship and solidarity of classmates to protect shortcomings, the correct three outlooks and a positive attitude, the love for life, and the reverence for life. I have been chasing this book for two years, and I finally finished reading it [Sending my heart][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

This is the third time I've watched it, it's so good. I have just finished reading "The Great Goose" and read it twice. Has the author published a new book? Sit and wait [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Writing style. Well enough. Although it didn't make me look happy, it was very comfortable. But it didn't look uncomfortable. Not bad. Author. You should write according to this idea. As long as you can. The readers seem very comfortable, happy and refreshed. Then you are the most successful author.

Cultivation, a growth-type female protagonist, who keeps reading until she dies, and eventually grows into an almighty ACE in the world of immortality. It is really the kind of book that I can listen to in one sitting and stay up late. There are some shortcomings, but it is really the book I have listened to completely in the past two days. It is still the completion of the book. There is no reason not to follow it. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned]

It looks good [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] but not enough [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Come on [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]

A refreshing novel about a female protagonist without CP. She starts the game by traveling through the world of immortality and the battlefield outside the boundary. She binds the original system and starts to travel quickly. No need to delay, I have a fellow master, a spiritual pet and a fellow sect brother, I have three friends who are practicing abroad, and I have accepted a disciple. The amazing thing is that the panels with high faith and merit have become a system [like].

The heroine's daily life as a cultivator includes training and upgrading. I have three or four good friends and a fellow teacher. The heroine is very curly and friendly. Not too much pressure. The whole story is very relaxed and cheerful, leaving people wanting more.

The theme is quite novel, the heroine has a very thick golden finger, the master is also a teacher in the previous life, and she soared along the way, and later it was written that she and the master established a sect after her ascension! The story is okay, but I don't have much patience. It looks like a narrative article, so I went straight to the ending.

This is the only person who feels happy when reading the article on cultivating immortals, the only one who feels so relaxed when reading the article on cultivating immortals, and the only one who finds such positive energy in reading the article on cultivating immortals. The special style of writing, the special characters, and the special writing about cultivating immortals. I like it very much.

The writing is smooth and I finished reading it in one breath without realizing it. The heroine is really a scroller and everyone around her is fascinated by it. Especially when she is getting along with the master (the chemistry teacher of the heroine Lan Xing), it is very comfortable to watch. There is no teacher-student crush.

Fine. At first, when Jian Ning met Lin in the monster battlefield, she almost didn't survive. Then I jumped a few chapters later. Looks great again. I'm personally still very satisfied. I like the heroine very much. Killing people will never beep. I have seen so many times in the apocalypse of the world of cultivation that the enemy is about to be killed. He just likes to follow others when he wants to kill his enemy, and then the enemy escapes. Later, the enemy in turn killed many relatives and friends of the hero and heroine.

It's pretty good. I don't have much love brains, and there aren't too many sinister people. Many people are very powerful. There is no comparison method where only the heroine is awesome and others are trash. Others are also very smart, and so is the heroine. There is no drama of letting others use it as a stepping stone to show the heroine's uniqueness, because the heroine does not need to be like that. She knows how to be content and is good at using her own superior roles.

Must give a five-star rating! I've never seen such an enjoyable fairy tale! The heroine Jian Yidao is really the king of scrolls. And he's pretty stubborn too! Awesome Claes! [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's very beautiful. It's a different world of cultivating immortals. There is no intrigue in it. They are entangled in each other and practice desperately just to ascend. It's a very good novel. It's worth recommending. Five stars.

It's pretty good, but a little short. The heroine is also pretty good. There's no intrigue or cannibalism in the story. I've never seen such a harmonious fairy tale. Looks good, recommend [love] [love] [love] Love it🌹🌹🌹

I really like the heroine's character O(≧▽≦)O , it's really beautiful. This is a cultivator with a team but not much is said (-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩) What follows is mostly about the heroine and her master, written like a cp. I really like the previous plot, but the ending at the end is so outrageous and hard to imagine (.•́•̀.)

I like this setting very much. The writing is also good and humorous. I was enthusiastic at first, but soon it became a rocket [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Not bad, not out of the ordinary, I'm looking forward to the follow-up quick wear