[Two male protagonists/Fantasy cultivator/Anti-unscrupulous time traveler/Contains crazy characters/Contains dark plot/Good ending]
Attention! The timeline of this article is double-open (pay attention to AB in the title) (odd-numbered chapters are [A-line]) (even-numbered chapters are [B-line])
A: Bai Mu
Bai Mu, the original son of destiny, was supposed to experience various setbacks, continue to grow, and eventually become a god. However, the time-travelers invaded in the middle, trying to seize Bai Mu's luck, wreaking havoc on the world, and almost destroying everything in Bai Mu...
B: Ji Wuyou (no cp)
Originally there would be no story about Ji Wuyou, but when he was young, he unfortunately inherited Bai Mu's destiny, took over the target of the time traveler, was imprisoned, and lost everything. With the help of another external force, this son of fake destiny who was responsible for the destiny of the world was forced to start growing up, trying to restart the world and save everything...
The two lines will merge.
The true and false Sons of Destiny will join forces to restart the world.
There are three time-travelers/outsiders in this article, one is a protagonist, two are villains, and the rest of the characters are all indigenous people.
Another note: Since this is my original OC novel, in addition to OC characters, there are self-designed characters, self-designed characters by lovers, and self-defined characters by multiple friends. However, please do not refer to the characters as "holsters". This is very disrespectful to the characters. We believe that this 014 world is a real world, and we are the OCs of our OC, and the characters are the ontology, the ontology of independent consciousness. We are just clones in another world, clones with independent consciousness, so please separate the world we are in from the 014 world, thank you
Reader comments
I really like different timelines running at the same time, and I also like stories that seem independent but echo in the end, so I watched it as soon as I saw it! The ideas are super interesting!
But after reading a small part, I felt that it felt so fragmented. The way the story was told was similar to the style of a certain article. There was too little information mixed in one chapter. The story changed perspective again before two steps of development. It was very abrupt. I always took a moment to realize that this was a new chapter. Can you consider merging it? For example, write a timeline for several chapters, let one thing end, and then give a pause?
Or write it as a collection of short stories, with a break at the end of each chapter. The beginning of each chapter is directly triggered by attractive language or events, skipping some trivial events, and just focus on the text.
Or focus on a similar person and thing and tell different reactions in two lines?
The current way of speaking is more suitable for two books, or two chapters, which can be opened at the same time, but it is best to classify them into two categories, otherwise there will always be a feeling of embarrassment like being called to buy groceries halfway through playing a game [crying]
I finally sorted out my cultivation and I hope it can help everyone. Ji's side is not there yet. Bai Mu's here is: Establishment<Enlightenment<Gathering Qi<Golden Pill<Immortal Way<Mahayana<Nascent Soul<True God
In addition, the author's writing is very beautiful, keep up the good work
Super pretty! ! ! But sometimes I also wonder, is Bai Mu really a child of luck? I feel that he has been falling, from birth to growth, as if his heart was beating with fear at every step, and everything he gained seemed to be lost. Even in the B line, he was alone in the secret realm of reincarnation. Where did Yin Hetian go? Is he still alive? I didn't dare to think about it... Compared to the title of Son of Luck, he was not lucky. He didn't have any treasures that he picked up casually, and he didn't have the cultivation level that he could easily acquire. I feel that maybe he is more like an ill-fated genius than a son of luck favored by heaven.
As for Ji Wuyou, I think he is less fortunate than Bai Mu but luckier than him, because Ji Wuyou was born in an era invaded by time travellers, so the world he lives in is chaotic, the worldview is distorted, and the responsibilities he bears are too heavy, but he is lucky to meet Mo. Compared with Yin Hetian and Bai Mu's past pain and lack of growth, Mo knows everything about Ji Wuyou, so Ji Wuyou will not be alone and helpless no matter how difficult it is. The insights I gained from Ji Wuyou's growth made me think that he should be more of an educator or savior than a son of fate.
Finally, thank you very much for bringing me this great story, I really like it! I hope you will continue to do more! !
Why hasn't anyone noticed this book? ! So pretty! The author can also do handwriting
It looks good. If you like it, post more.
The ab double line is really enjoyable. Whether it is God's will or Ji Wuyou will work hard to fight against the time travellers. I really love those articles that speak out for women (after all, I am also a woman, and the fact that the author respects women and recognizes women is enough for me to support). Not to mention that the author's own three views are correct, and the plot also has its ups and downs. It is really super super super good-looking! Strong recommendation
Then just look forward to the completion of this and the next work! Inmates post ~
Very nice! ! ! (Attracted by the author's handwriting)
Why is no one watching?
Let me review the book! I was constantly shocked by the strong logic, and the many turns were not blunt.
