During Those Years When I Was Cultivating Immortality on a Male Channel

Like it very much This is the first time I have seen a novel written in the style of a male channel with a male protagonist and a female protagonist written in the style of a female channel. It unexpectedly suits my taste. It is more to my taste in terms of characterization than a simple male channel female channel. From about chapter 40, I clearly felt that the author's writing has improved, and the plot and language are smoother and more attractive. From about chapter 90, I have classified it as my favorite (laughs) I love the emotional line! The interaction between the male and female protagonists is great, and the other two love lines are not procrastinating. The male n is also in line with the character in the process of developing feelings for the female protagonist. The female protagonist is also sober and carefree. The male protagonist and the female are talkative and do not procrastinate. The plot is the main one. The degree of description of the emotional line refers to the more typical male videos. At least in most plots, I think it is more of a comradeship (except between the male and female protagonists). I really recommend that you read to the end and skip a bit to read it. At least now I am very happy that I persisted in reading. Finally, I would like to add that the male protagonist is really a man (a compliment!!!) Ah, the last thing I want to say is that the male protagonist is very boyish.

This is the first time I have seen such a boyish-spirited male protagonist. The arrogant and ruthless male protagonist in front of outsiders is as cautious as a golden retriever when facing the female protagonist, and is filled with sincere joy. Making progress together, the love between a boy and a girl comes naturally. It really makes this old man's dream come true when he was a girl [Love]

Hearing this, Xiao Qian laughed loudly and said loudly: "The girl I like can confidently show her brilliance. Even if millions of people look up to her, I am confident that I can be on par with her! At the top, no one can match her except me!" Really, Xiao Qian is my god. He really meets all my fantasies about a young man. He is confident, arrogant, and uninhibited, but he is also very innocent in front of the heroine and respects women. Click on my homepage and see that I have read so many novels. Trust me! Go see it!

In this life, I have always been moved by male protagonists like Xiao Yan. Xiao Qian, who read this book, also felt the same way. Willful and arrogant, young and loyal. It's always very attractive. Even though it's a female channel, most of the content is about the female protagonist. But the author's description of the male protagonist is particularly good, and he really captures the boyish feeling. The emotion I felt when I watched Dou Po before, and the banter between master and disciple, seemed to be felt again in this book. I was really very happy. What I like even more is that the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are also very interesting. Compared with the vague love that arises in the male video and lasts for the whole book, the emotional line in this book is particularly clear. The male and female protagonists also quickly exchanged their minds. The progress is rapid, not sloppy, and it is very good. Five-star recommendation!

It's so good to watch. When I first read Fighting to Break the Sky, I fell into the trap of reading comics. The comics painted Nalan Yanran's character very plumply. She is my favorite. I've been looking for her meal replacement story. Today I finally found it. I like character writing. Come on, come on.

At first I didn't like the male protagonist, but later I felt that he was very high-spirited. If he liked the female protagonist, he would express it boldly. This book is very special. Both the male and female protagonists are strong. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The author will give more information.

I love reading it. I haven't read romance novels for a long time. They are all non-CP articles. But in this one, I really liked the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. I would laugh from time to time. The male and female characters in it are also pretty good. However, Jiang Chan's fate is still quite miserable. She is one of the more miserable heroines in Xiuxian novels, with a murderous sword hanging over her head at all times. The love that sprouts between the official couple male protagonist Xiao Qian and the female protagonist Jiang Chan is really easy to relate to. The male partner Qu Tongchen is the bottom line of the heroine's kindness, and she is Bai Yueguang who should not be stained with dust. Although the two of them are not in love at the moment, I prefer this, and the friendship is also very good. The heroine and supporting characters in the original article were all rescued by Jiang Chan, or were used as cannon fodder, and they also embarked on another route. The junior-sister relationship is also very good. Love to watch.

I have been following updates, and it is rare to see a fairy tale with good writing and online plots with CP. High-quality novels in tomato novels are now almost without CP. In real life, love is mostly realistic, and now even novels are only about careers. As long as the characters are not ruined and the plot is not ruined, I am still happy to read the CP novels. Good harvest in career and love.

