Xialan: Reborn as a Chong Ling

The writing is okay, but a bit lacking [laughter]

It's well written. Don't end it early. Make the protagonist stronger and have a zero technique that can swallow everything. The author must pay attention to this. Plot killing is not suitable for the protagonist, because he is the protagonist, so he cannot be killed by the plot. He can only kill others, but cannot be killed. Author, I feel that the protagonist's sister is becoming more and more redundant. The real protagonist has no father, no mother, no sister and no family. The protagonist is the one who has no scruples. Let her sister not die!

Will the protagonist go berserk in the end because his sister was killed?

Come on, I hope to do better and better and give me a little more freshness

Memories of my childhood, not many people know this kind of fanfic anymore

Although she looks good, why is she so ruthless to her sister? Although I saved my sister, can't I teach my sister slowly?

Okay, but I'm worried about the possibility of becoming a eunuch

Not bad, come on, author

The villain has strengthened, and it is not appropriate to kill him in the plot. He can escape with serious injuries, or continue with the plot in other ways. The world view is grand and the key points are cool

Well written but a little lacking