I Came Back from the Immortal Realm to Tighten Screws

Come on, author, the character development of the protagonist is getting better and better. The previous one was really almost meaningless. In addition, the emotional scenes can be slightly smoothed out. If the male protagonist is scumbag, just be scumbag. As long as the scumbag is natural and clean, if you have a strong foundation, the emotional scenes can be written more delicately. If it is almost meaningless, you can write it without embarrassment. Currently As far as Niu Aihua is concerned, the atmosphere has ended here. If you sleep, you can sleep. It can be clearly stated that this is the character of the protagonist. Don't say he is a scumbag and then pretend to be a reserved good man. It is not necessary. As long as he is not a teddy and is a beauty, ten or eight is not too much. Generally speaking, five or six women in novels are best. Finally, some encouragement. There are only about twenty chapters. The next few chapters are much better than the previous ones. According to the author's condition, they will get better and better. I hope the author will become a god.

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