It's a good-looking and very stylish novel. It's the first time I've seen this writing technique except for male channels cultivating immortality. It's the first time I've seen it on female channels. The plot is very tight and you can't guess what the next step will be. It makes you want to read the next chapter. Keep up the pace. Come on😊. I'll update it again. It's not enough.

Great, Jiang Jiang and Xiao Qian are a perfect match. They are wonderful and have nothing to do with it. There is a real sense of the world of cultivation, not the kind that only falls in love [Sending my heart]

In addition to feeling that the author's description of the heroine is a bit unable to shine in front of the male protagonist, and then seems to be weakened... I hope the author can improve it a lot. I really want to see more of the heroine's highlight moments (really, there is no malice), but the subject matter is very novel, and the heroine has her own achievements. It is a long process, I have to experience myself in hardships, I will encounter setbacks and face the indifference of human nature, but I still stick to my original intention. Each supporting character has his own life. Although the heroine is not crazy and cool, she will directly defeat the whole audience. If this is the case, I will feel that it is not real. Thank you to the author. The female protagonist may not be the strongest, but I really feel like she was cut short when I met the male protagonist, and I don't mean to dislike the male protagonist. I just feel that the female protagonist in the later stage... Is a bit... Too dependent on plug-ins (I will modify the review from here on). Before the first 380 chapters, I felt that the author wrote quite well. Of course, I don't mean to say that the later writing is bad, because I haven't read it yet. It's probably because there is less coloring in the description of the female protagonist's battles. Although there are some in the early stage, before rebirth. I was suppressed and beaten, but I can see the growth process of the female protagonist, from the later stage, that is, after rebirth and then meeting the male protagonist (now I have read more than 380 chapters). There are currently less coloring and descriptions of the female protagonist's battles (this time period still feels a bit lackluster). It may be because the author focuses more on describing some big scenes and highlights of the male protagonist. However, it does not mean that the female protagonist has no highlights, but the coloring is different (the anchor will still modify the comments while watching). I hope the author can work hard again [Blow kiss]

I also really like the character of the heroine. She is neither a virgin nor cold-blooded. Compared with other heroines in other fairy tales who are assimilated into the world after traveling through time, the character of the heroine in this novel is very agreeable. Yes, although we have to integrate in order to survive when we travel to other worlds, modern education is not a white religion. There should be a bottom line and three views that must be used as shackles no matter where we are. . I really appreciate that the heroine still adheres to her original intention and her own kindness along the way. She will not be indifferent because of habit, nor will she lose herself in order to survive. She is brave and resourceful, and does not run away from things. The character design is really good, the writing is really good, the plot is exciting, and it is super beautiful [Love] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

The book is really good, the writing is natural and smooth, the characters are likeable, and the plot is very attractive. I cried when I saw the part about Huangcheng Yue. It's just that the comment section is very disharmonious, and there are always many people trying to teach the author how to do things. I really can't stand the comment section. Some people think the protagonist is too conservative, and some people think the protagonist is too radical. Some people pointed at it from a God's perspective, while some people simply skipped reading and blamed the author for not explaining it clearly.

