I, a Scrap of the Plot, the Little Pride of the Hehuan Sect

The subject matter is novel. To be honest, when I clicked on the name, I actually wanted to read a novel about love, love, and love, but the author gave me a different surprise. He writes about love but also about scenery. Not everyone in the profile is a male protagonist, but everyone is a protagonist. Maybe? This is my expectation. I hope the author writes better and better. If we open up the layout and write well, it will definitely become popular [laughing]

Not bad, not bad~ The few books on immortality I have read recently have their own characteristics. This one is very good. Does the author have a cp for the heroine?

It's super good-looking. I wasn't very interested when I saw the title of the book. I thought it was a comedy about cultivating immortality with poor writing (after all, there are many articles written by novices on Tomato), but I never expected it! It is a serious novel with a very smooth plot logic! I really like the character of the heroine and other characters, it has greatly saved my book drought! ! ! I wanted to read DaDa's other articles but found they weren't available! Faster, faster, more, I want to finish eating [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Like it very much! ! I feel that the author is really good at character creation. The image of each male protagonist is three-dimensional and vivid. I hope that I can open a 1v1 episode in the future, otherwise I will really feel sorry for the other male protagonists [crying][crying][crying]

Very good, the heroine is really a mudslide, let's start a harem! I'm looking forward to it and hope the author will finish it soon! No matter how fast I move, I still can't see enough.

I was originally attracted by the subject matter, but I didn't expect that the author's writing style is very good and interesting. I really love it (thanks to this book, I have no passion for reading novels recently). This is my favorite in the first half of 23 years. Good cheers for the author.

It's super beautiful [crying] It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful book. It's very novel. It's different from most of the fast-traveling and time-traveling stories in Western Persimmon. There are also some brain-burning parts [sending my heart] It would be better if the author please express his gratitude [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The plot of this article is compact and connected, and the small characters are also portrayed with their own characteristics. Compared with most other immortal novels that all have cold heroines, I think this one is very interesting. The heroine's identity at the beginning and subsequent plots are very exciting. In the trial part of Hehuan, the heroine spent more than ten years using silk as a scroll and the thin water spiritual power in the air as ink to draw the people and scenery of the entire city. In the end, she and Lingling saved a city with their own strength. The two girls cuddled up to each other and fell in love [Adoration] I won't disclose the following plot. If you want to get into this book, you can refer to my review. I can't read the introduction for five chapters before deciding whether to follow it. I think this book deserves high praise. I hope there will be one or two more updates in the five days of May Day! Finally, I wish you a happy May Day in advance~ It's hard to code words [Love]

The author's writing style and the setting of the heroine are very to my liking. Although now I feel that the trend of the article is more comfortable without cp (I feel that the character of "Long Distance" is suitable for both sentimental and unintentional, and all the planning is just to go home), but since the author teacher has already planned it, just write it according to your ideas. I hope that after the final journey of "Qianfan", you will still not forget your true heart. There are only four beauties who need to collect the album. I feel that the main plot is not very clear. If I am practicing fairy tales, the heroine will not go to the stage of ascension in order to complete the task? Come on, author, I hope you can find my answer in your next writing.

My heartbeat started from the first chapter. The author's writing style is very natural, and the heroine's character is very lovable. When I encounter boring or unsightly chapters, I will jump to read or just abandon it, but this one did not skip a chapter. I really like it (this is my first time to write a review, and I have considered it for a long time. I really love it). I hope the author will continue to work hard. 🥰 ヾ(≧∪≦*)ノ

I love so much! Like it very much! Like it very much! Important things have been said three times. The plot is really good. I also like this idea of ​​collecting illustrations of beautiful men. The last time I liked it so much was the heroine who held the flower-picking technique! The young disciple of Hehuan Sect almost knocked down Master Xie Mei. Then he came to Wanjian Sect wearing a vest and met the cold-faced sword master. I loved him so much. Please come to the Shura Field more. Woo hoo, don't stop!

