The Sword Immortal's Journey in Another World

The fighting plot of the five-star protagonist is a bit lacking and does not reflect the essence of cultivating immortals.

It's okay now, but there are no highlights. Although my understanding of this book is very shallow, I can make some suggestions. Judging from the title, the theme of this work should highlight the characteristics of the protagonist as a cultivator of immortality, and describe it in terms of clothing, items, personality, language, etc. ① From the analysis of the protagonist's items, it is highlighted that he does not bring anything. Personally, I think this is a failure (it is not a big problem). After all, bringing some specialties from the world of immortality can highlight the characteristics of the world of immortality to a greater extent and can collide with the magic theme of the moon world to create different sparks. Appropriately adding some magic weapons and mechanical gadgets will be the icing on the cake. ② From the perspective of appearance, the author did not provide an orderly and detailed description of the protagonist's face, demeanor, and clothing. If some appropriate descriptions were added, would it improve the reader's reading experience? ③My personal suggestion is to introduce some classical Chinese and ancient poems to improve the protagonist's cultivation. Although the protagonist is set as a young man who has been in seclusion for two hundred years, after reading the book for such a long time, he should be somewhat settled\( ͯω ͯ)/ ④ You can also add some battle scenes appropriately. Of course, this depends on the author's own performance. In fact, it is also good to write about daily life. I still like this book very much. There are some similar books on Tomato, but most of them are discontinued. I hope the author can continue to work hard. These suggestions are not criticisms, but just some thoughts after reading them.

The protagonist is the kind of person who is very talented. He has never gone out to fight with anyone in seclusion in the sect. His adaptability and vigilance are extremely low. In the world of immortality, he is the kind of person who has strong cultivation but has not kept up with his character.

The protagonist is so kind, as kind as a fool.

This is one of the most well-written books I have seen so far. The material selection is also very good. It breaks the tradition. The protagonists, supporting characters and villains are all intelligent, which truly respects the readers. Although it has been blocked due to social environment, I will still look forward to other new books by the author. Come on!

Come on! If you write this down, it will become popular

I've read a few chapters and it's very interesting. This will happen if you keep in retreat.

In fact, it should be five stars. I think this is really good, great, and it belongs to a series that is both good and not bad. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist's combat power is too low, which is a bit sorry for this level. But, this is acceptable for individual books.

Are these lich rules too simple? 1. Magic is infinite. Does the author know what infinity is? It is infinite and can continuously release magic. Countless dragon tooth soldiers can destroy the universe, right? 2. Is it easy to gather unlimited magic power and destroy the planet with one blow? 3. It's always the rule. Isn't it too easy to become a lich? Are all the creations of gods used? 4. There are also rules that I am really speechless about. The protagonist is already beating the gods and has not yet understood the rules! The Holy Grail spirit didn't understand the rules either. A lich, a piece of garbage under a god, had rules instead, and was speechless. So speechless 5. This is to casually strengthen the heroine. Later, I must want to make the heroine a lich immortal and become a being that only the hero can kill! Because only the protagonist can change the rules of immortality, and then the heroine can wander around as she wants, while others pursue the immortality that cannot be achieved for thousands of years, and are obtained by the heroine so hastily. I can only say that this is the treatment of the heroine.

It looks good, don't ask, just take a look.