Pirates: Start by Watching the Olympics

Why is this such a mess? The previous article about watching movies is quite good. If the author wants to write about other content, he can just open another book.

I was persuaded to quit after reading Chapter 18. I was quite moved at the beginning and became more and more confused after reading it😮

Why did you write it and write it, and it turned out to be an online game. You, the author, are so cruel [I almost cried]

It's quite interesting if you write it well, but the problem is that if you want to write a short story, you can write a short story. At least one story must be complete. None of your stories are complete, and you will be confused.

You can read it before Chapter 14, but you can skip it after Chapter 14

What are we talking about that starts with a remake?

The front is pretty good, but what are those written on the back?

The front is fine, but the back is particularly confusing.

Okay, good

The writing is too messy

The front is okay, but the writing on the back is too messy after the screen is shattered.

It was obviously good at the beginning, but the more I wrote, the more confusing it became. The story had no coherence at all. It was just a blur.

The subject matter of this novel is very good, but I don't understand why it becomes more and more confusing later on.

Well written but messy

Can't understand the back

The story is too complicated and messy, without any completeness

No idea. . .