Accidentally passed by a passerby, she holds the script in hand.
The author said that as long as you conquer the male protagonist who has been secretly in love with the original owner for nine years, you can go home.
Zhou Jinxi is full of confidence and has been secretly in love with her for nine years. Wouldn't he win in a matter of minutes?
"Man! Give you a chance to get me!"
But in exchange for one sentence
"Are you sick..."
Very good! It doesn't matter if she travels back in time to a time when the male partner hasn't started to have a crush on her yet, she can also take her time to conquer it.
But what about the sweet campus text that was promised?
Why did it become a horror and suspense novel?
The people around her have deviated from the original text and become strange. The schizophrenic father, the deskmate pretending to be Bai Lian, the young man who was saved casually, and the quarreling sister. Who is the murderer who wants to kill her? ! ! !
Reader comments
The plot is quite special. I watched it in one sitting. I really want to know who the male protagonist is? Yi Chengyan? Xu Mingzhou? Zuo Zhihang? Fenghe? [Thinking] Can the author tell me? If you don't tell me, I will want to blame the heroine and Shui Lingzhi. Come on, author [please update]
My 🐴, what a wonderful article this is, I love it so much! The character creation is super good [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I like the character of the heroine very much, and the plot is super, super, super interesting! ! ! ! It's amazing. Although I don't know if there is a male protagonist, every couple really kisses each other, hehehehehehe('▽'), and it's a little scary. I don't have enough brains for that unknown feeling. Anyway, I just like [blowing kisses]
Personal opinion
The plot is quite good, but I personally feel that the mood swings in some places and the logic of some details are a bit confusing. There is a kind of forced plot conflict, which may be related to the overall continuation style of the novel. Part of the very simple reasons will be ignored by the heroine due to a strange combination of circumstances, and then all kinds of anxiety and other negative emotions will begin. This kind of plot is a bit too much, and the description is not good, but this is not a shortcoming, but the perception is not good. If the heroine needs this kind of plot growth, the author can consider another way to describe it. There are also some supporting characters' behaviors. There are too few clues. It feels inexplicable. Some of these have a feeling of separation.
I hope the author can write better articles
I really read it carefully. If this is the author's debut novel, it is really well written! ! ! In fact, this book mainly focuses on the plot line, with relatively few emotional lines. It is generally suspenseful. The ending unfolds the entire story from the perspective of the heroine. During this period, there are entanglements with many supporting male characters (readers who are concerned can avoid this)!
As for the emotional line between the heroine and Yi Chengyan, I felt that they were in a gradual process, but to be honest, the scenes between the two of them were still relatively small, and the plot felt a bit rushed in the later stages. Maybe the author did not write too much due to the flow of the novel. It is detailed and most of the pitfalls have been more or less filled, but there are still some characters' subsequent endings and pitfalls that have not been explained clearly, such as Feng He's follow-up, Zhou Yan's follow-up, and the endings and causes and consequences of Su Yuhang and so on (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh).
There is also the final emotional line between the heroine and Yi Chengyan. . Can you write more😭😭😭After all, it took Yi Chengyan three years to wait for the person he likes. Although I know that if I write more because of this, it will become a romance novel, but I really want to see more interactions between them. . . Fortunately, the final ending is he, and the author must stick to it! ! ! Post a long comment here to support the author! ! Don't give up duck! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
The suspenseful color is rich. From the beginning, I kept thinking about who is the real murderer. The plot is compact and addictive to watch. It is a pity for Feng He. I like him and Xu and Zuo very much. Every character is very real, flesh and blood, and very comfortable. I like this article very much. I will give it a thumbs up! [Sending Hearts]
The plot is wonderful! ! ! And it makes people want to keep watching. The characters in the article are very well drawn. The reversal is also huge. It's different from the suspense stories I usually read. It's very novel and attractive. I hope it won't collapse in the future. Don't be in a hurry to write. Take a break when you are tired. (Also, save more manuscripts.) Because there is really not enough to read. Also, I would like to praise the author, the writing is very nice. Keep up the good work, I'm very optimistic about you.
The characters are distinct and distinctive, and there is a suspenseful plot on campus. There are many foreshadowings and mysteries. I really want to know the plot behind it [please update]
It's really good to read, the plot is very novel, and the writing is also good. It's the first time I've read an article with this kind of content. It's really good. I hope the author can do more.
I think it's quite interesting, and the character creation is also very vivid. I quite like the heroine's character. She has a good look. I also like the good-looking OvO.
Very nice author ~ Don't be discouraged, there are still many people reading this article [Blow a kiss]
It's very confusing, with so many elements, but I just want to know who the male protagonist is?
The plot is really great! I was hooked upon reading it, and there are a lot of foreshadowings waiting to be revealed by the author! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's really super good-looking, but I'm a little unhappy. I saw an author who I really like. I like basically every book by him, but he also wrote a mystery, which is really not good-looking. When I saw this book, I thought wow, it's really good-looking.
Nice! Brain-burning! Looking forward to the follow-up!
It's beautiful. I really want to know the truth.
The shop is very big, I'll give it five stars first.
Very nice and attractive, [like]
It looks good, but I'm just curious about who the male protagonist is.
It's very interesting, I'm looking forward to the author's new book. 😙
It's pretty good. The scene between Feng He and the final heroine was really well written. Overall, it's okay.
I think it's very interesting. The plot is very interlocking, which is very attractive to me, and it also makes me have the illusion of having a brain [laughs][laughs][laughs]
It's really unexpected and reasonable, it's really amazing [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
I stumbled across this article, it's really interesting. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Very good, very good
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I thought the first two chapters were a joke, but when I read them I felt a chill go down my spine and my brain began to burn. The latter part was a little bit cruel, but overall it was okay.
