Yaoshou***********

The author went round and round and still wrote this type of thing.

Come on, update quickly. Although it is a bit similar to the previous novel, even the surname has not been changed, whether it is the apprentice's surname or the master's surname, it is still very interesting. The speed is too fast, I want to lower the rating

It's so good-looking that it could turn into maggots on the bed. Driving invisibly, racing in front of readers' faces

Author, the Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. Assuming that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type approximately 134 words per minute. Since you are not the record holder, we will calculate it as 50 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is /\ hour, and you spend about two hours eating every day, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, a moment of exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour to fish in a daze, you should have nine hours to type. Based on 2000 words per chapter, there should be 18 chapters, but you only put so little content every day. What's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this, so the author quickly got up to code!

Just keep it for now, it's not enough to watch, it really doesn't suit me [angry] [angry] [angry] Don't stop updating it! I'm afraid that if I keep it up, I'll stop updating it, and I'll feel uncomfortable [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Looks good, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

It still feels better than the previous one. No matter how similar it is to wearing a book, it's not what the heroine originally liked. It looks weird. The plot this time is good.

Not bad, but love brain is really scary

I just want to ask you, do you want to accept the cows? Of course, I personally think it is better to accept them. After all, you wrote that you like the protagonist so much. If you confiscate them later, it will be very difficult.

It's really good. The overall reading is very emotional, unlike some online articles where the description of emotions is relatively dry. In fact, there is no need to overemphasize the heroine's love brain in the article. This trait can be seen through the heroine's behavior and psychology. If one thing appears too many times, it will inevitably become boring. At present, I still like the characters of the two heroines, the contrast is very vivid. The eldest disciple was like a wolf in sheep's clothing. Thinking of the clear and obscene look in her eyes, he couldn't help but tease her. The second apprentice has a contradictory personality and feels like a pure arrogant person. This novel deserves five stars, at least it is better written than most of Tomato's novels. But I personally think there is an obvious flaw. There are some "unnecessary" character interactions interspersed throughout the article. I don't know whether the author did it intentionally or unintentionally, but this is all in the literature... The chapter weight is not enough. To be honest, I don't know if other readers are not interested in the heroines' bickering, but I found it a bit boring. Of course, the above is purely my personal opinion, and the author has his own plans.

Update quickly! The speed is so fast that it takes off! I mean, can the male protagonist not be so stupid? After all, as a time traveler, he has never eaten pork and never seen a pig run away. It is better to give him some emotional intelligence!

It's very interesting, but I don't know if the three apprentices are with the protagonist, and the senior sister. I think it would be good to accept them all, but it would be a bit toxic if the senior sister is not included. There are also three apprentices, since they have to make up for their past lives, it would be good to be together, and the readers will feel comfortable watching it.

Ah, this, this,,, what's wrong with me, I feel so much [laughing evilly], especially after reading too many novels, that I can no longer look directly at some words [face covering] But this book is really good, I like it [please read carefully]

Author, let me do the math for you. You code one word in two seconds, which is 1,800 in one hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for six hours, eat for one hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. The remaining 15 hours can code 27,000 words and a chapter of 3,000 words. This is almost 9 chapters in one day. By the way, I wish you a spring breeze and willow leaves in spring. The cooperation between heaven and earth creates a successful business in pairs. All your wishes come true and everything goes smoothly. Happy New Year, I wish to share this happiness with my colleagues every year. The singing and dancing of orioles brings wealth and treasures. Good luck, everything will be successful, everything will go well, and purple energy will come to your door. All goes well, prosperity and wealth. I wish you eternal youth and eternal joy! I am happy to have a bright future ahead and am willing to share this joy with my colleagues. May you be happy, refreshed and comfortable every day! I wish you all the best and the best! Your career is in the middle of the day and your body is as strong as a tiger. Prosperity, good health, and praying for peace. All is well and the auspicious stars are shining brightly. Successful career, blessing and joy. Everything goes well and everything goes well.

Not bad, I just want to know if the male protagonist will accept the senior sister. If not, it will be a bit poisonous.

Come on, no eunuchs ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Serious author. Don't care about other people's opinions. Everyone likes different genres. I really like the genre you write. I don't care about the writing style, I only care about the content. To be honest, it's just a novel. Why do you care so much?

Why do every book I read have such low ratings? Is it because I have withdrawn from the environment? [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

The early stage is very good, I like the Great Disciple very much, but the later stage... It's hard to describe in words... I gave five stars to let other readers see this review, but the actual rating is two stars.

Xiba, I've been waiting for 4 months. Where is the person?

I hope there are only three apprentices in the harem, otherwise I won't be able to pursue them.

Come on, the author is optimistic about you [sending heartfelt wishes]

Not bad, but the word count is a bit short

Brother, you won't run away and stop writing, right? [I'm about to cry]

The description of emotions in this book is very delicate. I feel that it is better emotionally than similar stories about rebirth and master-disciple. It is very comfortable. Especially the character of the second junior sister is very contradictory and cute. It's just that there are too few updates (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) However, the last few chapters have been a bit watery, or the pace has been slow. I don't know if the outline is not written well, but I hope to see better content sooner. What I like the most is the way the second junior sister in the front said, "It's just a few ounces of spare meat" while looking for ways to make her breasts bigger. She is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, a template for tsundere. The eldest sister's proud look is also very cute. And when the second junior sister feels her heart hurts, she feels it very much! Hope to see more complex sides of the characters. The eldest sister feels that the attributes of the devil have been reduced. In fact, the coldness of the "devil" can be appropriately revealed in certain places to create conflicts and cut readers 🔪, which can make the characters more emotionally rich. If possible, it would be better to add more psychological activities of the male protagonist, as well as some memory settings from the previous world line, to contrast the two lives. For example, I wrote before that the master seemed to have hallucinations and saw his eldest apprentice crying as he watched the master digging for sacred bones, and then he hugged the apprentice in this life and said he didn't want your sacred bones. This comparison seems very tense (it would be better if you could add a sentence like "I just want to see you grow up well" ヾ(´∀｀.ヾ)) 🔪🍬 Parallel, it is a good article. So come on, author, update quickly, even the production team won't take such a break. (ﾉ｀⊿´)ﾉ

Not bad, not bad, the type I like, but there are too few! ! ! ! The update is also slow! ! ! ! !

Car car (♡⌂♡) What a fast car.･ﾟﾟ･(／ω＼)･ﾟﾟ･.

Looks good, let me control the points

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A very nice book