I Write a Diary in a Novel, and the Heroines Are All Acting Strange

I really don't want to complain. The plot is too long. There are more than 20 chapters for a marriage. The most important thing is that the author treats readers as fools. In the beginning, the immortal emperor is reborn, and then he is the son-in-law. These two are not opponents of the same magnitude or dimension. Moreover, the reborn immortal emperor is written too much, and there is too much nonsense. The charm of the character is not seen at all. The inner activities of the protagonist are just like a fool.

There are several ink stains for one scene, and there is a lot of nonsense and it's hard to read.

The pace is too slow, there are too few diaries, the daughter-in-law doesn't even know there is a diary, and there are many bugs. Depose

Too watery [covers face]

It's poisonous. Chapter 9. Do you want to read what you are writing?

Rubbish so bad

Beginning and no tail. It's such a mess that I don't even know what to write.

The writing is not good. And when I think of that scene, I feel embarrassed

This writing style is boring. Writing diary spoilers is mainly about various funny elements and spoilers. It's a good subject matter, but it can't be written in a flavorful way.

Damn, this is too poisonous. Why don't you write a diary and act at the same time? It has to be like this, it doesn't look good, there are too many poisonous points, even if I lose my brain, I can't watch it