
Ryza's Immoral Atelier
莱莎的不道德炼金工坊
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 219k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
104Chapters
4.8kReads · all time
In booklists 1
Reader comments 14
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莱莎的不道德炼金工坊
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Let's look at opening a store with Lysa. It turned out that the online shopping system plus cooking was added. In order to avoid misunderstandings, I specifically read the chapter names at the end, which also revolved around cooking + conflict descriptions. Immortal cultivators have come. Lysa and Atelier Alchemy are just backgrounds. The title of the book is deceptive. There aren't many Lysa fanfics, which is a pity
This book should be called, "With a shopping system, start a fire in a different world" Waiting for nothing.
It's a very good book. One star for the protagonist because she's perverted, one star for the heroine who is really pretty, and one star for the system. The online shopping is a pretty good plot. Then there are the details. Some details can show that the author lacks experience and richness. Another point about the writing and plot is that due to the author's lack of experience, it seems that it is best not to use any brains in the plot, and just watch it. I am not the one who is embarrassed by not using brains. Therefore, the personal evaluation is good, but due to the personal style, the novel is average. But both writing and plot can be practiced. As long as you have a thorough knowledge, there will be no problem. The future is promising.
It's a medium cliché. Readers who haven't read much about otherworldly travel can take a look. The system can threaten the protagonist. The protagonist has to tell others about his identity as a time traveler in order not to be found out. The main reason is that such a powerful plug-in protagonist doesn't have any new ideas and is a bit verbose.
The author's stall is too big. Digging holes like crazy. In other words, too many holes have been dug. Too detailed. It's annoying to hear.
I haven't seen a book like this in ten years where the system forces people to be eunuchs. I really miss it. I wanted to kill the author back then, but I could only communicate with the author in the Q group.
The title of the book is wrong. I came here for alchemy. What it turns out is that he travels to another world with online shopping skills. Conquer the world by cooking. Waiting for nothing.
Not a bad hour, worth watching
A role model for our generation 😏
Everyone understands it, and they are a good-looking group 😏