Rebirth********

Very good, uh, don't go too fast, don't be tough with the reviewer. There is another shortcoming that I would like to point out. The name of this character is always a girl. Can you tell which character is a girl? It made me confused. One moment I thought it was Ye Wenxuan, and the other moment I thought it was the heroine. Come on, work hard, even though it is a new book, I am optimistic about you, and I will help you recommend more. ! [Love][love][laughing][laughing][asking for attention][asking for attention] @ doesn't like to eat peaches @ doesn't like to eat peaches

The writing is not bad, but it doesn't mean that the author cannot write about this subject, nor does it mean that the writing is not good. It is really rare. It is indeed possible to write about subject matter that is restricted by the maternal society and break the rules. I have even doubted the author before or now. Your gender Has it been changed? The main thing is that it can be changed, so it is normal for me to understand it this way, because most girls write novels about female characters, and there are really very few novels about male characters, not to mention yandere-type themes. It is not that it is difficult to write, the main reason is that they still can't let go, which is more like a saying. Most normal people would not write "Women's Hearts, Needles in the Sea". If they want to write novels about female characters with yandere protagonists, the main problem is that there are almost no papers on yandere themes in society or even in academic exchanges between countries. Because of the illness There is a latent period for coquettishness, but there are too few who actually reveal it in real time. Moreover, most of them are women, and there are men too, but very few. It is because of this contrast problem and because of the maternal society that few people do it. It would be great if the flow of such things is not restricted. Write better, we all support you!

Very pretty It's just that the front part is very similar to other books, but the back part is much better. But it feels like there is a little bit of water, but there is so little left! I finished reading it in one afternoon [smile] I hope the author will not be short and feeble [laughing evilly] @ doesn't like eating peaches

Come on, although it is similar to a certain book, I am afraid that it will be reported and I will be disgraced.

I want to know, the author, whether the result is like Cupid Chocolate or Chen Hansheng. I can't stand writing like that when another girl has feelings for one person, but that person didn't choose her, leaving him alone with unrequited love.

Overall very good Although the plot is a bit monotonous at the beginning, the descriptive writing at the end is very good. The author is careful and his portrayal is not bad. There is one thing. When describing the psychology of the yandere, can it be more detailed? Well, here I hope the author will continue to work hard to create, come on. [Send heart][Send heart]

It's not bad, the plot develops quickly and is not watery. This kind of yandere looks exciting [laughs crookedly]. Also, I support Qingmei [sending my heart] (although Qingmei is always inferior to my girlfriend [almost crying]), come on, author!

Author, you don't want me to be unable to read the novel, right? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Author, if you do this, it's easy to get into trouble. You have to think carefully. If there are not two female protagonists, you wrote so many emotional lines between Ye Wenxuan and the male protagonist, how are you going to smooth things over later? Unless there are two heroines, or both, the heroine in your profile is Lin Zihan, which makes me very uneasy. I'm afraid of being stabbed in the back. If you dare to stab Ye Wenxuan, I will definitely kill you along the network cable [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]

The description method is very similar to the one at the beginning, but the content and plot later are different. The emotional description is very detailed, not watery or poisonous, but the update is too slow. Also, I hope this book can reach one million words, and not end at more than ten or two hundred thousand words.

She is very pitiful. Poor people must be hateful. She became what she hated most. He is cowardly and stubborn. He also became what he hated. She is soft and fragile, and I hope she doesn't become what she hates. Looking forward to the follow-up.

Is there a possibility that the author is a yandere? Is this book actually the author's autobiography?

Single or many? [Covers face] If there are too many, aren't you afraid of being served by a hatchet?

This is the most wonderful book I've seen on Tomato. It's so well written.

Is it possible that so few people have read such a good book?

The book borrowed from Lolita is a masterpiece, especially the front, which seems to be similar, but the back is completely different. I am very much looking forward to the plots in the back, and hope that the author can continue to work hard.

Fortunately, when I listen to books, the playback always fails.

Very nice and attractive content

A breath of fresh air in the yandere [laughing evilly]

Come on duck author is big

Too depressing, okay

Is the author really not updating? I'm still waiting for the author to trick me someday. The writing is very good. What a pity.

Finally some decent yandere writing [Adoration]

I'm a layman and can't appreciate the artistic content.

Come on, author, it's good to watch [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Okay, I hope to continue writing

Update soon. Author, where did you die? Could it be...

The author's literary talent is very good

I feel good after opening a few chapters

There will always be some regrets in youth, and not all stories are perfect