The novel is very fresh. Some of the author's sentences are relatively long, but it is easy to understand and has a very good taste. If it were not so long, it would be missing something. The author works very hard to update the book, it is fresh and lively, and he actively answers readers' questions. The heroine Xu Tuoyu is not silly Baitian, not Bailian, not green tea, not not the Holy Mother, she is independent and has her own opinion. Xu Tuotuo doesn't have any ideas about relationships, and the male protagonists who are yet to be determined don't have any ideas at the moment either. The most promising one is Wuyou, because now he is the only one who has shown his love for the heroine, and he is indeed beautiful and strong. No loss in investment, friendly comments, give this book a worthy evaluation, and refuse to slander the author with gossip.

Nice! ! The whole article is very much to my liking! The heroine will not be clever just because she knows the plot. Instead, she is very low-key, humble and down-to-earth. After knowing that she has done something wrong, she will apologize seriously instead of just making a few jokes and exposing it. Moreover, the character design written by the author is excellent, although it is not very novel, but everyone They all adhere to their own characters, and each character has his or her own opinion. The characters will not collapse due to the author's subjective point of view, so it is very interesting to watch, and it does not make people feel bored. In my opinion, the author's plot is relatively small, but the more I read, the more excited I am. In addition, the truth of what happened later is very shocking. The main character is caught off guard, but it does not make people feel too sudden. On the contrary, it is traceable and expected.

The heroine is smart and thoughtful, and the Wanjian Sect is more suitable than her original sect. The two sects have had a feud for a long time, which is quite interesting... The layout is reasonable, the logic is clear, and the writing style is grand. I am not satisfied after reading it, and I still want to read it...

The plot is quite novel and the heroine is well designed. I suggest that the heroine can be a heartthrob and the darling of the group, but can it not be written so that all the male characters fall in love with the heroine? You can like the heroine, you don't have to be in love all the time, you can also have family and friendship. Also, I think the transformation of the heroine master was too fast. He bewitched the original owner and ignored the original owner, but he regretted it not long after getting along with the heroine? What about his plan? I feel that the heroine master's change was a bit fast, and after reading it now, it gave me the feeling that all the male characters have a crush on or fell in love with the heroine. It's like the heroine has a harem. I prefer the one without CP and the heroine is uniquely beautiful. Even if there is CP, I hope the author can write a bigger picture and not limit it to small feelings.

It's pretty good. The author's writing is very good. The scenes and characters he describes make people feel immersed in it. The more you look at it, the sadder it becomes, which makes you feel a little irritable. The heroine's seemingly relaxed and warm daily life is just because the heroine herself is determined. In fact, no one except Ji Wuyou really loves her, and they are all taking advantage of her. It seemed that there was always excitement around her, but when I thought about it carefully, I realized that she had no relatives, no lover, no friends, and she felt an inexplicable sadness and despair. Finally, I hope she returns to modern times and finds happiness.

It's good to read (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The plot is so interesting, it breaks away from the original framework of cultivating immortals, and it's eye-catching. It's been a long time since I've seen such an interesting novel about cultivating immortals. Thank you for the author's support (ง •̀_•́)ง

The logic is clear, and each character is well-drawn. I originally thought there would be no male protagonist or multiple male protagonists, but I felt that the emotion of Ji Wuyou drinking the moon juice was too prominent, and the balance with the other male protagonists was broken. But it's not a big problem.

It's good-looking and I really like Master Fox. It's normal for him to develop that kind of personality after going through those things. After the heroine learned the truth, she still seemed a little afraid of him, but it was normal. She hoped that the master and the heroine would change and grow together. Love this pair! Come on, author, stay tuned for updates! [Shy]

The writing, plot, and characters are all very good, humorous and interesting, and there is no shortage of thought-provoking plots. Haha, it may be a matter of personal preference. I think the heroine is a bit ungrateful, a little naive and stubborn like a little girl. She may grow up later, but I still like stories with mature and intelligent heroines. It is still good. Personal tastes may differ.