I have never been so unprotected. First of all, it looks very good. Secondly, I beg you to update it. I can't find a meal replacement. I beg you. Please let me see the one with CP without CP. It is really powerful. Please let me see more young couples. I have reprinted it several times. I beg you. If you are still ready to read this book, you can read it. This is a lightning protection article and contains slight spoilers. If you accept it, you are welcome to read it. I'm here to comment again after so long, and I'm ready to re-read it. In fact, I really like this book. I saw many people talking about the character of the heroine, and then saying that she knelt and licked the original heroine. I cannot deny that there are really many poisonous points in the front of this book, especially the issue of forgiving the thief. I can't understand it. But after thinking about it carefully, I felt relieved. The heroine is and is just an ordinary person in the original world. , Maybe it's because we've read too many cool novels about cultivating immortals, and we default that the heroine must be strong and omnipotent, and the powerful must rely on strength to slap her in the face. In the very beginning, the scene where the heroine in the secret realm was tortured by the male protagonist in her previous life. In fact, just reading the description made me feel very painful. After experiencing such torture, I think it is difficult for anyone to maintain a calm mind. Besides, these She didn't do anything. As far as I'm concerned, a person who caused me so much pain was the male protagonist of a book. As an ordinary person, he was even a nerd. And the original protagonist was already so vicious, so strong, so unscrupulous, and all of them died at the hands of the original male protagonist. I think it is for the female protagonist to gain the male protagonist's forgiveness and his favor. The best solution, so that some of the following things can actually be explained. Besides, some people say that the heroine's character is very bad. Sometimes she is very kind, and sometimes she is very decisive. In fact, I haven't read this book for a long time. And for the plot of killing the sect, I should not have any very disgusting emotions. Why do you think you want to kill all the disciples who have nothing to do with him? Why not kill? Wouldn't you feel hatred when you see someone from your sect being killed? Then why do I keep these people with hatred, and there may even be protagonists among them. With such a huge hidden danger, why do I miss such a good opportunity to release them with mercy? Why? Besides, if I remember correctly, that sect didn't seem to have done anything clean. Of course, as I said before, I haven't read this book for a long time, and maybe I've misremembered, but he's not a good person. Then he said that the master was so kind to her, so why did she become suspicious when the master was suspicious of the heroine, and then said that the master couldn't be trusted? Well, this is actually a foreshadowing by the author, because the master's purpose when he accepted his disciples was not very pure. , As a soul who comes from strange things, isn't it good to be a little defensive? To say that the heroine set up a trap, well, she is very kind and compassionate to important people, but she is very cruel to some cannon fodder. In the cultivation world of the jungle, interests come first. Why should I offend a group of geniuses? Isn't this looking for trouble for myself? And as far as I remember, in fact, few of the people killed by the heroine were innocent, and they were basically all about eliminating future troubles. The highlight of this book is actually mainly concentrated in the early stage, because many people really can't understand why the heroine kneels down to lick the important protagonist in the book. She obviously has a powerful sect, a powerful master and good strength, why doesn't she work hard to cultivate herself and then defeat them. However, the orientation of this book is obviously not the type of cool novels and strong women. I think this book The focus and highlight of it is on his emotional line. I like the way this book deals with emotions. Whether it is the emotions of the supporting character or the protagonist, I like them very much. I think the heroine did not do anything unreasonable, which is enough. Each book has its own orientation, and the protagonist of each book has the personality and style of the protagonist of each book. Basically, I've said it all. When I re-read it later, if there are some points that I think are a bit off-putting, I will also write them in the comment area. If you just don't accept this kind of novel, you can leave quickly and read another book. If you don't really mind these things, I I think I can still read it. I feel that the author also belongs to the growth type, and the heroine also belongs to the growth type. The author's writing style in the later period is obviously better than the previous one, and there are quite a lot of foreshadowings in it. Everyone has their own favorites. I wish book friends to find books they like to read. Thank you for watching! If you have doubts, questions or refutations about my ideas, you can say it in the comment area and I will explain it again according to my understanding (˵¯͒¯͒˵) I was so heartbroken when I read it in the middle of the night. I will have a different experience if I read it again. It's so hopeless. I think the author's description of emotions is really awesome. There is no real villain in this book. Everyone wants to live. From everyone's standpoint, they are right. It's so fucking desperate. Some of the previous conclusions can be overturned. Wait until I get to the details. .

Five stars. I have read many novels of this type, but really, the logic of this book is very good. The heroine has her own bottom line, but she has to break through the bottom line to kill people after experiencing various things. The self-conflict that occurs is different from the ones I have read before. I just say that things are like this and the world is over. The heroine of this book is very emotional. I have only read this part for the time being, and I am still very satisfied.

This is really the book with the longest chapters and the most chapters that I have read so far. The plot has ups and downs, ups and downs, and it is really exciting. I feel like it's ready to be finished. I hope Mu Qu will have a good side story in the end. Then I can write more side stories, and the main story isn't even enough. ๑V๑hehehe [Love]

Don't blindly believe these book reviews. This is a growth-oriented female protagonist. She is weaker than the male protagonist who has a hang-up in the early stages. Later, when they go to the upper world and work together, their strength is almost the same. Moreover, the male protagonist has a hang-up, but the female protagonist does not. If the female protagonist is an ordinary person and can be compared with the hang-up king of the male protagonist, she is particularly powerful. Very sweet

