The Devil Instructor of Rhode Island

In terms of characters and plot, this is an okay novel. In terms of characters, the protagonist is a bit scumbag, so there is no need to wash it off, but he does not give up in the end. The attitude of being wet and dew is the author's own attitude in the article, and although the protagonist's consistent character is a bit indecisive, his character is not bad, it is normal, not novel but passable. As for the supporting roles, there are many characters, which leads to a lack of character creation. There are too many people, but the writing is too even, which makes many characters lack elements that make readers empathize. However, Yu Xiang is indeed a well-created original character. He is considered a very important character in the story, and he does have an image that is enough to support the plot. Of course, many "interesting" chapters are also a major feature of this book. This is the part that stood out to me in terms of content. I believe many people also like the author's "boldness". The changes in the plot to the existence of the protagonist are also relatively reasonable. I personally know little about the plot of Porridge, but this book is generally restored and is enough to support the reading experience of passers-by. All in all, worth a look. [Eat melon]

The writing is very good. I will continue to write "Don't Eunuch". I hope it will be completed. "Power for Love". I will ask again. Will there be scenes between Skadi and the protagonist? Will there be a good impression? Will there be a relationship?

Very good story, that is, is it a single heroine or a harem? The second captain came first, Hei followed closely, and the ghost shark was not to be outdone. Well, it's amazing.

The writing is great, good luck to the author!

I have just read a dozen chapters, and the author's introduction to the Terra race in the article has solved the problem of readers who do not play Ark, so I would like to ask, is there a female protagonist? Team 2 or Sharks? [Eat melon]

Personally, I think it is a very good porridge novel. The writing is good and the plot is well laid out. It kept me interested enough to read it. I feel that even people who have never watched Ark can still read it. Secondly, the character's personality is more obvious, but not perfect. The emotional line is a bit watered down, (although I have to admit that the author is very good at certain aspects) and there is not enough foreshadowing, which makes me feel that the characters of Shark and Candle Knight are somewhat broken. I still recommend that the author try to figure out the plot more. Overall, as the author's first article, it's still very good (better than other Ark articles I've read, keep your voice down, don't rant) and look forward to the author's new work. So, considering my two hundred words of five-star praise, the author, wouldn't you consider writing two more chapters? (There will be no shortage of free gifts for reminders) [Shy]

It's pretty good, but I'm just curious if it has a single heroine or multiple heroines.

There are no bad points for the time being. Generally speaking, the development should be more female protagonists (probably)

There are few good writers. Let me summarize the advantages for you guys. Please support the author quickly and let him update more. The setting is rich, and the author has a good imagination. The identity background of the instructor, banshee, and witchcraft is quite rich and attractive. If you want to watch the internal plot of Rhodes Island as an instructor, it is worth a taste. Although there are private settings, it does not affect the consumption. The plot is also a relatively attractive setting, splitting the soul, uh, redemption and salvation, cultivation, uh, and the tongue kiss that the author likes. The details are awesome. What kind of side job does the author have? It's not pornographic. I kind of wonder if the author has been in the army. The IQ and emotion are online, and the depth of the characters is pretty good. At least it has not collapsed yet, and there is no strong explanation for the character's behavior. The author has specified what he has experienced, and he has a clear understanding of the psychological thinking of people like the protagonist. It can be said that the logic is online, and the emotions are slightly online. After all, he is a multi-female protagonist. In addition, the identity of the protagonist is a bit complicated, and he may be a bit tough. It is very enjoyable to lose your mind in this place.

The Devil Instructor of Rhode Island (crossed out) Demon Sea King of Rhode Island

Baby, promise me you won't die, and we will fight to the death [blowing kiss]

It's well written, but I'm so worried about being cut in half because of the data.

As a black chef, I must give you five stars, hey hey hey my black, hey hey hey

Depending on the protagonist's connections, most of the knives in the game's plot are probably gone. At the very least, Alina is still alive and the possibility of the protagonist interfering with the black snake possessing Tallulah is basically zero. The original plot is that Tallulah's emotional breakdown after Alina's death gave Black Snake the opportunity to control Tallulah. I don't know if the knife will still be there in the future, at least the integration movement will not be destroyed so early.

It's very well written. Good luck to the author.

Come on, it looks great, I hope it can stay like this

The author's description of love is very sweet. What I didn't expect even more was that the author could describe the "process" using races from the Terra continent [laughter]

Isn't this book very good? Why is it rated so low? As a fanfic of Porridge, it's already pretty good. At least it's original, which is much better than a book that's written based on the plot [laughs awkwardly]

Author, promise me not to abandon Viviana, okay. [Cry][cry][cry]

One of the few that you can watch among all the fans

As a fan novel, the content up to today (2023.5.23) Is quite good. It does not completely rewrite the main line but does not deviate from it. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Very good, niche and high-quality. Faster, faster, more, author [adoration][adoration][adoration] My math teacher once said that an excellent work can often grasp the description of sex, and now this Ark fanfic has reached a very high level in my heart! So the author doesn't want eunuchs anymore, don't force me to kneel down and beg you. [Learned]

So pretty! The corners of my mouth can't help but rise!

It's pretty good, although I stopped watching it after the second male lead came out. I thought the second male protagonist was a doctor [face covering] [face covering]

Very good. By the way, let me ask again, single heroine or harem?

It's very comfortable to read, and I strongly hope that the author can accept LaoLingLin [laughing evilly]

I have high expectations, although it's not very suitable for me.

It can be seen that the author wants to implement a lot of XP, but I would like to ask if the author has gone to the island? (Moriguchijima) [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Stream of consciousness novels are top-notch. Real excellence starts with the details. I wonder how many novels dare to write reproduction and plot in the text without deletion or alteration?

This book is among the top ones among the Ark books I have read. The author's writing style is very good. Multiple female protagonists, two male protagonists (referring to two original characters), not Nantong