After reading a few of them, I picked them up again in Shuhuang. After all, the heroine is more artistic and the writing style is very good. It may be a pseudo harem, collecting beauties. In the later stage, the relationship between the male supporting characters and the heroine has progressed quickly or I should say that the halo of the heroine is a little bigger, which gives me a feeling that it is more than enough. The heroine in Ten Thousand Flowers actually understands that she still has ambiguous behavior with all the male partners, but it is also consistent with the Hehuan sect. If you want to watch 1v1, you don't need to enter. There are a few The plot is all about depicting the heroine's weakness but her ability to save the day. It's a bit too strong. It's suitable for those who want to read the novel. There aren't too many twists and turns. I remember that Bai Jiaojiao once wrote about the revelation of her emotions towards her master. The previous life was when Bai Yueguang met her master for the first time. There are no other twists and turns around this point. Sometimes when I listen to the book, I wonder if I missed this plot, but the summary is that these supporting characters are somewhat whitewashed.

The plot is really good. How could the author come up with such a good plot? I was really shocked by the twist in the middle of the trial. The ending is also a masterpiece, it touches the soul directly, and I was immediately impressed by the story written by the author! I love every male protagonist's character so much. They are really a group of men with flesh and blood. Please give the author a big boost for the update. This is really the best novel I've read this summer!

It's very beautiful, the author's conception is very innovative, and the characters gradually become three-dimensional and vivid through the plot, from being so thin at the beginning. In fact, what touched me the most was the section in Jincheng. I always felt that the original one carried all the earthly connections and expectations that the entire Jincheng had placed on her. I like Wuyou very much, he is not the kind of thin character or the kind of diagram, he is the kind with many sides, like a real person. All in all, I really like this article by the author. Just an update by the way.

The subject matter is very novel and the writing style is also very good. I just feel that each character lacks a little bit of tail. How should I put it? Shen Qingyu, the first beauty in the Hehuan Sect, portrayed his beauty and character. She also had further conflicts with him in Fangshi, and got to know a character (the one who is not tall, I guess the heroine will make him taller ~). For Shen Qingyu, although the beauty illustrated book later gives a choice, but for For the subsequent development, would it be better to give a long-term clue? (You can give some explicit or hidden clues in the text, such as collecting certain important things of Shen Qingyu, or it is related to Shen Qingyu's background, or adding a story line about Shen Qingyu's childhood to lead to qualified collections.) Suddenly going down the mountain to collect the next character, I always feel that the transition is not perfect. The second character is Master Fox. I think there will definitely be a description later, so I don't worry about this at all. I don't know if the author has any reversal later on, but I suggest you try it out to harvest the readers' tears. A heroine who focuses on her career is great. I think the connection between Master Fox is quite deep, and I can keep the thread hidden until the finale. I kept following it, and I forgot whether it was in the illustrated book, but it seemed like it was. I don't know if the author has any ideas about the fox becoming smaller. I just want to write a contrasting cuteness. I think readers will like it very much. Who doesn't like when a cunning and clever big fox turns into a cute and ignorant little fox with moist eyes? At first I thought the little fox was the incarnation of the master, but now I write that the fox has transformed into another form, so it should be related to the master, but I think it's cool to write about the incarnation of the master + the contrast of cuteness! The third one is the sword master. As for the heroine getting the blood of her heart, I think it can be perfectly handled. You can want it or not. In fact, you can want it, and then confess it by the way, and then turn to Huan Zong to harvest it. It depends on how the author writes it. Then take a look at Shen Qingyu or Master Fox. I couldn't tell the difference between Ji Wuchu and Ji Wuyou among the previous characters. It was only at the end that I understood. Oh, I was so confused. Because the names are so similar, I wonder if other readers have this trouble. This illustration has been collected, but should there be some changes, such as more clues? In addition, I am confused as to what the final ending of the sword master and the heroine will be. However, I think the writing of the Inner Demon Sword Master is very good. Although it is included in the illustrated book, should the Sword Master be properly guided in the future? The fourth one is Buddha. The previous lines are laid out very well. What kind of sparks will arise between Buddha who knows the truth and the heroine who has "unintentional intentions"? (Rubbing hands secretly~eyes in anticipation) I think it would be more interesting to suddenly reveal his knowledge at the necessary moment and then be stunned by the heroine (rubbing hands) Okay, let's end it here. The Beauty Illustrated Book must have all kinds of beauties. One focus (bright line) I think is probably the occupation and personality of each character or the description of beauty. The other is probably the story, the intersection between the character and the heroine, and the joy or hatred each character brings to people. I think these are all good entry points for this novel. Harvest the largest number of readers, make each character come alive, and add a lively line to make it more popular among young people. Okay, I give full marks, the author is the best! ! ! Rubbing his hands secretly.

