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Brother author, you describe too many useless and meaningless details. There is no conflict in the story to sell it, but the details cannot be more detailed. How can you make the readers feel uncomfortable? The details of a meal are as detailed as those of several bottles of beer, but P's story is not there. Even if your beer explodes and the pig's feet have the power to freeze glass shards in the air, your eyes will be blown away. It's just an example. Don't arrange the storyline blindly. Reasonable logic is the way to go! Wish you progress Don't use water characters. If you write well, you may succeed. If you use water characters, you will definitely fail. Dilute the Romance of the Three Kingdoms 10,000 times and see if anyone can read it? Those with water character will definitely fail

Can't we use powers in the real world? Even in the apocalypse, vicious dogs can beat them, so why were they beaten to death by hungry wolves in reality?

There is no sense of doom, and the people inside don't even realize their own status.

It's okay to write, but there are a lot of frustrations.