I Traveled Through Time to Control the Beast, and the School Beauty Waited on Me to Take a Bath!

Not bad, not bad. I am looking forward to the story between the protagonist and the heroine after he transforms into a human form! ! ! ! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Sneak laugh][Sneak laugh][Sneak laugh][Sneak laugh][Sneak laugh][Sneak laugh][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon]

Very good, very good. After the male protagonist transformed into a harem, he started to collect a harem. He upgraded while collecting a harem, and finally reached the super god level. He wiped out all the men of all races in the world. He used cuteness to capture all the women of all races under his eye. He sat in the body of a stone man and was buried in the gentle countryside of many beauties every day. Because the transformed male protagonist was a young lady for several months, he kissed many wives. It will take a few years to hug and lift high. I lamented that I was too small, like the tip of a needle. After decades of disdainful efforts, I finally reached the strongest and became an immortal existence. I also grew up by one nanometer. I asked the system and the system said that the host is the Holy Dragon of Light. It takes millions of billions of years to reach adulthood, so the host needs to work harder. When hearing this, the male protagonist was speechless...

It's so beautiful. I'm really looking forward to turning it into a human form.

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As for realms, the author should at least write down all the realms.

It's pretty good, but I feel like although I've improved very quickly, my strength is still not good enough! As a Holy Dragon of Light, can't he still transcend one or two major realms? I remember why there is one that increases all attributes by 300% and attack by 100% that has never been used. There is also a breath and voice-controlled twin that was unlocked later that didn't seem to have much improvement in strength. There is also a Holy Dragon avatar that doesn't show how strong it is!

It can only be said that the realm of transformation is too high, and everyone is looking forward to the transformation, so it is not bad to say that it is not good, but it feels very rushed anyway. Also, when these people are attacked, no matter whether their realm is high or low, they seem not to see the means they have to protect themselves, and they are completely targets.

Although the protagonist is Light Dragon Yin, "Water Dragon Yin" should also work

The male protagonist has figured out how to play Long Sheng [thinking][laughing][laughing]

Yes, you read that right. This author is really taking an eccentric approach, going directly to the retro trend. This book is the invincible article in the Internet literature world in the last century. Look at the name, look at the description, this taste is not too serious. I believe we can admire the glory of the last century through this book. [Sinister smile]

Very nice, I really like this type

Not bad, there won't be any bloody plot about marriage in the future, right?

You can come and take a look. It's really cool. It would be great if the author could let him transform later. I don't know if the author will allow him to transform.

Can you please stop changing into another form? Please don't change your form! [Cry]

Su Bai transformed into a human form and turned into a beautiful white-haired loli girl. White hair loli dragon

Not bad, not bad. I wish I could find a good book. I didn't have high hopes at first, so I just took a look at it. I didn't expect it to fascinate me. I'll see more than two hundred pictures. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

Why doesn't Dragon Kingdom recognize dragons? Then why is it called Dragon Kingdom? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Regarding this article, the first chapter is the chapter before the college entrance examination. It is generally casual and humorous, and it seems to have a lot of fun. As for the chapter about the college entrance examination, it is the main line. It is understandable that it will be a bit boring, but it is within the acceptable range. I feel Some flaws are that the characters of the heroine and the hero are too prominent, but the characters of the supporting characters are not that eye-catching. Overall, in my opinion, it is a good book and worth reading (the above is my personal opinion). Overall, I hope this book will get better and better.

The imagination is quite rich, but many things in the early stage are gone in the later stage, such as resurrection, system, and even coming to bask in the sun to increase cultivation. There are also quite a few typos. I feel that the ending is a bit early and a lot is omitted. I still can't figure out who the old man in the trial tower in the early stage is. I prefer some of the chapters about Fighting the Demon Lord. They made my blood boil. Also, the combat power in the early stage felt a bit confusing. No one can beat the Totem Realm. Once you reach the Myth Realm, you can directly crush half the universe. This span is a bit too outrageous. The plot looks like a matryoshka doll. You enter the Earth, the Ancient World, then the Divine Continent and finally the God Realm. The most important thing is that the people in it are all human models. It feels like one world and one type. Although there are many disadvantages, there are many advantages, so I won't give examples one by one. The whole book is pretty good. Keep up the good work. It's very enjoyable. I hope the author's new book will be better! Also, what about the system? It appeared once or twice in the early stage and then disappeared.

The writing is very good, but not enough to read. I hope the author will update it soon!

It looks good, but I don't know in which chapter the protagonist can turn into a human being and be with the heroine..., Hehe

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It's rare to see such a high-quality novel. It's so good. I hope it won't be discontinued or unfinished. This book is definitely not worth 6.6 Points. At the very least, it deserves an 8 points. Such good beast-control novels are not common anymore! .

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It looks good, please support the author, and I give you five stars.

You are not allowed to lower the star rating. If you lower the star rating, you will not be able to see it. Everyone must eat it.

It looks good, but it's too short and not good enough.

The author's writing is good, but the main character at the end of this article has not been eaten. If I didn't know that the author forgot, I would have thought it was a eunuch book. There is nothing to complain about in other parts. The overall evaluation is four stars! It is a good book!

It's good and beautiful. I hope that if I want to write about the second beast, it will be a nine-tailed fox [blowing kiss]

I will also contribute to reaching 9.0