He's from Azkaban

It's a very interesting novel with a very innovative theme. Does the author want to write about the mutual redemption between the protagonist and Hermione? What's more, is Hermione's redemption of the protagonist and rejuvenate his inner humanity... I hope the author will stick to it. It will be exciting. Now that I see it, I feel it's okay, a bit sharp and messy (although the author did it intentionally for the effect), but it's still okay after a while.

When I first watched it, it was just one word, it was confusing, but after watching it, you will find that it is connected with the previous one, a kind of narrative technique, the same technique as the movie (actor, cook, scoundrel), the effect comes first and the cause comes later, but it is very interesting. To be honest, I couldn't understand it at all if I read it so fast, all the narration was

The writing is very good. The timeline of past, present and future forms a perfect closed loop. However, the relationship between Ste and Hermione is not very delicate, making the plot of mutual rescue not very deep. I didn't find it memorable when I read it, but that's what a short story is, so it's still good. I hope that the final ending will be grand and wonderful. The ending can be written in more than ten chapters, but I don't know how to end it with Hermione's future and present bodies. The environment does a good job of rendering the atmosphere, but it doesn't have much writing. It's like 24K gold in a pile of tomato shit.

Although I have read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, I think this one is Tomato's second Harry Potter fanfic, and there is another one called I Am Death. The structure of this book is very different from I Am Death. This book mainly focuses on emotional descriptions and brain-burning plots. The author can associate this with the original work. There are so many things that I didn't expect. When I first saw Time Turner, I knew that the plot was not simple, but it was actually acceptable and not that complicated. If you read it carefully the first time, you can understand it almost. If you continue writing, it will definitely be another popular masterpiece. Come on, author, I believe in you. The most touching thing in this book is actually the determination of Steve and Hermione to sacrifice everything for each other and their sincere feelings. I have never seen anyone who can write about love so boldly [send heart][send heart][send heart]

To be honest, this book is indeed quite shocking among Harry's books. There are no coincidences or favors. It's all another person's silent contribution. The strength of this book is that the pen is laid out from the beginning, and the subsequent pictures are recycled and read very smoothly. However, such writing requires a high level of writing power. Although it is very exciting, the plot is There is still no big closed loop. For example, the male protagonist escaped from Azkaban because Hermione traveled through time and learned to call the God Guard, but this was based on the fact that he could escape and see Hermione in the future. So how did the male protagonist escape from Azkaban in the first place and meet Hermione to start the closed loop? Therefore, there is a missing part of the plot and pitfalls. It might be more exciting if the male protagonist's first escape and the second escape after meeting Hermione were written separately. Overall, it's a pretty good book. [Like] Worth watching.

Well, it's a good idea to start with the Patronus Charm, and then write out various unreasonable places and reasonable explanations. Although I have only read the first 20 chapters and haven't read the rest, I already understand the general direction, such as why a person who has traveled through time will hear other people's voices when being absorbed by dementors. It is recommended not to skip chapters or you will not understand. If you haven't read Harry Potter's analysis and plot of the time ball in this novel, you will easily get confused.

The writing is pretty good, the CP between the protagonist and Hermione, but it would be even better if the author could show Hermione's reaction after reading the protagonist's memory and discovering that she is a person in the book. Because Hermione looked through the protagonist's memory, she can completely discover that the protagonist is a time traveler, and she is a character in a book in his past life. Therefore, Hermione will definitely be surprised after reading it, and her love for the protagonist's yandere makes her actively and selectively ignore (reject) her original destiny. At the same time, she loves the present with the protagonist even more, which deepens her love for the protagonist. This not only adds depth to Hermione's character, but also has some interesting points, which can make the CP scientists more happy and adapt to the development of the plot. In addition, the author's timeline is a bit off. I'm afraid the author himself doesn't understand the combination of multiple timelines. He is just showing off his skills purely for the sake of showing off his skills. The words about plasma are too dramatic. In addition, the author doesn't like to reply to readers' words, which is a bit frustrating. Since I rated five stars before, I will rate this one as three stars. To put it all together, there are two four stars.

I would like to call this book a masterpiece! The use of this time converter is so good. I was a little dizzy when I first opened it, but I suddenly realized it after reading it later!