So far it seems to be good, but I have been short of books. After searching for a month, I finally found a good novel [crying]. The heroine is rational, kind-hearted and has a bottom line. She clearly knows what she wants and what she needs to bear, and she does not bow to the difficulties of fate. I will continue to pursue it, and I would like to thank the author for his hard work [love]

Good looking!!! I like Xiao Qian ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Yanran and Xiao Yan are really my feelings. I hope the original male lead is the male lead. What a passionate love! This is my first time to write a review for a novel. It's so well written, the interaction between the two of them is so beautiful, and my wife poked me so hard! Author, come on, come on, come on, come on [love]

The emotional line is great! The song is about redemption, Xiao Qian is the male protagonist, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are special. The plot of the heroine's inner shackles is very real and unique, and the interaction with the male protagonist is really awesome!

It's very nice and well-written. It's very coherent and the plot is not awkward. You can write it according to your own ideas. I quite like the facial paralysis meme. It's like having a turbulent heart and a face as calm as water. [Laughing] It would be better if the heroine is stronger. She feels like she's beaten every day. [Shy] Seeing the heroine in reality, she's so suffocated in the orphanage. I hope she can be more unrestrained in a different world. Don't suppress yourself and let yourself go. [Hold]

Although it follows the pattern of some male-video novels, the early stages of the story are a bit bland, and you may feel that the female protagonist has no special features😳. But as long as you get through the early stages, the subsequent plot is super interesting, the stories of the supporting characters are particularly relatable, and some of the atmosphere is wonderfully written. By the way, I want to give you a compliment, Jiang Jiang and Xiao Qian are so right, what kind of treasure boy is Xiao Xiao? [Send heart] [Send heart] I really like this kind of love that goes in both directions and helps each other [shy] [shy]. (Beeping quietly) I feel so sorry for Qu Tongchen in his previous life [crazy]. I feel that his story line should slowly unfold with Jiang Jiang's memory. I really want to meet the bright, sincere and young young man in my previous life again. I hope that I can be merciful in my writing. Our ditty must be good [please update] [please update]

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks really good, it gives people the same type of fantasy novels that were all the rage in 2010, each with its own characteristics and a hundred flowers blooming. Maybe the use of the plot of Fighting to Break the Sky makes people a little speechless at first, but later on The more I read, the better it gets. Every character is full-bodied and the plot is rich. The author also has some cultural background. The writing is very good and the fighting scenes are not exaggerated. The heroine is not an invincible character and has been growing steadily in the fight. The male protagonist is also flesh and blood. There is no Yingying in Yanyan's heart, but the female protagonist.

The teacher wrote it beautifully🥺🥺🥺🥺The plot is very interesting, fresh and refined, the writing is not childish, and the characters are very cute (I bought the female protagonist and the original male protagonist lightly). It's just that I came too early and can't get enough of it🥀🥀🥀Please keep writing🥺👉👈I will always support you🥰🥰

The author, please [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] It's really good-looking. The storyline is also very interesting. The characters are full-bodied, more, more, more, more. I like the heroine so much. It's really good-looking. It's really good-looking. How come the score is so low? [Crying] Come on, author, please update more and attract more readers. I want to read it. I haven't seen such an interesting novel for a long time.

It looks great. The setting of this book is very interesting. I hope that the heroine will return to reality without cp in the end. That kind of ending with a touch of melancholy. The heroine does not have to be the most beautiful in the world [laughing and crying] The heroine has her own charm, which is very good. The author can work hard and update 10,000 words a day is not a dream.

