At first, everyone said that Xiao Muhe from Class B pursued Luo Zhiyun from Class S just like a bitch biting the moon, not knowing how high the sky is. Later, whenever she was around, people would shout, "Kill the dog, I'm going to go blind." (Xiaobai, with a glass heart, the world background of this article is fictitious. If there are any mistakes, please mention them. Try your best to correct them. Please don't scold me. Thank you)
Reader comments
The plot is a bit monotonous, and the characters have distinct personalities. The emotional line of the protagonist can be written more clearly. The ending is bad, but the middle of the plot is a bit sad. Although they are together, more details can be drawn.
The ending can also be written more clearly. You can write some extra chapters about them later, or you can write a sequel about where they went during their travels.
Come on, author [learned]!
! ! You can definitely write better as you write ٩(๑òωó๑)۶
The plot is a bit monotonous, and the characters have distinct personalities. The emotional line of the protagonist can be written more clearly. The ending is bad, but the middle of the plot is a bit sad. Although they are together, more details can be drawn. The ending can also be written more clearly. You can write some extra chapters about them later, or you can write a sequel about where they went during their travels. Come on, author [learned]! ! ! You can definitely write better as you write ٩(๑òωó๑)۶