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The writing is good and the plot is well arranged and very comfortable. The most important point is that the heroine had better keep her body intact. The author also wrote in Chapter 29 of the article, "Only you, I have not completely obtained. Among the relationships that Qin Li has ever had, only Ling Ya has the slowest progress. Not being able to get her always makes him uncomfortable." This sentence gave me, a person with a bit of mental mysophobia, the motivation to continue reading. Nowadays, many people do not read novels so carefully. The author had better explain this clearly in the article in the future. Keep up to date! It's really well written [like].

It's very beautiful. It's not like the author's first time writing a book. The storyline is exquisitely arranged, especially in dealing with the emotional problems of the male and female protagonists, and resolving the conflicts between the two one by one. However, I saw two living people with flesh and blood, which is something I rarely see in the marriage-changing novels. However, the writing on changing marriages is in a slump, and I don't know if the author can persist. I am very much looking forward to the author's updates [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

You... Are very good, the plot interests me very much, it is quite vivid, please update it! ! !

I read a lot of cross-marriage stories and some of them are time-travel ones. Your story line is very good, but there are some places where it feels a bit contradictory, but overall it's good. Keep up the good work [Chigua]

It's very good to read. I read Regression Line first. It's great that the two books are linked to each other. The length is also appropriate so that I won't feel tired. It's so satisfying to read two books in three days. I support the author greatly [Blow a kiss]

The author's writing style is very good, and the subject of marriage change is also very good. The only flaw is that the plot develops a bit too fast and the time span is a bit large. More than 100 chapters describe the story of one or two years, and finally jumps to the marriage. This is not a good point. More details can be described. , Think more about the story during this period. The villain is an indispensable element in a novel, but there are too many villains in it, but few descriptions, and there is no tense situation. I hope the author can put more effort into these aspects.

It's a very good article that won't rub my brain to the ground, without any obvious collapse of logic or character. The author's writing style is a bit green, and some plots are too forced, but the overall flaws are not hidden, and I can read it immersed. I like it when the heroine and the hero speak directly. I am a straightforward person and never mince words. The heroine's character is a bit similar to mine, but I can find a sense of empathy. In addition, this is the only CEO story in which the male protagonist's business is in line with the president's personality. When guessing the male protagonist's identity, the clues and reasoning are also well written and seamless. Moreover, the male protagonist does not repeatedly struggle with his own identity. It is very good and has no ink. All in all, this is the most comfortable movie I have ever seen in Tomato. The speed at the end is ridiculously fast. Anyway, it is very nice and sweet.

As a novice author, this is already very good, but I still have to talk about the problem with the plot, that is, the protagonist's identity is exposed and the male protagonist quickly accepts the protagonist after knowing the truth. The plot develops too fast. It would be better to slow down the pace in this section, and there are no other problems. If the author wants to further his studies in the changing marriage genre, he can try other types. After all, the daily limit is not high, and there are not many points that can be written. It is actually very important for the main character to change from male to female. (It is best to write this process in a long and detailed way, mainly based on the plot). Coupled with an excellent plot, it will be an excellent changing marriage article. However, the biggest taboo in a changing marriage article is not to be toxic. Come on, author!

I was very surprised to read this book. After reading a lot of novels, I discovered this female novel. I have tried a lot of articles about female videos before, but not many of them were enjoyable to read. This book can actually contain both male and female videos. I don't know if it's because the number of words is too small. The author has some details and a general description, but overall this book is very enjoyable to read, especially in the later stages when the speed of the car is a bit fast and the child's nutrition cannot keep up [laughter]. At first I thought this book was only related to the Tropic of Tropic book, but then another one also appeared, and the three books were related to each other. It was quite surprising. It is definitely a better book. After all, the mainstream nowadays is all about lesbians. There are not many people who are reborn as girls and have male and female partners like this. Please support it. I believe I am a brother, so come and take a look, but I have to keep up with nutrition [laughter]

It's quite interesting, and it's also a story about changing a marriage! It's almost turning my ideal into reality. Maybe the world won't allow it, and I can't jump off the Ferris wheel, and I don't like eating chicken breasts... But you can dream, go to bed now~[sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

It's very beautiful, I don't think there's anything unreasonable about it [Adoration]

This is really well written. I have read several sex stories, but none of them are as impressive and sweet as this one 😂😂😂 The unfinished feeling after reading it is really great, especially the three books are linked together. When you read the third book, how excited are you to see the heroine of this book appear? (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

It's great, I like it. Come on, update it as hard as you can to get 1000 chapters.

