Uncle Nine's First Disciple: Collecting Tonic Techniques to Cultivate Immortality

Keep up the good work and don't finish it

The backhand of the harem article is a five-star encouragement, come on, Saonian

A pretty good book!

I thought it was something, but when I read the end, I realized that the book had been revised. The pleasure value was changed to practice value, and the love value was changed to aura value. Remember it was a double break before, right? [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Now I have directly changed to meditating and practicing. No wonder I looked confused when I saw it later. To be honest, it's a bit of a pity.

That's it, not enough to see￣ ￣)σ

Come on. It's just that the speed is too fast. Can't feel the details

The writing is good and the plot is compact. The story development is roughly the same as that of Lin Zhengying's series of movies. It's just that the life and emotions between the multiple female protagonists are a bit too far away from reality. Since the author wants to arrange multiple female protagonists, why does he just use these women as tools for cultivation? You know that in the past, the biggest purpose of women getting married was to get married and have children. Have a certain family status or be protected by the family. Otherwise, who would be willing to be a mistress or accept women like mistresses, mistresses, four, and five. I hope the author can pay attention to it.

I wonder if the heroines can practice?

Four stars is a bit reluctant, but it's still reasonable. The plot looks okay. I've watched all the movies. It's true that Uncle Ying is a long-time fan. Otherwise, I wouldn't understand. The protagonist is a bit slow. The image of Uncle Jiu is a bit long-winded. The group of apprentices are a bit forgetful. This may be my problem. The plot is too messy. It's a female tool. Anyway, it's quite boring, but I can't say it's bad. After all, the basis of the movie is here, and it can't be said to be copied. After all, it's a fan, but it's true that it's bad (I can't watch it even if it's not bad). I don't know the reason. In fact, I'm just a reader. I understand everything. Don't watch it if you're watching a double cultivator. Go watch the movie if you're watching a fan. Or you can do whatever you want.

I think this book is one of the best-written novels in the Mr. Zombie series. It cleverly introduces an original villain sect, making the changes to the original plot more reasonable. The zombies' abilities are also enhanced, and the integration of multiple movie plots also appears more integrated. The disadvantage is probably that Golden Finger is a dual cultivation method, and you can't practice it without dual cultivation. It was quite fun at first, but later on it started to feel like women are just tools.

Can you write two versions and put the other one on other websites? Remember Aite. I can accept it if you pay money, but it must be exciting.

@ Updated, I think the finale should be written like this, leading everyone to open a portal back to his world and see the world [Thinking]

[Like] I feel like the killing could be more decisive. There are some dramas where the characters are not very good, and they are not interesting. You can kill them when you need to, and it will not affect the subsequent plot. You can also recruit more emotional lines for the girls. Don't just come up and be done with it. Let's do some process! Finally, please say goodbye to the eunuch. This novel is so good. (If you want to read it alone or without a heroine, just give it a try)

One thing I have to say is that it feels good, but there are a few issues. Other than that, there are no big problems.

I wish I drove differently

If you read this book, let me correct you. The elements are also Chinese, just like the culture of some countries comes from China. If you don't understand, don't talk nonsense.

The more interesting one is Harem: Another World. Generally speaking, Jiu Shu's books rarely have this style.

When I saw the end, I didn't even know how he practiced.

Smash it at every turn, or be a dog Taoist, the problem is still different people also say so

When you take in a woman. Don't write about women so casually. Although I am a man!

The writing is quite good, but there are too few updates. I haven't read enough. I hope to continue to write more good novels.

The plot is good and the harem is full. As long as the subsequent plot doesn't suck, it's possible to get a rating of 9. [Laughing]

Yes, the plot rhythm is well grasped.

It's pretty, pretty good! If you read this novel, you must accept harem stories! ! ! [Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon]

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister like this? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. The brother is weak and needs a lot of rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body, which also makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether it hurts the body or not, what does it have to do with the sister? Hurry up and add more updates, bro [smile]

Good, good, good

Okay, I hope it doesn't end badly

It's too high, I'm afraid you'll be proud

You get on the expressway and get off immediately. You go back and forth, but you are not on the expressway.

Haha, I saw a lot of comments saying that they only know about cultivation. In fact, the author changed all the content of the previous weekend break to cultivation, but there were no hints and little hints.