Fate**********

Let me give you a good review first. It is not easy to write an article, and this meal is getting worse and worse. After reading the author's article, I want to say why it is the same type and the same routine as Mo Ye's book. Mr. Mo's is popular, but the author's is not. My personal analysis is that Mo Ye's opening chapter is concise and fast-paced, laying down the foreshadowing before rebirth. After rebirth, he quickly reversed and slapped the face, focusing on one cool thing. The author's writing did not meet expectations. After rebirth, it did not immediately connect to the point of hatred before death. The rebirth was on a girl, and the explanation was too heavy, which slowed down the rhythm. It also looked a bit fantasy and the heroine's purpose was not strong. My personal suggestion is to focus on foreshadowing the plot points, improve the rhythm and highlights, highlight the purpose of the characters, and the plot framework should be orderly. If the author doesn't like my long article, let me know and I will delete it. I wish the author a great sale of his article.

The plot is exciting, and the foreshadowing is explained clearly at the end. It makes you want to read it. I haven't seen such a novel in a long time. It's just a bit short. I hope the author will update it more, otherwise it won't be enough.

Super exciting and very beautiful. After the heroine was reborn, she began to study medicine and Feng Shui!

The heroine in this book has clear grievances and clear content descriptions. I like Song Wei very much.

Very good, there are few books that keep me reading

It's very good-looking, the dual-line revenge is exciting, the world view is great, the heroine's character is vivid and three-dimensional, and there's a lot of excitement. Holy shit! ! How can it be so beautiful? It's so beautiful! The author really knows how to write!

Wonderful! The plot is fascinating! Ups and downs! Worth recommending!

Nice! It's so fun to watch!

It's quite exciting, I still want to watch it

Good, good, good, good, good, good

It's quite beautiful! Come on come on

Very good, very good

Very good, the heroine has clear grudges and is worth watching

A very nice book,

I read another book by the author. I think this book...... Em......

Quite exciting, not bad