It's okay and pretty good-looking.
It's so beautiful, I really like the heroine in it, but what I regret the most is Feng He Wu Wu Wu
Very beautiful, well set up, and very brain-burning
The setting of the story is novel, and the investigation was carried out on campus. Although there are some unclear explanations and some logical loopholes, the whole storyline is novel and overall it is quite good [Like]
The plot is quite special. I watched it in one sitting. I really want to know who the male protagonist is? Yi Chengyan? Xu Mingzhou? Zuo Zhihang? Fenghe? [Thinking] Can the author tell me? If you don't tell me, I will want to blame the heroine and Shui Lingzhi. Come on, author [please update]
My 🐴, what a wonderful article this is, I love it so much! The character creation is super good [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I like the character of the heroine very much, and the plot is super, super, super interesting! ! ! ! It's amazing. Although I don't know if there is a male protagonist, every couple really kisses each other, hehehehehehe('▽'), and it's a little scary. I don't have enough brains for that unknown feeling. Anyway, I just like [blowing kisses]
Personal opinion The plot is quite good, but I personally feel that the mood swings in some places and the logic of some details are a bit confusing. There is a kind of forced plot conflict, which may be related to the overall continuation style of the novel. Part of the very simple reasons will be ignored by the heroine due to a strange combination of circumstances, and then all kinds of anxiety and other negative emotions will begin. This kind of plot is a bit too much, and the description is not good, but this is not a shortcoming, but the perception is not good. If the heroine needs this kind of plot growth, the author can consider another way to describe it. There are also some supporting characters' behaviors. There are too few clues. It feels inexplicable. Some of these have a feeling of separation. I hope the author can write better articles
I really read it carefully. If this is the author's debut novel, it is really well written! ! ! In fact, this book mainly focuses on the plot line, with relatively few emotional lines. It is generally suspenseful. The ending unfolds the entire story from the perspective of the heroine. During this period, there are entanglements with many supporting male characters (readers who are concerned can avoid this)! As for the emotional line between the heroine and Yi Chengyan, I felt that they were in a gradual process, but to be honest, the scenes between the two of them were still relatively small, and the plot felt a bit rushed in the later stages. Maybe the author did not write too much due to the flow of the novel. It is detailed and most of the pitfalls have been more or less filled, but there are still some characters' subsequent endings and pitfalls that have not been explained clearly, such as Feng He's follow-up, Zhou Yan's follow-up, and the endings and causes and consequences of Su Yuhang and so on (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh). There is also the final emotional line between the heroine and Yi Chengyan. . Can you write more😭😭😭After all, it took Yi Chengyan three years to wait for the person he likes. Although I know that if I write more because of this, it will become a romance novel, but I really want to see more interactions between them. . . Fortunately, the final ending is he, and the author must stick to it! ! ! Post a long comment here to support the author! ! Don't give up duck! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
The suspenseful color is rich. From the beginning, I kept thinking about who is the real murderer. The plot is compact and addictive to watch. It is a pity for Feng He. I like him and Xu and Zuo very much. Every character is very real, flesh and blood, and very comfortable. I like this article very much. I will give it a thumbs up! [Sending Hearts]
The plot is wonderful! ! ! And it makes people want to keep watching. The characters in the article are very well drawn. The reversal is also huge. It's different from the suspense stories I usually read. It's very novel and attractive. I hope it won't collapse in the future. Don't be in a hurry to write. Take a break when you are tired. (Also, save more manuscripts.) Because there is really not enough to read. Also, I would like to praise the author, the writing is very nice. Keep up the good work, I'm very optimistic about you.
The characters are distinct and distinctive, and there is a suspenseful plot on campus. There are many foreshadowings and mysteries. I really want to know the plot behind it [please update]
It's really good to read, the plot is very novel, and the writing is also good. It's the first time I've read an article with this kind of content. It's really good. I hope the author can do more.
I think it's quite interesting, and the character creation is also very vivid. I quite like the heroine's character. She has a good look. I also like the good-looking OvO.
Very nice author ~ Don't be discouraged, there are still many people reading this article [Blow a kiss]
It's very confusing, with so many elements, but I just want to know who the male protagonist is?
The plot is really great! I was hooked upon reading it, and there are a lot of foreshadowings waiting to be revealed by the author! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's really super good-looking, but I'm a little unhappy. I saw an author who I really like. I like basically every book by him, but he also wrote a mystery, which is really not good-looking. When I saw this book, I thought wow, it's really good-looking.
Nice! Brain-burning! Looking forward to the follow-up!
It's beautiful. I really want to know the truth.
The shop is very big, I'll give it five stars first.
Very nice and attractive, [like]
It looks good, but I'm just curious about who the male protagonist is.
It's very interesting, I'm looking forward to the author's new book. 😙
It's pretty good. The scene between Feng He and the final heroine was really well written. Overall, it's okay.
I think it's very interesting. The plot is very interlocking, which is very attractive to me, and it also makes me have the illusion of having a brain [laughs][laughs][laughs]
It's really unexpected and reasonable, it's really amazing [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
I stumbled across this article, it's really interesting. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Very good, very good
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I thought the first two chapters were a joke, but when I read them I felt a chill go down my spine and my brain began to burn. The latter part was a little bit cruel, but overall it was okay.
It's okay and pretty good-looking.
It's so beautiful, I really like the heroine in it, but what I regret the most is Feng He Wu Wu Wu
Very beautiful, well set up, and very brain-burning
The setting of the story is novel, and the investigation was carried out on campus. Although there are some unclear explanations and some logical loopholes, the whole storyline is novel and overall it is quite good [Like]