Journey to the West: Simulating Cultivation at Langlang Mountain

Why does it feel like it has turned into a martial arts novel?

The plot is okay. The main reason is that the division of the realm is unclear. I can't figure out whether it is a martial arts or an immortal. Even the martial arts have the power of a saint. The palm skills learned by the Buddha. The key is that this is just a practice you practiced before you became an immortal, and you have mastered it. Well, I don't know how the author set it up. Anyway, I was very surprised when I saw this setting. The plot is not bad, the plot is relatively compact, and it is not like a running account. There are reversals and thinking, but the protagonist grows too fast, so it is better to suppress it appropriately.

To be honest, it doesn't feel that good. Every time the protagonist offends someone, he still lets them go. He insists on letting others cause trouble. There are so many ways to die that make people speechless. The protagonist has no memory at all. He insists on letting others go and let others kill them with his magic skills before he knows how to kill.

There were too few people, only four people. Let me comment now, this is too good for that fox demon. He gave me such valuable things, and it is still very tempting. I am speechless to death because of the charm. A fox demon without transformation is still charming. The first picture is still tempting you, and then the realm is too nondescript. The plot is not bad. I watched it today.

You can see it before going down the mountain. There are either girls or women in the back. The plot is pretty much the same. The hero saves the beauty. He only knows two skills: holding a sword with two fingers or blocking with one finger. You can read the script of life, but only women can survive. Men can't watch it.

It feels a bit nondescript, and there is also a distinction between realms

I read it carefully and couldn't stand it several times. But if I read the whole book, it is not very long, and I imagine that I can find supplements related to Journey to the West, background descriptions and character plots; or the perfection and imagination of the story of the little pig demon in Langshan in "Chinese Tales". The result was indeed disappointment, deep disappointment... The book is just for the purpose of making headlines and does not live up to its name. It only uses the name of the original work from beginning to end, and the character settings are completely inconsistent with the original work. There are no imaginative ideas or plot additions related to the original work. Rather than saying that the author has added settings and plots to the fantasy novel, it is better to say that he wrote the fantasy himself and then replaced the characters and place names with the names of characters in Journey to the West and Langdang Mountain-related works. It would be fine to say that the story is good, but the plot has basically no ups and downs. The plot setting is basically based on the protagonist's system, which is similar to a diary description. There are no turning points, no foreshadowing, and no logic. The protagonist never stood up from beginning to end. Finally, if this book is not named after Journey to the West and Langdang Mountain, and does not use the historical background of Journey to the West, but is purely fictional, it will still be an excellent fantasy diary for primary school students. It would not be surprising that Mr. Wu Chengen climbed out of the coffin and the author of "Chinese Tales" followed the Internet line and killed the author.

It doesn't look good, and I don't know my realm at all. I hate reading this kind of article the most.

The writing is very good, but you should stop writing it. It is really poisonous. After going down the mountain, the simulation does not give you the realm. Moreover, it is nosy and likes to ask others to practice. It is simply a trash can level.

I hope the author can clearly classify the realm.