[Two male leads / Xianxia fantasy / Fighting against malicious transmigrators / Includes an unhinged character / Dark themes / Happy ending]
Please note! The story follows two alternating timelines. Pay attention to the A and B labels in the chapter titles. Odd-numbered chapters are [Timeline A], and even-numbered chapters are [Timeline B].
A: Bai Mu × Yin He Tian (BL, no fixed top or bottom; the main story is pure romance, so choose your own pairing)
Bai Mu is the original Child of Destiny. He was supposed to face one setback after another, grow stronger, and ultimately become a god. But a transmigrator invaded, trying to steal Bai Mu's destiny. They wreaked havoc on the world and nearly destroyed everything Bai Mu held dear...
B: Ji Wuyou (no pairing)
Originally, Ji Wuyou was never meant to have a story. But as a child, he was unlucky enough to inherit Bai Mu's destiny, and became the target of the transmigrator instead. Imprisoned and stripped of everything, this false Child of Destiny, bearing the world's fate, had no choice but to begin growing stronger with help from another outsider, hoping to restart the world and save everything...
The two timelines will converge.
The true and false Children of Destiny will join forces to restart the world.
There are three transmigrators or outsiders in this story: one on the side of good and two villains. All the other characters are natives of the world.
One more note: This is an original novel featuring my OCs. Apart from the OC characters, it also includes characters based on myself, my partner, and several friends. Please don't call the characters “skinsuits.” It's very disrespectful to them. We believe that World 014 is real, and that we are the OCs of our characters. The characters are the originals, with independent consciousness. We are merely counterparts from another world, also with independent consciousness. So please keep our world separate from World 014. Thank you.
I really like different timelines running at the same time, and I also like stories that seem independent but echo in the end, so I watched it as soon as I saw it! The ideas are super interesting! But after reading a small part, I felt that it felt so fragmented. The way the story was told was similar to the style of a certain article. There was too little information mixed in one chapter. The story changed perspective again before two steps of development. It was very abrupt. I always took a moment to realize that this was a new chapter. Can you consider merging it? For example, write a timeline for several chapters, let one thing end, and then give a pause? Or write it as a collection of short stories, with a break at the end of each chapter. The beginning of each chapter is directly triggered by attractive language or events, skipping some trivial events, and just focus on the text. Or focus on a similar person and thing and tell different reactions in two lines? The current way of speaking is more suitable for two books, or two chapters, which can be opened at the same time, but it is best to classify them into two categories, otherwise there will always be a feeling of embarrassment like being called to buy groceries halfway through playing a game 😢
I finally sorted out my cultivation and I hope it can help everyone. Ji's side is not there yet. Bai Mu's here is: Establishment<Enlightenment<Gathering Qi<Golden Pill<Immortal Way<Mahayana<Nascent Soul<True God In addition, the author's writing is very beautiful, keep up the good work
Super pretty!!! But sometimes I also wonder, is Bai Mu really a child of luck? I feel that he has been falling, from birth to growth, as if his heart was beating with fear at every step, and everything he gained seemed to be lost. Even in the B line, he was alone in the secret realm of reincarnation. Where did Yin Hetian go? Is he still alive? I didn't dare to think about it... Compared to the title of Son of Luck, he was not lucky. He didn't have any treasures that he picked up casually, and he didn't have the cultivation level that he could easily acquire. I feel that maybe he is more like an ill-fated genius than a son of luck favored by heaven. As for Ji Wuyou, I think he is less fortunate than Bai Mu but luckier than him, because Ji Wuyou was born in an era invaded by time travellers, so the world he lives in is chaotic, the worldview is distorted, and the responsibilities he bears are too heavy, but he is lucky to meet Mo. Compared with Yin Hetian and Bai Mu's past pain and lack of growth, Mo knows everything about Ji Wuyou, so Ji Wuyou will not be alone and helpless no matter how difficult it is. The insights I gained from Ji Wuyou's growth made me think that he should be more of an educator or savior than a son of fate. Finally, thank you very much for bringing me this great story, I really like it! I hope you will continue to do more!!
It looks good. If you like it, post more. The ab double line is really enjoyable. Whether it is God's will or Ji Wuyou will work hard to fight against the time travellers. I really love those articles that speak out for women (after all, I am also a woman, and the fact that the author respects women and recognizes women is enough for me to support). Not to mention that the author's own three views are correct, and the plot also has its ups and downs. It is really super super super good-looking! Strong recommendation Then just look forward to the completion of this and the next work! Inmates post ~
Why hasn't anyone noticed this book?! So pretty! The author can also do handwriting
Very nice!!! (Attracted by the author's handwriting)
Let me review the book! I was constantly shocked by the strong logic, and the many turns were not blunt. In the early stage of A, the transformation of Bai Mu, a young man, was particularly profound. There was a subtle and silent change, with a full growth coefficient. In the realm of beasts, he was forbearing in front of Zhe Yu, and his strategic planning was rigorous and rigorous. Later, when he returned, he still had the spirit of a young man but had a cruel personality that was moving. It was really good and true to be able to face up to his feelings with Yin and Tian. . Yin Hetian's young master is neither hard-hearted nor rigid. While he is noble and awe-inspiring, he is full of humaneness and a true gentleman's demeanor. He is tolerant and even indulgent towards Bai Mu. This contrast is really sweet. He is worthy of the yearly missing person orders in the city, the reopening of Bai Qiangwei every season, and the piece of paper that everyone is fine. . They are persistent and can talk to each other sincerely. Who can say that there is no true love? . . The B-line Xuanzhi is extremely sassy, has a real male ghost style, is crazy handsome, and has the feeling of being in control of the overall situation. It feels like he is both free and cautious at the same time. Ji Wuyou's growth is also the result of the gradual and stable growth along the way, which is also accumulated through the teachings of Teacher Mo and Xuanzhi. Just watch it, family members, and wait to watch it again after you finish it)
Why is no one watching?
Very beautiful!!! It can be seen that the author put great care into writing a story 😘[Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
I like it very much. The dual-line narrative is very novel. Anyone who has written it knows that it is difficult to write (it gives me a headache to write this kind of thing). The teacher's writing is very good and the stories are very interesting. I highly praise you.