Damn it, it's awesome. I wrote two timelines and it was able to form a closed loop in the end. I knew it was time to give it five stars. No matter what happens next, the author's great strength is awesome. As the author, I have a small suggestion: write chapters with the heroine going back to the past and the hero saving the heroine. Their chapter names can have an indication, such as: [Past] + the original chapter name. Otherwise, I feel a bit deceived. I was able to calm down at the beginning, but I read the two chapters of "Memory Fragments" several times, and I didn't know when it was written. I simply didn't want to think about the rest and read on.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, so sweet! The front is a bit confusing, but by Chapter 66 you can basically understand the previous content, it's really awesome! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The setting and writing are very good, especially the time and narration. Few authors can write "the mutual influence of the past and the future" well. Just because they are afraid of writing poorly, there are very few novels with similar themes. Overall, the plot is too fast and deviates a lot from the original settings (of course, this is good and bad). There are also shortcomings 1. Character growth speed and early emotional lines of the male and female protagonists. Personally, I feel that there could be more emotional interaction in the early stage, and there could also be more plots describing Hermione's improvement in strength. Although there are ways to improve Hermione's strength, it still feels too fast and abrupt. 2. Although there is emotional foreshadowing at the beginning, she confessed her love in her twenties or thirties. Although Hermione is a lion, she will be impulsive and courageous, but she will not fall in love and confess her love soon after they met (especially if the other person's identity is questionable) It might be better if the pace was slower, there was more interaction or the confession plot was pushed back. 3. Some of the supporting characters and the plot are a bit too OOC. I don't know if it's meant to be a joke or to give readers a little joy, but it feels very abrupt, like an atmosphere was brewing but was broken. 4. There is another small problem (it may not be a problem in the eyes of others). Although the book is unfolded from the perspective of the male protagonist, I feel that the development of the story and the growth of the character are more based on Hermione. This gives people the illusion that Hermione is the protagonist in the book. As for the confusing timeline, this type of continuous narration has been seen in a movie before. Whether it is a novel or a movie, it will feel confusing at first, but the timeline will definitely be explained to you later on, so you can read with confidence, at least you will understand it later. That's all for now. The main text gives a better impression than the introduction. It's just that the title of the article is a bit difficult to find. It might be easier to find it if you bring HP or something. —————— I wonder if the author will update it in the future? Several of the books I have been following recently are in the palace [crying]

The writing is really good, but I can't understand the middle part of it (Hermione travels through time and space), but the author will fill in the holes later. Overall, it's good, mainly because they are quite sweet [Adoration]

It's full of reversals and knives. The author's writing is very good, very good, very good. His level of ambush writing has become extremely proficient. The large number of reversals is mind-boggling. It's worth reading.

I thought it was quite an ordinary book, but I didn't expect the author to be quite good at writing. It's very good.

The combination of knife and honey is what life is like. Come on, author.

It's very beautiful. I can only say that this is magic. The author captured the elements of the time turner in the original work and restored the beauty of the magical world. The powerful version of Voldemort and Dumbledore has been patched, but not overdone. I am looking forward to the subsequent development.

It's a very powerful idea in the fanfic. At first I didn't really understand why the two met each other like before. It progressed so fast. It turned out that the hole was dug by the author, and it was indeed filled in later. It is also very creative. It is indeed the ideal time of Harry Potter's magic [Thinking][Thinking]

It's good, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch. In fact, the story can be stopped after the Supreme Cup takes care of Death. The war between wizards and Muggles later, and the power of fate are completely unnecessary. The emotional foreshadowing of Hermione and Steer in the early stage is also a bit short. It is a good thing that the plot is compact, but it should also be appropriately relaxed.

Although I don't know why this book has such a low rating, as long as you really read it, you will find that this is a good book. Suffering and separation are for a better reunion. This book is not sharp, but still very warm.

The idea is bold, at least I like it [crying] The rating is so low

Judging from this idea and pretty good logic, it deserves a five-star rating. Since characterization was largely avoided, I couldn't see clearly the writing skills in this area, especially for some of the other supporting characters. The excitement of the plot seems to be limited. But I still hope you can do better. My sincere blessings in the name of Merlin Stockings.

How to say this novel. I was really confused when I read it. But it's really well written. Reading your novel is killing my brain cells every minute.

It's really good to watch, the timeline is a bit messy, but this is the best HP fanfic I've ever seen besides Lun Da Sword.

I finished reading it in one afternoon. I felt so good that I went to school.

It's very interesting, although I didn't understand everything, but I feel like crying [Like] [Eat melon]

The best Harry fanfic I have ever seen

I haven't seen such interesting fanfic in a long time. The setting and writing are both good. Thank you to the author.

The author is quite suitable for writing funny novels, and the writing style is just right. I really hope the author will consider it. I also like to read this book.

I think it's one of the best fanfics about Tomato [Thinking][Thinking]

Very, very good. The author's ideas are unique and well supported by his writing style. It is undoubtedly good.