Senior Brother, Do You Have Too Many Wings?

For a character with a pure mind, don't give him too many emotional scenes or anything like that, and try to have as little personality portrayal as possible, otherwise it will seem too contrived in some parts later on, and he won't be so likable and pure of mind.

Quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack. Quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack.

The plot is good, especially the amnesia part, it's just (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. Come to this world, be gentle, carefree, take your time, and do whatever you want. What the heart desires is the ideal of the world.

After reading it for a while, I feel that the master is a little bit poisonous. Other novel masters are fake about being irresponsible, but this is true for you.

Finished reading. The logical processing of character emotions is good. I read the last paragraph I wrote. So this book should be regarded as a "prequel"... And some extra plots in the book are just to expand the background of the story? Then the "main story" that the author plans to write using this book as the background will not be the completed "Relive a Life Again", right? Would it be too short as a "true story"? There are only 180 chapters.

Although it looks good, I feel a little frustrated.

The author is really good, hahahaha, this book is interesting, although there are some small unreasonable things, but it has no impact. The biggest problem is the eunuch, which is a pity [almost crying], but the next book will be very good.

It's quite good, very leisurely. It doesn't have the fast pace and some weird and poisonous points of those cool novels. You can calm down and read it slowly. It's a very good work. I just don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe people nowadays are more impetuous and can't read this kind of leisurely novel. This is a review from a new bookworm.

The story is good, but it's a bit messy and not enough to read. Tsk tsk tsk tsk, another sad day

After seeing more than 70 photos, I suddenly realized something was wrong. Where is the system~(￣▽￣~)~

I feel pretty good so far, keep working hard [laughing]

It's pretty good. I like it anyway.

After reading Chapter 22, I felt something was wrong. When I looked back, I found that the system was gone. The first chapter said that the protagonist traveled here three years ago. There was a system, one task per day. Later, after I went to the junior sister's house, it seemed that it disappeared. By the way, it appeared on the ship for a while, and then disappeared. Record, I saw Chapter 22, but I haven't read the rest. If there are any good points, I will come back and comment.

The author's writing skills are so good [smile][smile]

Yes, there are still multiple female protagonists. After all, he is still a rebel against his master. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's so well written, and the emotional scenes can't be held until the end. It always feels like it will be a tragedy, the male protagonist seems to become another Qingsong

Have you forgotten about the author system? Also, if the protagonist is the villain, where is the original fateful protagonist?

Okay, okay, this is how you write a book, right? I'll go to the kitchen to get you money😡

Don't you plan to create a group? Is this the same account for new books? (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

It's quite pretty, I can support it. This novel is quite good, won't the author get back to me?

A book friend said it is similar to "Spirit Sword Mountain". I haven't read it, so I don't know. Anyway, I think it's pretty good-looking, quite funny, and doesn't have many plots or plots. Of course, you can also say that I'm a novice, and I can only read this kind of novel. It doesn't matter, as long as I read it happily, but the author is too short [star][star]. After reading it, I'll read the author's other books, they should be quite funny.

The overall plot is good, and there are no major problems. It's just that the characterization of the master and Xiao Shimei is a bit problematic. If you only watch comedy, it's okay.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. The plot is humorous and relaxing, and the characters are quite fleshed out. I hope the author will continue to work hard. It's not necessarily fast, but the quality must keep up with [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Even though she's half a eunuch, she's still pretty!

The author's writing is really good. I have read so many articles with similar themes. This can be said to be the first one that made me read the latest chapter from the first chapter. What can I say about the characterization of the characters? After getting rid of the protagonist's decathlon, it has more flavor [like]. I hope the author can continue to write more. Five stars.

I gave it five stars because I like beauties. May I ask how many heroines there are? Why do you feel like everyone likes the male protagonist? But what's going on😭

Not bad haha ​​come on

Not bad, the characters are vivid

The updates are so slow, I really want to lock the author in a dark room and keep updating 24 hours a day [laughing]

Good-looking, good-looking hahaha