Naruto: How to Lose When Kakashi Starts with Two Divine Powers?

It's a rare good book with a protagonist who has very upright views, values ​​his companions, and doesn't show arrogance towards the original characters just because he is a time traveler and knows the plot. It's still a single heroine, I love it. [Shy] The author has a very good understanding of the anime characters' mental journeys, personality traits, and the entire power system of Naruto. You will be an old Naruto fan at first glance. Just can you update it quickly! [Almost crying]

First of all, thank you all readers for taking the time to read this book. [Laughs] In fact, this is also the first time for the author to try writing online articles. So after a long period of single-machine writing in the early stage, I was very excited to finally see someone willing to read my work! Thanks again everyone! [Sending Hearts] In addition, it is precisely because the author is creating for the first time, so he lacks experience. Sometimes I touch the "toxic points" of some readers. I would like to apologize to these readers in advance. For some "poisonous points" that do not affect the normal development of the plot, I will try my best to modify them after readers and friends raise them. After all, I believe that everyone is willing to point out problems and hope that the book will become better. Finally, special thanks to the readers who are willing to read it carefully and give five-star praise. [Sending Hearts] To be honest, as a newcomer, you will encounter various problems while writing your first book. And your warm comments and recognition really provide me with a lot of motivation! [Laugh]

I personally feel very good. I have been looking for a Naruto novel about the story between Kakashi and Lin, and I finally found it. Come on, author [laughs] This book is very well written, with single female protagonists Kakashi and Rin. Obito's attitude is unwilling but still gives blessings. Kakashi has a system to know the plot. The biggest cheat is a copy of the system. Ninja, physical skills, and senjutsu can basically be learned after reading it once. However, this book is not a brainless novel. Kakashi is very strong but it takes time. In addition, in the early stage, Kakashi worshiped Tsunade as his master, and the senjutsu he learned was that of the first Hokage. The protagonist does not have lofty ideals, but is willing to sacrifice his life to protect the people around him. In addition, the author of this article is writing a novel for the first time, but the writing is good. If you think this outline attracts you, read it. If it doesn't, read other Naruto stories. I really like this novel, so I don't want to see any malicious negative comments. I will tell you the general plot here. I hope you can avoid lightning. I also hope you really find a novel you like. Don't leave bad words and leave with a pat on the back. Thank you.

I have read so many Naruto books, and they are relatively good. At least the combat power is not too outrageous.

I think this is the best Naruto story I have ever read😭 It must be five stars!

This book is really wonderful. As the introduction says, it makes up for a lot of regrets. It's very enjoyable. It's one of the few Naruto Kakashi fans. There is a system, but it only greatly increases the upper limit of the protagonist, not like it suddenly skyrockets. The protagonist's three views are very upright, the author is very active, the writing is reasonable and rigorous, and any mistakes must be corrected. Many places are also created based on the author's own imagination. I love this kind of author and this kind of book [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The writing is good, mainly because the understanding of Naruto is very good, and there are no plot points.

So pretty. This is one of the top books among Naruto fanfics, and the author has completely eliminated the regrets in the original work. If he hadn't finished it so quickly and then read it slowly, he would have finished it in one day. And the author is also very nice and cute. [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] (It makes me want to...) But the only drawback is that it is too short and not enough to watch. I didn't find what I thought was a poisonous point here. So I beg the author to update it soon. If I don't read it now, I feel uncomfortable all over, like thousands of ants eating my heart.

After reading a lot of comments, I feel that the author writes well and is very sincere. Yes, he is sincere. He takes every reader's comment seriously and explains some things carefully and patiently. It is very good and the author is very cute. (Although I didn't read the article very much) Support the author

It's rare to see such a Naruto story without any poisonous points. The author's basic skills are very good. The timeline, characters and personalities are all consistent with the original work. However, the story is not exciting enough, especially the Loulan story. I felt a little drowsy while reading it. But this book really doesn't have any shortcomings. Although it is not a masterpiece and lacks some amazing parts, it is still better than most Naruto books.

I have been reading this book for a long time, and this one is really good. It can be regarded as a small invincible style. The descriptions are still very delicate. I have read many chapters and there are no bad points. The author is still alive. The author will actively change the opinions raised by everyone. I just read this book and reviewed several authors who all read and liked it. This level of activity is very good ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨

It's very interesting. The author is simply a master of realizing dreams. The content is also very detailed. It's not Yun. Moreover, the author is very active. He likes and comments on basically every message [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It's good to read. I've read so many Naruto stories. This one is not as mindless as the opening with millions of chakras, or the opening of the Mangekyō Sharingan. Instead, it gives readers a new protagonist from a new perspective. It keeps working hard and finally achieves it step by step in a new way.

Just because the author's plot is not sluggish at all and can be written to make up for regrets, it must be praised by five stars, and the characters are all in place, most of them make sense logically, and it is very active. Really, this book is a pleasure for me to read. It still didn't collapse in the later stages. Although the author brought in a lot of private goods (Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba), it overall did not affect the development of the plot, and basically people who have never seen it can understand it. The name of the protagonist's move is also the same, and even contains the element of super cannon [face covering]

The single female protagonist is very well written, come on! ! !