In the early stage of A, the transformation of Bai Mu, a young man, was particularly profound. There was a subtle and silent change, with a full growth coefficient. In the realm of beasts, he was forbearing in front of Zhe Yu, and his strategic planning was rigorous and rigorous. Later, when he returned, he still had the spirit of a young man but had a cruel personality that was moving. It was really good and true to be able to face up to his feelings with Yin and Tian. . Yin Hetian's young master is neither hard-hearted nor rigid. While he is noble and awe-inspiring, he is full of humaneness and a true gentleman's demeanor. He is tolerant and even indulgent towards Bai Mu. This contrast is really sweet. He is worthy of the yearly missing person orders in the city, the reopening of Bai Qiangwei every season, and the piece of paper that everyone is fine. . They are persistent and can talk to each other sincerely. Who can say that there is no true love? . .
The B-line Xuanzhi is extremely sassy, has a real male ghost style, is crazy handsome, and has the feeling of being in control of the overall situation. It feels like he is both free and cautious at the same time. Ji Wuyou's growth is also the result of the gradual and stable growth along the way, which is also accumulated through the teachings of Teacher Mo and Xuanzhi.
Just watch it, family members, and wait to watch it again after you finish it)
Very beautiful! !! It can be seen that the author put great care into writing a story [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
The plot of the novel is not procrastinating and is very interesting.
I like line A, but I haven't watched line B yet. I'll finish it soon. I wonder if line AB will become one? It feels like there are two articles. Yes, I don't like to follow too many articles at once. It's not very comfortable for me.
The data in this book is greatly affected by the AB line. The author writes very well. As far as I am concerned, if there is one chapter of this story and one chapter of that story, I would find it a bit confusing, especially since there is not much written at the beginning, and it can be regarded as two stories. The data is not good, the author lacks the motivation to update, and the patience to follow the article is not enough. The cycle leads to bad data. I personally feel that this book should not be based on this data.
A masterpiece! ! ! Why doesn't anyone read such a good book?
I stayed up all night to finish reading it. When I saw Bai Mu controlling Hu Xun to go home to find his grandfather, and finally got that result, I wanted to cry. In this way, Hu Xun can be regarded as reunited with his grandfather.
In the purgatory-like place of Wanjiang, it is true that Bai Mu can only survive if he becomes as cold and sincere as he is now. He is like a bamboo growing in the dark corner. Tribulation always falls on him, but he can still stand upright to bear it all. The young master will also help him shake off the dust and haze on his body. Although it will leave traces, he still stands upright!
I like it very much. The dual-line narrative is very novel. Anyone who has written it knows that it is difficult to write (it gives me a headache to write this kind of thing). The teacher's writing is very good and the stories are very interesting. I highly praise you.
So I asked who the male protagonists are. I read a little bit and didn't quite understand it, but I have a general idea [currently working on the draft]
It's even more uncomfortable every two days. I feel like I'm running out of books after waiting for it. I especially like Line A. I hope this book will get better and better! [Eat melon]
Good looking! It's my first time to experience this kind of reading, it's very novel
Very well written, keep it up!
I haven't served tomatoes for a long time, so I made up for everything I missed today [shy]
Give yourself some encouragement
Super good-looking, Ji Wuyou was a little miserable in the early stage, but he managed to get on his lap! Li Xiaohe [Time Travel] You have no heart!
I really like different timelines running at the same time, and I also like stories that seem independent but echo in the end, so I watched it as soon as I saw it! The ideas are super interesting! But after reading a small part, I felt that it felt so fragmented. The way the story was told was similar to the style of a certain article. There was too little information mixed in one chapter. The story changed perspective again before two steps of development. It was very abrupt. I always took a moment to realize that this was a new chapter. Can you consider merging it? For example, write a timeline for several chapters, let one thing end, and then give a pause? Or write it as a collection of short stories, with a break at the end of each chapter. The beginning of each chapter is directly triggered by attractive language or events, skipping some trivial events, and just focus on the text. Or focus on a similar person and thing and tell different reactions in two lines? The current way of speaking is more suitable for two books, or two chapters, which can be opened at the same time, but it is best to classify them into two categories, otherwise there will always be a feeling of embarrassment like being called to buy groceries halfway through playing a game [crying]
I finally sorted out my cultivation and I hope it can help everyone. Ji's side is not there yet. Bai Mu's here is: Establishment<Enlightenment<Gathering Qi<Golden Pill<Immortal Way<Mahayana<Nascent Soul<True God In addition, the author's writing is very beautiful, keep up the good work
Super pretty! ! ! But sometimes I also wonder, is Bai Mu really a child of luck? I feel that he has been falling, from birth to growth, as if his heart was beating with fear at every step, and everything he gained seemed to be lost. Even in the B line, he was alone in the secret realm of reincarnation. Where did Yin Hetian go? Is he still alive? I didn't dare to think about it... Compared to the title of Son of Luck, he was not lucky. He didn't have any treasures that he picked up casually, and he didn't have the cultivation level that he could easily acquire. I feel that maybe he is more like an ill-fated genius than a son of luck favored by heaven. As for Ji Wuyou, I think he is less fortunate than Bai Mu but luckier than him, because Ji Wuyou was born in an era invaded by time travellers, so the world he lives in is chaotic, the worldview is distorted, and the responsibilities he bears are too heavy, but he is lucky to meet Mo. Compared with Yin Hetian and Bai Mu's past pain and lack of growth, Mo knows everything about Ji Wuyou, so Ji Wuyou will not be alone and helpless no matter how difficult it is. The insights I gained from Ji Wuyou's growth made me think that he should be more of an educator or savior than a son of fate. Finally, thank you very much for bringing me this great story, I really like it! I hope you will continue to do more! !
