Cultivating Immortality as a Clan

First of all, it is logically unreasonable. The reason why the Qin and Liu families were able to suppress the protagonist's family in the early stage was because they united. It was not that any one family could suppress the protagonist's family alone. In this case, the reason why the protagonist's family has no allies can only be that other families also want a share of the pie, so the situation of the protagonist's family cannot be improved because of an alchemist. The second is that the five major forces in Yunmo City are jointly managed, so no one dares to cause trouble in the city. This is very contradictory. If they really have such a strong deterrent, if they are attacked, the casual cultivators may fish in troubled waters, and the family cultivators dare to interfere? Aren't you afraid of being destroyed by the five major forces? Moreover, the Qin and Liu families got involved and left evidence like corpses, but nothing happened. Is this reasonable?

It's a mess with no logic. And my brain is not working well either!!

Chapter 28 and 29: No one was injured in the front, but Ninth Sister died immediately in the back. This Ninth Sister was still a third-level Qi practitioner in alchemy. What kind of clan war was she participating in?

Chapter 32 slips, the author would like to read the title of your book, "Family, Family". Developing the family will make you stronger. You must write about the protagonist to strengthen himself instead of developing the family. Write a brain-talking plot and arrange for the protagonist to go out and wander around. Really 6.

Well written

Writing is okay

Not bad, pretty good

Are the male protagonist's parents cultivators of immortality?