The protagonist of this book is actually the Hokage Dream Master, which makes up for the tragic plot of many tragic characters in the original book, and it basically becomes a family fun later on. Personally, I feel that the early stages of this book are obviously better than the middle and later stages. The cooperation with teammates, descriptions of fights, and the bonds between several people are more detailed in the early stages when you are not invincible. After Obito formed a new Koyuki CP, it was obvious that the protagonist was either realizing his dream or on the way to realize it. As a result, except for Obito who could follow him on missions and mess around in the scene, Rin (who was not strong enough) and Minato (who was busy with the Hokage's affairs) were basically marginalized.

Just like the original film, it gives people an immersive feeling. Use appropriate expressions to make people feel very cute. Not many people write about Kakashi now. I hope the author can give this book a happy ending. A good book doesn't just have a lot of pages, it just doesn't deviate from the topic. I won't urge you to update slowly, just wait for the excitement to continue~ This book has been updated a lot. It's great that the author can keep it up~ I wish the author good health and all the best! [Love][love][love] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Recommend [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

It's a pretty good Naruto novel. But there are also some unreasonable places. For example, Minato, the Flying Thunder God, did it as soon as he said so. Isn't this from the Sealed Book? You have to at least ask the Hokage before handing it over. But it's harmless.

I think it's okay, it's pretty good-looking and the heroine is Lin. There are very few novels with Lin as the heroine in Tomato. I hope the author can work harder and hope you can do better (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] This is the best Naruto fan novel I have read so far. I highly recommend [Shy][Shy]. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update soon! [Top post][Top post]

How to say it! Not bad! The plot arrangement and reading flow of the novel are considered to be excellent on Tomato, but the character design of Kakashi deviates greatly from the original work, which may be a bit difficult for "fans" to accept! After all, Kakashi's character here is not as cold, sultry, and occasionally shady as the original one. Instead, he is a "traveler" who wears Kakashi's face! In terms of personality, he is a bit closer to Obito. He prefers "'hehe' and then touching his head and smiling silly"! It is easy for me to feel that he was smart at first, but when he suddenly laughed, he became stupid again! Finally, I want to say something: It would make sense if this character was applied to Obito, because time traveler + Obito, then it gives me the feeling that this character is "smart, a little silly, but not stupid"! Finally, I wish the author: I will get more and more inspiration for writing, and the more I write, the better the book will be. Come on! [Praise]

It's pretty good, it makes up for most of the regrets, it's invincible at the beginning, and its strength gradually develops. When I first watched Naruto, I really liked Rin who lived in my memory. The emotional line in this book was also well written, but some of the plot descriptions were flawed.

The writing is very good and the plot is very reasonable. It's just a long-standing problem of hot-blooded series. The combat power collapses in the later stage. In fact, there is no problem. Come on, author. But the writing still needs to be strengthened. Return in triumph is really a bad sentence [face covering] Triumph means return in victory. I also hope that it fits the background of the book. In the early stage, the character description and language are very normal. Later, it becomes normal domestic and diplomatic idioms. It is a bit easy to make dramas, but overall, I personally think that this is also a work at the forefront of Naruto fan fiction. I hope the author will write higher quality books after this book [Like]

The writing is very good, it's like seeing Naruto in another situation. I just hope the author can stick to it and not end it. There are no other shortcomings. Come on, author [like][like][like]

On my knees, to be honest, I really enjoyed watching it. The storyline is reasonable and compact. Chapter after chapter makes people addicted to read. The characterization is very good and more in line with the original work.

Please encourage me, the writing is pretty good. Books written by women are different, with delicate emotions and full of details. Maybe it's because I'm an old bookworm that I can't stand the rhythm of the plot, but the writing is indeed good, and the writing style is okay and there is still a lot of room for improvement. After all, this is the author's first book, so keep up the good work! The details of the environment are beautifully described, with a sense of imagery, and the emotions are vivid without being stiff or artificial. Maybe female authors are more subtle. I feel like I would be good at writing romance novels.

When I clicked on the book review, I wanted to know how long I had been reading it. The book was really well written and the Naruto novel didn't make me feel uncomfortable. The author is a newbie, so come on! I will comment again after I see this update, but I am usually a bit of a follower [blowing kiss] Seeing this, I want to say that you, the author, are the MVP (Bushi) dream master [almost crying]. The plot is novel and interesting, and there is nothing poisonous about it. I love you to death, okay😘＾3＾After watching my time, do you really love the author? [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts](Look how long I have been reading [Crying][Crying][Crying] No one has read this book and it feels so bad╯╰

I've seen it all and it's quite to my liking. I'd like to give you five stars for encouragement [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The best Naruto novel I have read so far

It's a very good book with good characters and plots, but it's just too short to read. Okay, okay, okay. One thing I'm confused about is why did the Kumo ninja attack the Sand ninja around Chapter 30? He Tuha? And with the Fire Nation in the middle, did he cross the sea? In the Third Ninja War, didn't the Sand Ninja attack Konoha first?