A Few Things That Happened After the Time Traveler Came to the Demon Realm

How should I put it? The author may think the writing style is a bit young, but I like this kind of story. This kind of protagonist is fun and cute, not a serious and indifferent novel without cp. And I am a super protagonist lover, so I hope that all good things belong to the protagonist. There are also various settings written that just hit my heart, but I didn't expect that I am just a practitioner, and it will be finished in more than a hundred chapters. The female character, the Insect King, is also well written. Except for the female character in the team whose name is "Xiao", the other characters feel a bit stereotyped. You can write about other characters, such as gentleness, cuteness, and stability. You don't have to write a lot of descriptions, as long as they appear in two or three sentences.

It's a really good book. Although it has strayed away from the so-called first-person format in the later stage, it is still very funny and makes me laugh. I am not in a good mental state recently. This book can be said to have brought me great happiness. It is funny and a little confusing. Come on, big brother. As for the logic problems in the book, I really didn't think much about it. After all, it's just a casual and funny article, so it doesn't need to be so serious.

It doesn't have any awkward plot points, and it doesn't have a sequel. These two points can already kill most of Tomato's articles in an instant. Although it is a chronicle, it is quite interesting to read, and the plot is compact and not boring. Several "fellows" each have their own characteristics. The settings of the brave man and the devil seem to be bad, but there seems to be a hidden secret. Anyway, looking forward to the follow-up

I like it very much, I like the writing style very much, I like the protagonist's light-hearted complaining and the plot, I hope it can maintain this quality, the plot is also very smooth, the only problem is that the wife is too short! ! ! It's easy to be fattened up and read again.

It looks good, it looks good, it's very good. It's a rare good story written by Tomato. The male protagonist is very good. He doesn't kill people or set fire, nor is he a virgin all day long. The characters have a very good sense of proportion and are very cute. The charming male protagonist, all the members have single arrows. It feels great. It slowly upgrades to fight monsters like a traditional Western fantasy novel. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good. It is a masterpiece. I feel that if you can open comics and animations, it will be very good.

I have read a few chapters so far, and they are quite good. It is relaxed and harmonious, and very interesting. Especially the fact that there is no cp and no harem (many male authors like to have harems). I really hope that the plot will not collapse in the later stage.

It's very beautiful, and it also has a little bump [to send my heart] (can I bump it? Big)

I've finished reading it. It's very interesting. This book is different from many otherworld novels on 🍅. I've read too many cool novels in Tomato. This is the first time I'm satisfied with it. It doesn't have the plot that makes me want to break the castle from time to time. It has awkward and weak dialogues, and there are no weak characters. It's very readable. I love some of Tomato's 9 A story with more points is better than many (personal understanding). The overall direction of the plot is happy and satisfying, the pace is not sloppy, and the ending is not abrupt or ambiguous. It basically fills in all the holes that can be filled. Personally, I like this book very much. After all, there are not many books in 🍅 that can see such a normal and humorous ending.

A very favorite book! It didn't say it was about a harem, or a cliché about awesome people, it was a very everyday book. Anyway, it was just like finding a light novel among a pile of messy excrement. I was very happy [full] and found this book because I have been under a lot of pressure recently. I suddenly saw it. This book is really suitable to kill some time! It's just too short, but seeing as the author seems to be a teacher, I can understand! Please be sure to update it carefully! Love love love [full] [full] I feel like I am watching a Japanese comic and traveling through another world. Come on.

This book is really good. I have a strange taste in reading and am very picky. There are many books on the bookshelf, and most of them can't be read after reading the beginning. I spent a whole day on this book, and I really couldn't stop. I had doubts when I saw the title of the book, a running account? What kind of running account? Can it look good? But as long as you are willing to click on it, you will find that you can't stop at all. The transition between first person and third person is also very natural and will not give people a sense of separation. The story is also well written, the world view is grand, the plots are layered, and it has a kind of beauty that no tomato can match. I paid a lump sum for this five-star review

Five stars for you. I like your way of switching between the first person and other perspectives. It's more natural and has the feel of a running account. This semi-diary mode makes me feel very comfortable to read on. [Sending my heart]

This novel is so good, I'm going crazy! ! I want to recommend it to my classmates! ! ![][]

It's very beautiful, very graphic, and feels like an anime.

So pretty! The pace is very relaxed, and it is currently the most enjoyable book I have read out of the three five-star ratings I have given on Tomato. There are only about a hundred of them at the moment, and I finished them in one day. I hope the author will continue writing and not let me keep reading to death. Five stars for you!