It's pretty cool, and it's fun to watch it occasionally

The concept is very novel, and it is a genre I have never read before. The writing is very good, and it is comparable to the "Author, Your Man Lets You Update" (a classic 17-year-old marriage novel) that I have read before. Come on, author, I support you!

I have always really liked this book. I thought it was very, very good, so I kept it. Well, I couldn't find a better book. Then I found out that it was updated today, so I went to read it. I didn't expect it to be finished. I'm really sorry. This ending is really very unsatisfactory The writing is pretty good among beginners, keep up the good work

All I can say is that it's an epic collaboration. I read the author's first novel first, then skipped this one and read Tropic of the Moon. I then re-read the three books and read them again. It's really good and I highly recommend it.

The Tropic of the Moon came just now, and it was good to watch. Compared with the two books, I felt that the pace in the early stages was a bit fast. The male protagonist's reaction to accepting things caused a serious sense of déjà vu in the previous chapters. If you can't accept it, you may not be able to watch it. I like the book very much, please support the author

Apart from being a bit short, I can only say 100 points! ! ! 100 Points! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It can be said that this is the best transformation novel I have read in more than 1,000 hours. The subject matter is novel, the plot does not have many holes, and the most important thing is not Lily! ! ! ! If you like this one, give it a try, okay!

The writing style is smooth and natural, and the style is bright and relaxed. It is hard to believe that this is the first book by a new author. Although it occasionally fails in one or two places that are not critical but that readers pay more attention to, it can still be called a good book.

A true marriage story, the story develops in a fresh and natural way, with an occasional bit of bloody plot, which is harmless. There is no extra chapter at the end, which is a bit bad. I suggest you briefly talk about the important supporting characters! [Like] [Smile] [Sending Hearts] [Laughing] [Attention] [Full] [Like] [Admiration]

As for this, I think it is very interesting, and although the content in it is a bit different, it is also very interesting, and there will be some exciting points. I still like to read things like the business struggles of the upper class.

It's very good for a novice author, although the writing is a bit immature and the plot is a bit old-fashioned, not as good as other reviews say. But in general, the plot has no poisonous points, the writing does not affect the viewing experience very much, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very sweet. So I still give five stars to encourage you.

The author really likes your writing and plot. The Tropic of Tropic of the Moon pierced me with a deep knife. When I read Tropic of Tropic, I burst into tears and cut my wrists. But when I read this book, it was really sweet. It was sweet from beginning to end. We really want to add your contact information. Is that okay? [Love] [Love] [Love]

The plot is generally sweet, with a few exceptions, but it doesn't feel uncomfortable, but is a good embellishment. In addition, the author handled the emotional process very well. The characters of the male and female protagonists did not collapse, and the settings were also improved. It is a rare masterpiece!

Nice! The writing and plot are perfect! ! One of the few stories about changing marriage that I still want to read after reading it! It is one of the few novels that I can read and the ending makes me feel very reluctant to leave it [Adoration][Adoration]

It's awesome. It was obviously hard to accept the idea of ​​a man being willing to be with a man at first, but I still kept watching it and found it more interesting the more I watched it. The plot and everything seemed pretty good, I recommend watching it.

The author writes very well, keep up the good work.

The ending was perfect and the story was great! Recommend!

Yes, the other reviews are right, it's really great! It's just that I think this pig's feet act a bit emotionally, maybe it's because of the body's weird behavior.