The novel has already reached a level, let me tell you my thoughts. I also came across this book on cultivating immortality from someone else's recommendation. I have recently become a loyal fan of cultivating immortality books and have read a lot of them. Currently, there are really only two good fairy tales that I have read to the end. The other fairy tales are either serialized or illogical, and many of them are a bit far-fetched. Anyway, I haven't read many of them. The interesting thing about this novel is that I can read it over and over again. Although it is not finished, I read it back and forth 3-4 times. The last novel that I read over and over again was seven or eight years ago. Why can I continue to read this novel? I have to admire the author's writing style. He has great skills and a lot of foreshadowing. At the same time, the emotions are delicate and the logic is clear. Why the heroine travels through time is also explained in the text. The personality traits of the heroine and the male protagonist and other secondary characters are very full. The emotional line is also delicate and smooth, not so sudden. It is very interesting. The corners of your mouth can't move in the fun part, and the knife is really uncomfortable. Also wanted is the fighting scene, which is very exciting, and the details are great. The heroine comes from time to time, either to fight, or on the way to fight. The fighting ability is also developed step by step from the little chick, and the blood is boiling when watching it. However, there are many differences between this novel and male channel novels. The background is very similar, but I have to say that the male protagonist in the author's novel has a better character. For the female protagonist, you can feel the love between the two, instead of the stallion feeling in the male channel novels. There is mercy everywhere (a common problem in many male channel novels, I am YY). Anyway, after reading this novel, I have developed a love brain. 1. There are a lot of foreshadowings in this novel, but there are too many foreshadowings. Many people think there is something wrong with the logic without seeing the back part, and abandon the novel. This is also one of the low-rated ones. 2. Xiao Qian is an innocent boy and has no harem! No harem! No harem! As you can see from the back, when the two of them are together, Xiao Qian has always put Jiang Chan first. The two of them have always been firm to each other and have never misunderstood others. 3. Each supporting character has a distinct personality, each one is very interesting, the story is also very exciting, and the author's writing is excellent 4. The heroine is a growth type. She is really struggling to survive every step of the way. She grows up step by step in every crisis, and uses her wit to turn danger into safety. It was very exciting to meet someone who was much better than her and never gave up even if she fought until the last moment.

It's very interesting. I finally came across a different novel. I've read all kinds of stereotyped fairy tales, and the routines are basically the same. But the plot of this novel is very unique. It's different from other fairy tales. It looks a bit like a Dou Po fan, but it's different. The middle part of the plot from the perspective of the heroine is different from Dou Po. It's quite exciting. The plot has ups and downs. It's worth reading. It's rare for a bookworm like me to find such a novel. Please give the author a big boost and update it. 5 Points dedicated By the way, author, the foreshadowing you laid earlier, the sword Yun Ni gave to Jiang Chan, Xiao Qian didn't know it was given by Jiang Chan, and it seems that the special function of this sword was not revealed later. How do you bury this pit?

Wow, how come there is such a good article? The male protagonist is written in the style of a male video, and the female protagonist is written in the style of a female video. It is amazing. In those female videos I have seen in the past, the male protagonist is the Immortal Lord and Demon Master, but this one is about a high-spirited young man, especially frivolous. , And they are evenly matched in strength. We can fight side by side. The most important thing is that Xiao Qian is really loved by him. Both the male and female protagonists expressed their love openly. I really cried to death in the chapters where the female protagonist committed suicide [crying] (big update soon [please update]

Thanks to my patience, I discovered a good work. Hahaha, for the first fifty or so chapters, I thought it was just a mediocre time-travel fantasy novel with no highlights, but later on it was simply brilliantly written, with full characters and strong combat power settings. The characters and the heroine each have their own interests and characteristics in getting along with each other, which made me smile. There are also plots that make the tip of the nose sore and make people cry. The heroine has been saving herself. Unlike male-channeled novels, women are just a dispensable background to promote the plot. In the author's writing, they all have strong vitality. When I asked Xiao Qian to be the male protagonist, I was a little disdainful and wanted to give up the article, but when I saw Jiang Jiang, who was trapped on the high platform of fate, and Xiao Qian, who rebelled against all living beings, I felt happy for Jiang Jiang, which made my heart well up with a warm and majestic move. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] Even though the world is prosperous and prosperous, suddenly it is only with the rest of the eyes. The burning wings behind her and Jiang Jiang hugging her in her arms reminded me of this sentence: "There is no such warm embrace in the world." This relationship is very sincere and soft. The male and female protagonists are eagles walking alone, but they are also beasts walking together. It's a very healthy and intimate relationship, thumbs up. The article also contains the romance of probability theory. The basic idea of ​​probability theory is that some things happen for no reason. You are in this world at this time, and I am a ray of soul that has erased the past and future and came to the present. I am not here for you, but I am here for you. We met without any reason, it was Jiang Jiang who was Xiao Qian alone. Woohoo~ That's great. WuXX[cry][cry][cry]