Why hasn't anyone noticed this book? ! So pretty! The author can also do handwriting
It looks good. If you like it, post more. The ab double line is really enjoyable. Whether it is God's will or Ji Wuyou will work hard to fight against the time travellers. I really love those articles that speak out for women (after all, I am also a woman, and the fact that the author respects women and recognizes women is enough for me to support). Not to mention that the author's own three views are correct, and the plot also has its ups and downs. It is really super super super good-looking! Strong recommendation Then just look forward to the completion of this and the next work! Inmates post ~
Very nice! ! ! (Attracted by the author's handwriting)
Why is no one watching?
Let me review the book! I was constantly shocked by the strong logic, and the many turns were not blunt. In the early stage of A, the transformation of Bai Mu, a young man, was particularly profound. There was a subtle and silent change, with a full growth coefficient. In the realm of beasts, he was forbearing in front of Zhe Yu, and his strategic planning was rigorous and rigorous. Later, when he returned, he still had the spirit of a young man but had a cruel personality that was moving. It was really good and true to be able to face up to his feelings with Yin and Tian. . Yin Hetian's young master is neither hard-hearted nor rigid. While he is noble and awe-inspiring, he is full of humaneness and a true gentleman's demeanor. He is tolerant and even indulgent towards Bai Mu. This contrast is really sweet. He is worthy of the yearly missing person orders in the city, the reopening of Bai Qiangwei every season, and the piece of paper that everyone is fine. . They are persistent and can talk to each other sincerely. Who can say that there is no true love? . . The B-line Xuanzhi is extremely sassy, has a real male ghost style, is crazy handsome, and has the feeling of being in control of the overall situation. It feels like he is both free and cautious at the same time. Ji Wuyou's growth is also the result of the gradual and stable growth along the way, which is also accumulated through the teachings of Teacher Mo and Xuanzhi. Just watch it, family members, and wait to watch it again after you finish it)
Very beautiful! !! It can be seen that the author put great care into writing a story [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
The plot of the novel is not procrastinating and is very interesting.
I like line A, but I haven't watched line B yet. I'll finish it soon. I wonder if line AB will become one? It feels like there are two articles. Yes, I don't like to follow too many articles at once. It's not very comfortable for me. The data in this book is greatly affected by the AB line. The author writes very well. As far as I am concerned, if there is one chapter of this story and one chapter of that story, I would find it a bit confusing, especially since there is not much written at the beginning, and it can be regarded as two stories. The data is not good, the author lacks the motivation to update, and the patience to follow the article is not enough. The cycle leads to bad data. I personally feel that this book should not be based on this data.
A masterpiece! ! ! Why doesn't anyone read such a good book?
I stayed up all night to finish reading it. When I saw Bai Mu controlling Hu Xun to go home to find his grandfather, and finally got that result, I wanted to cry. In this way, Hu Xun can be regarded as reunited with his grandfather. In the purgatory-like place of Wanjiang, it is true that Bai Mu can only survive if he becomes as cold and sincere as he is now. He is like a bamboo growing in the dark corner. Tribulation always falls on him, but he can still stand upright to bear it all. The young master will also help him shake off the dust and haze on his body. Although it will leave traces, he still stands upright!
I like it very much. The dual-line narrative is very novel. Anyone who has written it knows that it is difficult to write (it gives me a headache to write this kind of thing). The teacher's writing is very good and the stories are very interesting. I highly praise you.
So I asked who the male protagonists are. I read a little bit and didn't quite understand it, but I have a general idea [currently working on the draft]
It's even more uncomfortable every two days. I feel like I'm running out of books after waiting for it. I especially like Line A. I hope this book will get better and better! [Eat melon]
Good looking! It's my first time to experience this kind of reading, it's very novel
Very well written, keep it up!
I haven't served tomatoes for a long time, so I made up for everything I missed today [shy]
Give yourself some encouragement
Super good-looking, Ji Wuyou was a little miserable in the early stage, but he managed to get on his lap! Li Xiaohe [Time Travel] You have no heart!