The writing style is very solid, and all the foreshadowings are taken back... It really surprised me. I thought it was just a routine and funny romance group favorite story, but it turned out to be a solid story telling, and I found a treasure! The interaction with the male characters is also very interesting and not greasy. It is a rare and good article about cultivating immortality that is rare in a century (no exaggeration)

I beg my wife to write a side story about "all" and watch the daily life of men competing for favor [crying]. The author's writing style is so good, it's not the kind of verbal writing, but the words and sentences are very profound. I like the heroine's growth step by step. She has the favor of heaven but there is no outrageous golden finger. It is also not as outrageous as the heroine who is a common female monk who becomes a monk halfway through studying fairy tales and is more outrageous than many big guys. Along the way, her mood improved, and she didn't care about writing about love. What she wanted in her heart was to wait until she became stronger before thinking about relationships. She didn't want the world to mention her name to think of the male protagonists, not because of herself. She has her own strengths, but she can't surpass other strong people with local roots. The heroine's strength lies in her heart, tolerance, understanding, and righteousness. I really like this kind of heroine

This book is very consistent with the portraits of cultivators. Xu Gaoyu is a firm Taoist, wise and courageous, Bai Jiaojiao is a crybaby but works hard to grow up, Qu Lianshu is a cunning fox master who protects his cubs, Ji Wuyou is a graceful Qinglian sword master, Wuyou is always by Xu Gaoyu's side and is good at cooking, Hei Zhi Zhuo Xin, who makes glutinous rice balls with sesame fillings, Shen Qingyu, who looks passionate in red, Jiang Yao, who has business acumen, Xuan Xiu, who is silly and greedy, Xu Qingyan, who is loyal and protective, and Ji Xunzhi, who dreams of becoming an immortal weapon, are just such a group of people who shine in their world.

The author's writing style is super good, the writing style is relaxed and interesting, and it progresses from the shallower to the deeper. The more you read, the more beautiful it is. The theme setting is also very novel, and the character creation is also very full. In general, you can not only hit the sweets, but also experience the joy of laughing like a pig in the middle of the night. All in all, it is a super smooth, super long-lasting, super invincible, and the best-looking novel in the universe! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's super good-looking. It's the novel I've always been pursuing. The heroine is capable and strong, and she's a growth-type heroine. The key is that every character is either in love with her or not, or it's just not interesting enough [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Do you have any other articles? It's not enough. It's not enough. [I'm about to cry]

It's really great [send heart][send heart][send heart] The characters in Da Da's works are so charming that people can't help but like them [Blow a kiss] "One thing, you can't generalize whether you like it or not. It's true that I don't like cooking, but it's also true that I like to see you eat the food I cook." "If you like it more than you don't like it, there is a need to do it." [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Who can not be touched by this? "The truth is often hidden in jokes." - Wuyou [Admiration] who takes the heroine's jokes seriously. "Now that you are opening your mouth to stop me, it's not Xu Yuanyou's fault, it's my fault. It's my inability to protect her that makes her suffer criticism." - The pure and sincere Sword Master with super upright views, who has no calculations about the heroine from beginning to end, and who is full of sincerity [sending heart] And Shen Qingyu who has been waiting for a hundred years [almost crying] The mysterious and reliable black-hearted sesame pecks the heart [blowing kiss] Qu Hu, who has a kind heart and has been imprisoned for thousands of years, feels very broken and has a tendency to self-destruct. He is also super cute from time to time [Admiration] Although he often wanted to destroy the Hehuan Sect before, ahem [laughing] The characters in Da Da's paintings are very three-dimensional and have complex personalities. It's awesome! ! The key is that everyone has their own personality charm. It's really hard not to like [adoration][adoration][adoration] Moreover, my brain is very big, and the twists and turns in the plot are unexpected but make sense when I think about it [Inquiry] From time to time, I feel like I need to burn the CPU [laughing] It feels great [laughing] Keep up the good work [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] (I am definitely not able to describe the characters in Dada's works clearly in just a few words. I just saw the deep impression in my mind now [shy]) Anyway, it's a blast [laughing]