Life Roleplay: Starting as a Witch

It's pretty good. I'm trying to avoid a surprise for everyone by changing my marriage. Otherwise, I'll pursue you.

It's great, just please don't change your marriage [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Why did it give me the illusion that it was like a quick time travel video? I also felt that the author wanted a male protagonist, but there was "Single" in the introduction, but the author also said she was single. The more I looked at it, the more it looked like a quick time travel video for women. Except that there is no male protagonist, it is really similar. This book is still good I gave it a try, and the words of the new author are very good. There are not many good books like this in Tomato, and there are many that have been removed from the shelves, discontinued, or have been stuck in review. This book is already very good, but not many people read this kind of subject matter. Come on it's already great. I still don't want a good book to be discontinued.

A very good transformation and role-playing novel. This is my review. Hope the author can stick with it. When I look at the data, I feel like I will run away after just a few days of sitting. That's it for now, come on, author.

Great writing. You can also marry from time to time, be a lily from time to time, and be single from time to time. In this way, those who don't like changing marriages can also watch it, those who like lilies can also watch it, and those who don't like lilies can also watch it. I still personally like to get married. Your writing is great. To be honest, it is the best among several similar articles I have read. It is very novel. Keep it up. I don't know what to say either It seems that there are a lot of people who are against changing marriages (I really don't know why)

The story that originally had 300 chapters was condensed into 30 chapters. I have to say that it was a bit fast. I always felt that the story was told but not finished. The pace could be slowed down a bit and the ending could be more. But I still give it five stars to support it. I hope the author can persevere.

I think it's pretty good. I've already seen the Nine-tailed Fox chapter. Keep up the good work. Personally, I think the Witch chapter and Under the Stars chapter are good, but there are chapters that I want to complain about, especially the fantasy chapter. There are too many things to complain about. The ending of the Snow Girl chapter feels very bland. Well... It's a bit too bland, so I can only make up other endings in my own mind.

It's good, but only good. My favorite chapter at the moment is the witch chapter. The other chapters are either not interesting to me or just awkward to read (which ultimately gives me a strong sense of inconsistency. I could have written it longer but it felt like it was shrunk). But as a newbie, it's not bad. Also, let me express my opinion on whether it is a change of marriage: vague (it is impossible to clearly see whether it is a change of marriage, as far as I am concerned, I personally do not dislike the change of marriage but I dislike Long Yang and Lily) Okay, let me conclude. The main debates are ① the length of the chapter and ② whether it is a remarriage. (The above are all my own words and have nothing to do with others)

How should I put it? The writing style needs to be improved. The setting of multiple endings feels like playing a single-player game. The sense of immersion also needs to be improved. If possible, it is better to remove the multiple endings. Although you can start over, the changes in the ending are basically not much. It seems that the experience is quite poor, and the system also says that there are From a few endings, you can tell that these are not the endings chosen by the protagonist, but arranged by the system. I almost forgot about the previous plot and the fantasy chapter. I haven't read it for a while. Now that I saw the Nine-Tails chapter, I wanted to comment on it. In conclusion, although there are a lot of poisonous points, it is still a good novel. (If you feel like you have nothing to say, just add a kaomoji at the end) \(●´∀'●)/

How to put it, I think you can actually add a side story at the end of each world. The side story can be about falling in love to make up for the regrets, right? (For example, the first world, I really want them to be together QAQ) Now that I have seen the second world, I will continue to support it silently, and I hope the author can add it. Extra, and will silently make some additional comments, and hope that the author can read it (of course it is just a suggestion, and a request, if you see something you don't like, you can tell me QAQ) In short, author, come on, long live the author, author, this thing is really great