Although it may be a bit complicated because it mixes the first person and the third person, well, no one reads it? However, DaDa's writing is very good. Although DaDa originally wanted to write a running account, in order to keep the plot going, DaDa made a lot of changes and it is much better than my small piece of writing [face covering]

An introduction to the writing style, with no word count, it is definitely a clear cut in the author world. The plot is also quite interesting, not cliche. Anyway, it was fun and relaxing to watch. Good luck to the author💪

I like this kind of story, it feels like it has material for dreams again, and the heroine has no good reviews!

Very cute, love it! The style is quite relaxed, and the world view is also very attractive so far. I am very comfortable with the first person and the third person, and there seems to be no pressure. I really like this kind of running account with complaints, and it tells things very smoothly and naturally. I can't comment on the writing style, but for me, reading the author's big words is very relaxing and joyful, and there are pictures in my mind! Always supportive! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Like][Like][Like][Please update]

It's really touching. It's one of the few books that I can read to the end. I'll be really sad if it's taken off the shelves. Please tell us which platform the author will write on next. I really want to read your next book. [Sending my heart to you]

I really like this plot. The main character is happy and happy, and no one seems to dislike the main character. It unfolds easily, but there are a lot of pitfalls now, and I hope they can be filled in later.

I like it very much, I like the writing style very much, I like the protagonist's light-hearted complaining and the plot, I hope it can maintain this quality, the plot is also very smooth, the only problem is that the wife is too short! ! ! It's easy to be fattened up and read again.

Babies, I really like this novel. The protagonist is ordinary and extraordinary, with a delicate heart. He is an ordinary person, but he is able to overcome difficulties and do things that are impossible to do originally. However, he is a drop in a sea of ​​​​people but a single scoop. Compared with ordinary people, he is more like an extraordinary ordinary person. Although he is a human being, because he was in the devil camp from the beginning, he did not think about helping the kingdom. I like this very much! I like the author's writing style very much. It's a little funny but also a little warm, which makes people's eyes feel a little bitter when looking at it. Each character has its own personality and characteristics, and the creation is very vivid, as if they have stepped out of the text and become one after another spiritual, flesh-and-blood characters. They have their own stories. I can't say that they are living in the words, but I can only say that they are remembered with words. I really like Teacher Long! ! ! Teacher Long's character, Teacher Long's writing style, and the stories written by Teacher Long are always attractive. What is it? It was the wisp of breeze that I was deeply attracted to when I glanced at it inadvertently in the Ten Thousand Mountains. It was the brightest star in the sky when I lay down on the grass at night and looked at the sky. It was the tide that submerged the instep when I stepped on the wet sand. It was the beam that cut through the darkness, brought light and gave people warmth. It was the hope and vitality that left a long trace in my life.

I have read comics with similar themes, and I really like the tone. The combination of first-person and third-person perspectives is really suitable for this theme of survival under the devil's banner. Come on, don't be a pigeon

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking (⑉°з°)-♡ There's something wrong with the Tomato review. You'd better not keep taking them off the shelves. Uncle, I don't have many good-looking books left on my bookshelf. I finally fell in love with them. Why should I seal them? If your novel software works are not good enough, people can read them. You escaped.

It's really beautiful. The characters written by the author are very energetic. It makes me feel like Xiao Longzi is flashing around on vacation somewhere in that world. He works overtime from time to time and protects that world with his friends. If I'm lucky, maybe I can go and see that world with them.

Damn, it looks so good. Although I haven't watched it for a long time, I really think it looks good. It's too short. I'm looking forward to the author's next book. I really like the character of the protagonist. I really like watching this kind of other world. [Love][Love][Love][Love][Admiration][Admiration]

I've read a lot of book reviews, and the author's replies are so cute! The book is super beautiful! It has the feeling of being written casually but very stunningly (similar to what I usually do). I really like this tone! Although I haven't seen much,

I like, like, like, who knows, my family, it seems like it is daily to like this kind of adventure and combat, ah ah ah ah ah, who doesn't like logical articles [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Ah, after reading it, I feel very reluctant to leave it. I really like the characters here! ! I also really like the character of the protagonist! ! I really like this book! ! It's over too quickly! ! Do you have any recommendations of the same type...[Send heart][Send heart]

Really well written! I feel that every character is very distinctive, and it is very exciting to read, but it is a pity that it is too short. The war started too hastily and ended too hastily. It was so sad when the brave man died (but he was resurrected later). All in all, it is an excellent anecdote that is not so serious.